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@archiesview

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#721

Loved this chapter and the previous one. Their love, the despair both of them feel as they think that the other doesn't feel that way was written so beautifully. Alas, both of them are so stubborn to open their hearts and let the other know of their true feelings. Add to the mix, their status as the teacher and student and as cousins 😔

Looking forward to the next chapter to see how their story will move forward.

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dowy

@dowy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#722

oops touching chapter it was whether it was in Dehradun or in Faye things were getting emotional. And poor Piya and Abhay they are suffering from their own hell. wishing to see them together soon. Radhika was a nice friend and Arjun shouldn't keep his hopes high otherwise he will be heartbroken and I seriously don't want that, how about you make Radhika and Arjun together both seems lonely in their life. well its just a suggestion. don't take it seriously I like the way this story is going on and why the chapter name is this? maybe because Abhiya were screaming at each other and piya was crying there too but why perfect storm...I don't know.

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Noor

@Abhiya-4ever

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#723

Oh emotional chap it was..
After previous chapter i was expecting some Abhiya romance bt u gave it a complete turn
Bt i think this was necessary

Piya misunderstood Abhay n i felt really bad for her
N when Abhay entered in Piya's room n their convo
I soo wish Abhay shut her up with a kiss
Bt noo he lost his temper n hurt her hurting himself more
Waiting to see them together again
Radhika is cute
Waiting for Abhay's reaction when Piya will gi with arjun
Bt i wish both cleared misunderstanding soon...

Amazing chapter Shreya
Updt as soon as possible..
waiting

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#724

woah awesome update i simply loved it Thanks for pm 😊 !! so Abhiya had a big misunderstanding ,fights and yah hurtful words were said to each other😒 they behaved all stupid specially piya she lost her thinking ability what she heard she thought it to be true dont know why she misunderstood what abhay meant she could have talked to him when he always considered her his best friend but even more than that !! felt bad for both of them both of them were so badly hurt because of each other though i just hope it dont get over that they have between each other lets see how they come back together clearing all misunderstandings 🤔 !!

Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 10 years ago

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#725

and we are back to square one in this update.

last update made their relationship take a step ahead and this one got them behind by miles.

pia is a extremely sensitive person and she misunderstood abhay but anyone in her condition would have felt the same. she has been treated that way before so i am not surprised at her reaction though she could have given him one fair chance of explaining. their fight was unpleasant and the words they spoke to each other has definitely left a bad taste in mouth. the worst part is that they both are angry on each other for same reason that the other doesn't consider them special if only they knew. their condition is pathetic yet same.

abhay's comments regarding position of power & respect were uncalled for but i guess his anger got the best of him. he should have known better that pia never was haughty or arrogant regarding her position. all she ever did was help ppl but anyway everything has messed up badly and i guess it would take some time to clear things. i kind of feel pity for him he got slapped and he s the one who got the earful from chand -haseena too. everyone blamed him but pia too is equally at fault .

chand & haseena are extremely protective for pia but they were a bit harsh towards abhay. may be they should have let them solve the matter & shouldn't have gotten in between. how could they even think he would hit her😕they should have known this by now how deeply he cares for her considering he accompanied her in her journey w/o caring for his own life. they all made him feel so guilty & miserable saying he wasn't doing his duty well. that must have hurt him like anything.

mark , abhay & aiza seems to know each other well. mark is grateful to abhay for doing his job but i am sure abhay did wanted to punish the person who misbehaved with pia even if he hated the manner in which he did it.pia's parents are worried for her but i feel her mother holds the king responsible for pia's misery.

both of them hurt the other one deeply by hitting at the most weak spot. abhay felt pia treated him like the way mutants were treated in faye and pia thought he pitied her like others do. so no wonder they are so angry but the sad part is that they were both each others best friend but now they aren't willing to believe it either.

radhika & arjun have been surprised by piya today . radhika must have had hard time analyzing behavior and abhay-pia relationship. happy to see she was there with pia as a good friend and hopefully would remain so.

i kind of feel bad for both of them actually. anyway why is T always sticking up to abhay. is there some ulterior motive behind her actions?

all in all an amazing update.

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Anita

@AnnetteSpring

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#726

That now was a stormy chapter 😆

I will never be able to think of Tanushree being a gud girl even if anybody makes her one in their FF.

I have a feeling that even if Piya doesn't give him any such signs , Arjun wud still set his hopes high.

The boneless tongue is sharper than the knife.

Abhay shud have been little careful with his choice of words. Friend or not , Piya is a princess , he shudn't have forgotten that.

Probably Chand & Haseena wud send him for Anger Management Classes. 😆

And abt the title I have heard those words just next to each other only in a song ' Blank Space ' , by Taylor Swift.

Do tell me what's the correct answer.

I will be waiting for the answer & obviously for the next update. 😊

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#727

Amazing update, seems lik abhay piya has a long way to go to understand each other . Felt sorry for both as der own views creating storms . Y do I feel T n misha r upto something more ? Hehe abhay really needs to solve his temper issues . Hope things vil b better in nxt update.

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#728

First so sorry for not commenting on last update

Last chapter was very Gud.

Oh ho, so much anger

After last update I thought nw they will come close par Yahan th ulta hi ho gya.

Edited by hema_rawat - 10 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#729

this update was pretty fast Shreya. so it wasnt a pleasant update and the relationship which developed a bit is all gone now. Piyas timing is horrible considering since she has to hear what Abhay said but offcourse he didnt mean it. but Piya being a very sensitive person and specially when its coming from Abhay who means too much to her couldn't take it and hence went for depression eating.

their words were to harsh to each other and too hurtful specially Abhay saying to piya about her greed for power. i donno how he is going to mend it. that really hurt Piya and i donno how they will come back to where they are. i feel bad for both of them.

i didnt like haseena and chand being so harsh on Abhay because he was just too worried for Piya. he is over-protective but he was jus looking out for her and he would never hit her. why they would think so 😕

they care each other so much yet all they do is hrut each other. thats so sad. Radhika is thinking about Abhay and Piyas relationship. she got a clue. and im glad Piya spent time with Arjun and Radhika. sometimes we need to be way from the people we want to be because they trouble us the most in matter of heart. amazing update.

will comment on glass hearts soon.