FF : Curiouser and Curiouser!(Ch17pg104)DISCONTINED.See Pg106 - Page 69

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update shreya
Pia is having nightmare abt abhay leaving her and abhay is thinking dat she still misses vibrant, pls Pia say something more Dan don't leave me.
Bathroom scene and dance scene was nice.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Comments updated on page 91 for chap-14!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: doll.12

It was fun treat for us too...abhay piya danced on the tunes... Abhay is slowly slowly loosing control of his patience... Ohh myy... They would be looking cute ... Abhay asked for a movie to her which she happily accepted...OMG..bathroom scene was so much so much making me blush too.. Poor girl.. Trying to dismiss the figure..lolxx... Abhay what ever u try and how much hard u try u can't stop urself from piya's sweet torture.. Isnt it??..

doesnt stop him trying😆


Misha and T is really up to something seriously now... T WAS FLIRTING WITH HIM TO KNOW more about him .. But why are they behind to know it..??.. Are they vampire slayer.. I think soo..

vampire slayer huh? haha not saying anything😛

At start their past scene was nice .. At that time too abhay can't ignore her... Arjun again came..urrgg.. Maybe he is just a human boy u have added him to ur story so that their love story can gain some more speed.. Right??.. Piya accepted his offer for a movie which was witnessed by abhay.. Which isn't a good sign.. Ohh ohh.. What will happen now.??.. Abhay will be angry and piya is guilty for something which she have to realize soon..update soon dear


Abhay won't be angry.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

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You updated! So soon! 😲 and I have not yet unreserved my previous comments!

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WoW!! I love Radhika's prompt replies! She is interesting and her gesture quite entertaining for a reader! Makes reading joyful. 😉

thank you. she is a different kinda character, so am having fun with her too.

Aah...Arjun as I see...is not dumb! He seems good too. But this pairing up, no matter how curious it looks, will never happen I suppose--for obvious reasons of course! 😊

wow seems like ur the only person who doesnt hate arjun. i wonder why? nope, it won't happen


As for Piya--she hardly realize what she wants. Same with Abhay. Or maybe he knows but his stature is preventing him to express it ?! Maybe!


exactly that.

Well...

The scene of Antony was very impressive! Liked it a lot ! 👏
the entire conversation was richly crafted and thoughtfully executed! Very very well written! 👏 especially his boss--his dialogues--everything was brilliant!

But i'm curious to know whose side the boss is in. The mutant's or not! Though I suspect it's the former.

Now-- this boss appears to be no one else but Sidhharth!
And what is he doing with this mutant in his home? Is she in some way related to him? Or is she plainly a probable medium for reaching the princess and Abhay?

Sorry I couldn't help myself. Too many mysterious and I am so excited to know everything!

But I will have to wait of course.



Thank you! It was the part i liked wriitng the most! The boss is Siddharth yeah. no, she isnt related to him but for your second question, I suspect you might have to wait a while...

Now I suspect Abhay has heard her conversation with Radhika. Was that why he was gloomy??

P.s. who is this new entry? The wolf girl?? And how does she and her brother comes in the picture?

Waiting for the answers to unfold...


The wolf girl doesnt have much significance right now. but you will see her for sure.

An amazingly written--interesting update Shreya. ⭐️

Do continue soon...
and thanks for pm. 😳

P.s. The HP and SH quotes were well chosen, and very rightly placed! 😉 👍🏼


thank you!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 2Obsessed

This was lovely.

Loved knowing more of Abhiya's friendship in the past. They did not interact often , yet understood each other so well.

there'll be many more of those flashbacks. you've hardly seen any so far so you need to learn more about the kind of friendship they had.

Abhay knows waltz. Well this is a surprise. Bahut talented hai.😆
Which show was Piya talking abt ?
Is this the same show that Piya 4m Magnetic Dipoles liked ?

nope! Piya from MD likes PKYEK and this one likes TVD😆

The ' image ' wud never leave Piya's mind. Wud it ? 😉
Might have been a serious situation for Abhiya , but i found it really funny.
I sometimes think Haseena and Chand have purposely provided Abhiya rooms , with interconnected bathrooms. 😆


you're right.😛

Tanu was flirting with Abhay .Urghh...😡
I so dislike this.
Do Tanu & Misha have any connection with the werewolves ?

hahaha. not saying yet.


