New Abhiya SS-The last Confidante.Updtd Pg-19,Feb-2nd - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

<font color="#0000ff" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Indu ur answering questions or leaving more behind? 😆 I guess for once am enjoying this...keeping u wondering fr the first time...😆
But well tats good for me coz I love to guess anyways 😉In the beginning we see Rachel and Abhay discussing abt a deal being cancelled coz of a murder n could it be the one that happened in the first update? 😕And also they will discuss abt a 3rd person. Initially my first thought it was Rachel's boyfriend but then I thought y will he have any objection to wat Abhay does? Then I thought maybe its their brother 😕and my mind flew to Adrian 🤣 But I am certain I might be wrong on both accounts here.All I can say is keep guessing...😛😆
Then comes the 'Doctor' who is Adrian's dad n looks like he is the Secret Nemesis. The guy who defied Adrian's dad defo spells trouble n for that matter Adrian's dad too you are right about that!
Wat task was he talking abt? 😕And Adrian left Zurich is it? yep. Is he going to NYC? Pia is abt to elope n I am guessing watever she saw wasn disturbing in the sense she shd have been terrified rather than being curious n here its the latter. Whom did she text btw? 😕 you will know that in the next updt. 😉
And I am fine with Abhiya meeting after a couple updates provided I get some answers first 😛Give some answers n some more questions later 😉 Patience my dear...patience! 😆😉
Good going Indu 👏Looking forward to reading the next chapter 😃Bring it on 👍🏼 Thanks for being my reader. I will try updating soon! 😳 you know my time issues..how badly I want to updt..but..I have no choice.
and thanks again... 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

thanks shreya. Your views are very helpfull,they always bring important parts to my view.
Dear for that u have to wait nt long bt just a little more. Adrian? mm..I'm glad to knw u are liking him.😳umm..i havnt thot abt anyone as such yet. 😕 bt You can say I did rather like the character to have an image of its own.😉



Cool! When are you updating?
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Cool! When are you updating?

Hey shreya! soon...very soon! maybe this sunday..
and good to see someone is interested .. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

Wow seriously this is indeed a story full of suspense , horror , and thriller ⭐️ Yes it has thriller- at least i'm trying to make it so--😆but my intention certainly isn't to make you guys afraid! 😆

Iam not exxagerating but u are really an amazing writer 👏, the best things i love in ur writings 😳 are the use of different words 😉 which helps me academically too 😆😆 thanks a lot dear.😊 i'm really glad to know u'r enjoying this. 😳



The chapter was really awesome and u have also disclosed many suspense but simultaneously created new ones too di 😲 .
that's my intention..to create more...😉 😆
And honestly i felt like yet after 3 chapters we havent been introduced by all the characters 🤔 , but that is what u want to do , right to keep us in breathtaking suspense 😆😆 yep! 😉

Now , who is Adrians father what does he do exactly , who are those 17 men including adrians father i.e their supreme ' the doctor '🤔 . why was adrian so excited after receiving that mysterious call and who the caller was 😲? and about whom maria had to find all details as ordered to her by adrian . among the 17 who are keith and fredo ?😛

What happened in the raichands family 😲, why rachel distaste her mother so much 😲 and when are u going to introduce her in ur story 😉 very soon!
, how did mr. raichand died , was he murdered ?🤔good question! u will soon find out.
who is john , is he a mere employee ? and who was '' HE '' they both were talking about ? that too u will know.

Who was the man who got a deep wound in his left arm 😵 , he was missing in 3rd chapter ?😭who was his doctor frnd ? 😲 did he too have a specific role in the story ?😉 who are the people wandering to kill him ?
he will be there in the next chapter. rest of the things will be disclosed gradually.😉

where did pia is panning to elope 😲 , whom did she call 😕 , what was the incident she was talking about ? 😲 that is a mystery for the time being n also the key to many answers.😉
why did her father made her live in zurich away from her family 😡 ?

reason-- there is a reason!
i am feeling my head spinning with all these questions hovering in my mind . plzzz di atleast reveal the link between all these characters 😛😉 .
i will.. soon.😛
and sorry for late but i will post the update soon. i am trying my best to make out time. and thanks again for such a long n lovely comment. 🤗

p.s. no worries for late dear😊 even i'm late.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was again brillient chapy with some mistries..ok.
Thanks geny.😳
Written well each scene..nice talk of bro-sis..they must b talking abt their bloved person fr whom they care..bt who? Thanks.ya they are talking about a very important person. Who u will know soon enough. 😊

tht murder n their deal..waiting mistry to unfold..then tht Doctor..jra akdu hai like his Son..Adrin..hum apne aap aaise akdu ki trf attract hote hai,kitne MOTION mai rehta-liked it.. i'm glad you liked him. 😆 bt abt whom he is talking,nt official info bt find wht is he?jra wrkholic hai,bt liked his part to read.

bechari Pia baby alone alone..gng out na..was she talking abt abhay?Kitna time hai Abhiya meeting main..pations rkhe hai Indu...jaldi milva do unhe..waiting ha..i know its long so.k.they will meet dear.thora sa aur sabar karo.if I dnt built the story now then u wnt like to read it further.😊BR]
update soon ..u said it tht u r gng to update it soon n m waiting fr first rain also...again nice n limit ka writtten..yr chotu update tha..ha.[/QUOTEsorry am late.i get less time these days.sorry. :( ya will updt first rain. But tora is unwell dear so we will update once she gets well. 😊
Once again thanks for commenting geny. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

nice update...!! well main almost 2 months bad comment kr rai hun...and I dont wanna comment like that...maine 2 se 3 bar padha bt samajh nai aya...😭 mere liye to ye kisi mystry se cum nai😆

ohh..which part u didnot understand dear? Please tell me..I will explain it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will updt within day or two.thanks for reading. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for reading dear. :)


Originally posted by: devilish-grin

awesome update...thanx for pm😳

Thanks a lot for reading. You are welcome. 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
w8ng for the update dear
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