Abhiya SS: Mushkil Pyaar Note on pg 22 - Page 11

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Chapter - 6

Piya: YOU !!!

Abhay smirks at piya n says hii baby

Piya: what the hell r u dng here?? get out

Abhay: never ever until you forgive me

Piya: that's not going to happen

Abhay: then i wont go anywhere

Piya: tell me one good reasan why should i forgive you

Abhay: Is the reason that i love you is not enough

Piya: No its not

Abhay(cupping her face with both hands): Piya i really love you

Piya: what is the guarantee that you won't leave alone like you did before when some or the other dangers come

Abhay: i am sorry for leaving you alone because i don't want to lose you tell me what you want me to do so i can have your forgiveness

Piya: I cant forgive you until you promise not to leave alone me again

Abhay: i promise whatever happens i wont leave you nor let you leave me so am i forgiven

Piya just nods n smiles

Abhay: i am sorry

Piya: its okay

Abhay makes sit in the chair in kitchen n asks what's next

Piya: i have a photoshot tomorrow n then in evening fashion show

Abhay: i don't like you doing it

Piya: Jealous raichand...piya teases him

Abhay leans towards her n says huskily very much n i don't like anyone seeing my girlfriend other than me

Piya: Oh really

Abhay: yes

Piya: will you be my date to the party tomorrow after the show

Abhay: ofcourse my lady

Piya: will you come to show tomorrow

Abhay: i am gng to follow you like a hawk

Piya: Why ??

Abhay: i can't trust anyone here with your protection

Piya: fine as you wish

Abhay: i love you

Piya: love you too...she never got the chance to say as he kissed her passionately n piya was shocked to react n stood like a statue not getting response from her he bites her lower lip n she gasps in pain n he plungs his tongue in her mouth tasting her every corner of her mouth n breaks after a long time n rests his forehead on hers n smiles looking at her

Dehradoon

Raichand Mansion

Haseena: chand abhay hasn't called till now

Chand: don't worry haseena piya n abhay will fine

Haseena: i hope so...

Dobriyal Mansion

Arnab's Pov
i dont knw where piya has gone its been 5 days i have to find her n get her back in this house before its too late

Madhu comes there n says have you got any news on piya

Arnab nods in negative

Madhu: we have to find her before its too late

Arnab: i know that madhu but she is missing

Madhu: we need to get the property papers signed by her otherwise the property wont belong to us because piya is now 24

Arnab: but she is missing n wht can we do abt it

Madhu: by the end this month we need find her n the papers signed by hook or crook...

Arnab: i will tell the inspector to make his search patrol more strong

Madhu could only nod

Paris
Piya's Apartment

Abhay n piya are in the living room sitting on the couch in each other arms

Abhay: after your show ends we're gng to back to dehradoon

Piya: i cant till the end of this month

Abhay: why can't you go

Piya: abhay in the eyes of the dobriyal's n the world i am 24 years n if the dobriyal gets the property papers signed by me it will belong to them which i dont want to happen the dead line is till the end of this month abhay

Abhay: Piya they will get the property only if u sign n also when you will be alone staying in hostel

Piya: i knw i am gng to stay in hostel

Abhay: who said that

Piya: what do you mean

Abhay: you're not stay in hostel

Piya: then where will stay

Abhay: In raichand mansion

Piya: are you mad abhay i can't stay there

Abhay: Yes you can n you're

Piya: what abt your parents n the society they will talk abt us

Abhay: Mom n dad doesn't have problem n i don't care about society n i knw you care abt it n soon we're getting engaged so no problem

Piya: But

Abhay: no ifs n buts

Piya: i cant win against you

Abhay: so u agree to stay in raichand mansion

Piya: yes

Abhay: now i can be with 24*7 n protect from supernatural danger n i can see you whenever i want even before engagement...

Piya: you're such despo to be with me

Abhay: oh really...tickles her

Piya: stop it abhay it tickles...ha..ha ..ha

Precap: Fashion Show + Interview
Back to dehradoon

The End
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Edited by AriyaLilyOrchid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh how I have missed Abhay and Piya!!! It has been too long !

Again, I have to write it, your version is so much better then what the writers gave us.

I am looking forward to seeing these two living together! Do vampire parents have rules????

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