Piya needs to sleep talk someday. Her nightmares are totally misinterpreted by Abhay. Now how woud he knw that the princess of Faye dreams abt him ?



he will know when its time😃
So, Piya wud go out for a movie with Arjun. Waiting for Abhay's reaction now . :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Was it a gift for all of us on vivu's bday

Anyway loved it
Abhiya's waltz & bathroom scene ufff hot


abhi toh party shuru hui hai😆

Pia has nightmare abt abhay & he thinks she still miss vikrant.. Dumb kahinka
Dono ko budhi do & pia ab nightmares mai bolne lage use kaise pata hoga yaar. mind reader nahi hai na.


Why the hell those 2 witches yes I knw M & T r witches wants to kill Abhay? wah ji bada confidence hai😆😆
Arjun pia ko dekh abhay ki jali😆...
Cont.. Shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update and thanks for pm 👏!! oh god this update was total abhiyalicious simply loved it both abhiya looks like have started having some deep feelings for each other which is definitely more than friends now it is love for sure from abhay's side and they cant stop thinking about each other neither abhay cares for her so much 😳 !! Piya had to start talking in sleep 😉as abhay will never get that she really dreams about him now 😆 well this mish - tanu are upto something it looks like they want to separate abhiya mostly they are after abhay i guess😲 i dont understand what they keep on planning or discussing all the time ?? 😆do they belong to witch or werewolf clan 😕?? well at last i guess abhay heard convo of piya and arjun so i think he will never like piya with anyone else other than him and he did wanted to take her for movie but she's going with arjun now so suddenly she felt guilt seeing abhay there!! well do update next part soon and other FF too 😉 !!


Thanks a lot! Abhay will know about piya's feelings when its time.😳 will update both soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Ahh can't wait to see abhay's reaction😆 super interesting update😉

next update😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

what exactly are misha and tanu ?


wait for that😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update


their flashback scenes were good. liked their bond. abhay always had a soft corner for pia since the time she helped him & that is inculcating into more deeper feelings now as he spends more and more time with her. does pia not know that it was abhay who was her stranger friend? why did he stopped meeting her? did he have anything to do with vikrant's death? pia definitely missed talking to him.i liked their convo also. abhay told her about his only wish which is to be a free men instead of caged and i do hope pia Yes she knows. i even wrote a flashback from her pov. and why he stopped meeting her is clear too, i made abhay say it when they were on the run.



their dance practice was sweet. pia really had a hard time practicing it with him initially. abhay's control over himself is slipping faster these days. he invited her for movie with him . he just want to spend more and more time with her. their bathroom scene was hot and poor pia how was she supposed to know that abhay would take extra time today😆his shower to cool down his nerves has actually made things more awkward for them. pia would have a hard time getting rid of his image or may be she might not want to and abhay gave her another shirtless image to ponder over.😆

she defo wont want to😛


abhay too like pia suffers from inferiority complex and it isn't his fault as he has always been made to feel like that during his time in faye but he should also understand that for pia that's not an issue. if she would have hated him like ppl do for mutants she would have never helped him or talked to him in first place. they both feel they are unworthy & not good enough for each other if only they could talk to sort out these misconceptions . pia is too scared to lose abhay like kabir and vikrant & abhay doesn't even know about it. he still feels she is hung upon vikrant if only he knew it's him she is worried for. loved the way abhay consoled her during the night and provided her the comfort.i hope they soon talk to each other about how they feel.
they will talk in time. not too long now hopefully

it's not wrong to go out for movies with friend so i feel pia shouldn't feel guilty but she stil does coz abhay has once again heard her convo with arjun. he almost eaves drops on her all convos.
he is her shadow basically so yeah. but not all convos of course😊

what are t & misha. why are they after abhay? r they working for ppl of ricardia?i feel t only flirted with abhay to get close to him and find out something about him.
hmm..time will tell😛
all in all a superb update and loved reading it.
thanks so much😳



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