Abhiya SS: Mushkil Pyaar Note on pg 22

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ameena671

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

wow nice update loved it thank you for pm.

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

wow great story plz update soon
i can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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megha sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

fab update. M luvin this pia...tough & it would be grt to see as to how abhay would manage her. M curious to know who is the stranger guarding pia.

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Charlotte

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Interetsing please pm me. sarafina i loved the name. and i loved the book too Beautiful creatures. Im glad u used the name here. though your story is completely different but glad to see the name here. it was my favorite name in the book 😃

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Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

superb update

Piya has super natural powers

thanks for pm

interesting precap

continue soon

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Julie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

I LOVE your story!!!

First I have to say, that a lot of what you have written is what I always wanted to see happen on the show.

I always thought Piya forgave Abhay way too quickly for the amnesia thing. And as forgiving as Piya is, I could never accept that she forgave her father and went to live with them. That was wayyy to fast!

Piya is a witch??? GOOD! I never thought they should have made Alina a witch. It would have been better, as your writing shows, that Piya as a witch is a much better choice.

I am surprised by the entrance of Piya's step brother. I know he is the oldest but honestly, he acts like a 5 year old brat! Jerk! hate him.

What's her name??? Misha's mom ... well hate her too!

Panchi wondering if Piya really is a gold digger does not surprise me. that character never had a working brain.

(No offence to any performer! I am talking about characters only!!!)

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Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

awesome update
pia in peris & abhay also there in same apartment , not to forget abhay enter in pia home ,waiting for pia reaction
poor abhay really will do hard work to manofy pia ,
precap look good
Continue soon & pls pm me