SS- ONE NIGHT WITH THE ENEMY last chap pt-2 + epil

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

That was a good update 👏 Pia n Abhay now under the same roof where Abhay's dad had died? 😲 After reading the last part I am sure Pia had simply been in the wrong place in the wrong time. She is simply blaming herself for something she didn do n clearly Abhay too feels that. I am waiting for the next update to know what had actually happened provided Pia decides to speak up Pia's senses r already wrecking havoc on her n seeing Abhay draped in just a towel is no where helpful ☺️ 🤣 Continue soon 😃

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jack-12

@jack-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

thanks a lot guyz. Ut comments mean a lot. Thanks a ton:D

sorry nothing major about abhay's dad will be reveilled at the moment:D that will be during the end update. But yeah there will be a shocking portion in the next chapter which i'll update tom or sunday.

I see that the noof ppl following/ liking my ss have decresaed.

Please let me know if the story or writing is bad. Criticism is highly welcomed.

just another chap, then i promise i'll improove on the plot n writing, cause this is something i wrote when i was nt in a mood.

Thanks again fr ur love

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

oh abhay in towel this remind me the washrom scean of pkyek... remember after fight competition with kabir in college fete... nice update...

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Awesome update. I guess Piya meant to say it was her fault or something... I can't believe she killed him.

PS. My like isnt working.

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diana

@vampireking

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

update soon i cant wait to read the other chappy its awesome i am loving it 😳!!!plz plz plz update soon!!!the way you express piya and abhay feeling is just mindblowing !!!👏

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didlr

@didlr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

that was a great update, specially abhay's lines regarding the chauffeur thing:D

abhay in towel, god i wish i cld c him again:D

Great update

Thanks fr pm:D

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Bisweswar

@Bisweswar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Yaar logo ko comment karne ke liye thodasa time do. Btw amazing updt. I am literally blushing imagining abhay in towel.i can understand piyas situation . U know even i cant believe that piya killed chand. Pls updt soon . Cant wait .

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jack-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

thanks a lot guys, I'm glad u liked it, though it was patheic in writing:D

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jack-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Bisweswar
Yaar logo ko comment karne ke liye thodasa time do. Btw amazing updt. I am literally blushing imagining abhay in towel.i can understand piyas situation . U know even i cant believe that piya killed chand. Pls updt soon . Cant wait .

Haha thanks

N yeah i think i shld give more tym:D