AbhIyaAT#137 Zinda Rehti Hain AbhYa's Mohabbatein - Page 87

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Tanzie I am trying trying but nothing is coming out well I just want to be done with this OS 😭 I have never broken my head so much for another FF or SS. I shdn have tried this for an OS n I was thinking I shall post it in one go when I started it 😕

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Yep defo 😃 Her characterisation was excellent esp Anushka n Zeenia. The way she portrayed them was brilliant n Abheer too was intriguing though I havent read much of his part till now. I think in terms of characterisation in supernaturals, I like Poco's n Till The End of Time. Both r hollywood standard for me.

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

abheer is bloody brilliant in my words n yes anushka n zeenia are too good. tht story would be one hell of a show. Poco knows so well what a GREY character really is. i wish sigh

are you telling my FF is hollywood standard 😲 oh now common that was too mch 🥱 the thing which im really proud of in till the end is till now how i wrote Mohini's character n about the supernatural court. Mohini is till date my best grey character i have written. 😳

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Yep for me characterisation in TEOT is brilliant. Mohini defo but even Peehu. Even though her role was short u portrayed her brilliantly 👏 Esp Aryan Peehu relationship. It was the most beautiful relation depicted in that FF n yes its more than Abhiya for me n I am saying this though I vouched for Aryan Alina in that FF n mind u I still do 😆 Even Abhay's dark phase was shown brilliantly. Poco has her own style n so do u. Even with simple words u can draw out the deepest of deep emotions n I will be honest with u. I am not saying this just coz ur my friend. When it comes to emotions, ur in a league of ur own. Even a mundane line in ur story will have a deep meaning to it. No wonder I write essays on ur updates coz ur writings make me think a lot.

I so wish I could write emotional stuff even 10% as good as u.