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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: bellaaa

great update
ohh no piya came out from the house
poor professor died
i think now abhay will become evil something
cont soon



thnks...will continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
amazing update
jus hope abhay is fine and pia reaches there.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
nice update
OMG abhiya are in danger.hope both are safe.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: atul.488

nice update
OMG abhiya are in danger.hope both are safe.



their love will win surely
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

</div><div>jus hope abhay is fine and pia reaches there.



thnks for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
its really scary update
pia flew away from house & abhay is unconcious , but I'm feeling abhay is trap by witch , hope I'm wrong
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

its really scary update
pia flew away from house & abhay is unconcious , but I'm feeling abhay is trap by witch , hope I'm wrong
Continue soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5-

Hallo...!!..who..who is it??..
piya...!!
a...abhay!!...is it you??..
yes..
where r u??..pls come back abhay!!...
i..i cant piya!!...they trapped me!!..
abhay...r u ok??..where r u?
piya...they will kill me...i am scared...i need u..pls save me..
kahaan ho tum..??
old...old manali cave..
i m coming abhay...kuch nahi hoga tumhe!!...
piya..come quickly..i..i...lo
abhay...!!..abhay...!!..
the call disconnected suddenly...piya's was so scared after listening abhay's weak nd cold voice..piya ran for her destination..
piya ran inside the old manali cave...she called abhay's name again and again...but no...no one was their except the deep dark empty cave..she didn't loose hope..she continued to call his name..
piya...!!...his voice echoed through the dark cave...
piya turned around...no one was visible...
abhay..!!...where r u..!!...i m here!!..abhay...!!..piya called again..
piya...!!...
this time she saw a shadow figure in a distance...she ran and hugged the figure from behind..she was crying vigorously..
abhay...!!...kaha chale gaue the tum!!...i was so worried!!..pls dont leave me again...piya hugged the figure more closely...
no reply came..this silence made her a little uncomfortable...
she turned to see his face...
abhay...!!...a loud scream came out from her...
she saw abhay standing infront of her...but his face was deathly white...deep dark blood covered cut in his whole face as if some one has brutally digged knife in his face...his eyes were pale white without any orbs...blood flowing out from his eyes...
as if he was a walking dead...
who...who r u..where is abhay..??..piya jerked back and blabbered in fear..she was shaking...her skin was getting cold in fear...
piya...??..come...come near me...i m abhay...the walking deathly figure whispered in cold voice and forwarded towards piya...
dont...dont come near me...dont!!...abhay where r u...piya screamed and stepped backwards..her eyes welled up in tears..
i am abhay...come piya!!...come...he was very near to her...
i said dont come here...no...!!...piya felt this is the last moment of her life..death is near...
he was now one touch away from her...he started to forward his hand to touch her...piya's eyes widened..
suddenly her eye caught the sight of her right hand with the bracelet..she remembered professor gave her the bracelet..just before he can touch her face, she guarded herself with the her right hand..
his hand touched the bracelet and he screamed in pain...he jerked backward as his hand started to get burned...
she was horrorstuck as the heart aching sight caught her view...she started to run without glancing back...she ran and ran..
what...what have u done with her..??...abhay screamed and tried to move..but the blazing flames blocked his way...he was caged inside a fire circle...
tut tut tut!!...u foolish lover boy!!...its all ur fault ..piya is suffering because of you...i thought to give her a simple death...but ur idiotic tricks changed my decision..she has to suffer a lot abhay...a lot...the old woman laughed like a maniac..
no...!!...pls dont harm her...pls kill me but leave her...abhay begged
certainly!!...i will kill u for sure but before that i want u to witness piya's destruction..her pain and death...it will be a great pleasure...she smirked
what...what do u want...just tell me what do u want??..abhay screamed like a helpless lamb...
u want to know??..i will tell u soon...very soon..just let him come back...u will know everything..!!..she asserts coldly..
suddenly the walking dead figure appeared infront of them...he was still burning...his half body was burned..red flames covered the place...abhay was numb in fear..
the old witch ran towards the figure..
david!!..david...what happened my son...how did this happen..who did this...tell me..she cried..
mother!!...save me..that girl...she did this...save me..
the witch started to spell something creepy...she ran towards abhay and cut his wrist...abhay winced and screamed in pain...the witch took his blood and gave it to drink to her son...after drinking his blood the fire stopped abruptly...
i swear son...i swear i will kill that girl brutally...she tried to kill you..i will kill her two with my hands!!...the old witch voiced in rage...
no...mother...first i want her...i cant be alive again without drinking her blood...her blood will give me life again and this time without any death..
you will be alive again my son..you will have her soon..very soon...they laughed in unison..
no...i will not let you touch my piya..never...u rotten leech...i will finish you too...blv me...abhay promised to himself..
piya came to professors office to find some clue about abhay..she searched every where but nothing...suddenly a diary caught her attention...she immidiately took it and started to read it...it was about professor's research and some details...she found out an address without any one's name.it was circle marked specifically..she thought about searching there for abhay and professor...
she saw a photograph of jesus at the front wall...
god!!...pls...i dont wish for anything except abhay's safety...pls protect him..take my life but dont let any harmm touch him..pls..save my love..
she prayed for abhay's safety...her heart relaxed a little after praying...she got new hope to fight...
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Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
whoa its so horrible n creepy but i loved it continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: LilyOrchid

whoa its so horrible n creepy but i loved it continue soon

i got scared too after reading by myself...😕
Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago

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