new abhiya ff-THE UNION-read once u'll love it - Page 10

beautiful update
eagerly w8ng for next update

awesome.feeling bad for piya mom poor soul.piya and abhay confessed wow.thanx for pm and continue soon.

its hillarious yaar such m abhay bay hi hai xpress karna nahi ata... par memorable moment aur jyada memorable ho gaya... nice update...

lovely update
abhay proposal way to piya😆 at last piya understand
cont soon

Originally posted by: janvie

I just loved it man.❤️Its Amazing+Awesome=Perfect Update. 👏
I'm really speechless today.The confession was just Mindblowing.The best I have ever read. 👏 👏 Don't have words to explain how much I enjoyed and loved reading it.❤️😃
I have never ROFL or should I say laughed so much reading a confession scene.It was hilarious.I'm so glad you made
it so much comical rather than making it typical or emotional types.

Also I want to share one thing,I was missing Pkyek and Abhiya so badly today.My mood was so off and sad missing them 😭 😭But Thankyou so much after reading this I'm feeling much better and lighter.So Thanks alot yar for updating this part today.😃

Ok Now Coming to the Update,Loved it When Abhay sang gulabi ankhen and Also when he sang Tujhe dekha toh ye jaana sanam and Abhay's version me When He said,Tere Pyaar ka dose chahiye begum and khana kum..It was really nice and hilarious.Also while eating,When he was staring at Pia and Said ki Pehle kitna control karna padta tha,That was so Romantic...Hmmm Lagta hai Ab Abhay ka saara control khatam hone wala hai.😆
And The way He started the convo anyone would have thought the same way Piya did...She is Right Abhay is really Very Buddhu.😆
Precap-Kabir is sad,Hmmm Koi baat nahi dude Misha is there for you.So Just Chill. 😉
Pls Continue Soon...
Thanks for the pm. 😊

Thnku so so so much...I am ovrwhelmed by ur response ...I m glad that i helped u to freshen u up with my style of pkyek...thnks a ton

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

its hillarious yaar such m abhay bay hi hai xpress karna nahi ata... par memorable moment aur jyada memorable ho gaya... nice update...

Hahah...bichara abbhay...bt no worry...our mission to reunite pias parents wud bcome successful only cuz of a mastrmind..our abhay

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Lovely update.Finally Abhiya confessed.I m so happy.Bt OMG Abhay ke lifetime moment ko piya ne comedy bana dala...lol.Thnk God Kabir understood everything.Update asap

I am happy too finnaly abhay ne bola bhale ho kuch bhi bakwas bola.. :P

N thnku all d readers...for liking n ommenting

Sorry for late post..I hv put a lot of efforts hope u like it..

Chapter 10

The whole night pia cudnt sleep cuz of her last evening. It was one of top 3 things pia wanted in her life currently.. one family,two abhay, three ..kuch to suspence rehne do..
So it was a tick for abhay..her childhood bestie her love is all hers..she was so glad dat it was a two sided love..n she cud very much c d true care n love in abhays eyes..she was giggling to herself whole night while trying to sleep cuz of abhays weird harkate dat evening..but in dreams it was all abhay ..

Next morning:

Abhay had promised pia to take her from her pg.
Pia woke up with a jerk..looking at the clock
P- omg...its 9 ..oh no I'm so late..abhay aata hi hoga..uff

Abhay reached pia pg n was waiting from past 5 min
A(in mind)-pia kaha rehgi ..chlo let's go inside only..
Abhay ring the bell..shankar opened d door..
A-mm..pia..pia rai ..hai kya?

S-oh..beta aa jao aandar..mai usse bata deta hun..

N he made abhay sit in d hallway...abhay sat hesitantly..
N then sugandh came with pias nanu..abhay was dumbstruck looking at them..
But was happy too for pia..n sad she didn't told him..

Abhay rose n said- hello aunty ,mai pia ka friend hoon..usse college ke liye lene aaya hoon..

Sugandh-hmm..beth jao ..ati hogi

A sat-pia ne kabhi bataya ni ki vo apni family ..I mean u r alive..
The next moment pia entered..glaring at abhay as she heard the conversation
Pia-abhay. Hi..let's go.. (holding his arm) chalo ..chalo..jaldi..

A-but .wait..what..(finding something fishy)

P-nhi chalo abhay...I dnt wanna get late..
Aunty sorry I wont have breakfast

N they rush out of house leaving a confused sugandh but shekhar understood that something is wrong..

Shekhar-kon hai ye pia..muje jaana hoga..kuch toh gadbad h..hmm..

Abhay n pia reached car..and strtd driving to college
P-abhay wat was d need to come inside ..ek bar call toh kia hota..mai late hogyi thoda uthne mai..

A-pia..but..wat was so not so normal in that ..mai tere pg gaya cuz u were nt here..upar se u r hiding something really odd..wasn't ur parents dead..I mean I'm really sad abt dat part but pia..tu bata..the photo u showed me in school..wasn't she ur mom n nanu..plus u said her aunty..wat all this going..

Pia cudnt control her emotions n began crying.. seeing this abhay put the breaks

A-ahh...pia...I'm sorry..I shudnt have said anything except a sorry..

P-abhay..this was all d secret I wasn't telling u back then..

A-pia ..see(cupping her face to look at him), agar tum ab bhi nhi batana chahti to its fine..n I promise I wnt enter ur pg again..ok..now pls dnt cry..u r really bold enough..agr kisi ne aise dekha tuje toh nobody wl believe its u..ok..(wiping her tears..and hugging her)

P-abhay..it isn't like dat..I want to but I shudnt..

A-theres nothing u shudnt tell me if u want

P-i dnt want u to b in pain

A-wat pia..u criously believe dat..sach ye h..tumhe aisa dekh I feel pain inside..

P-abhay..I'm confused to tell or not.

A-tuje kya lagta h..if u won't toh muje pata ni lagega..haan?

Pia smiling wryly..-ok fine...
N she told evrything to him..evn d vampire part...

A-pia ..ye baat tuje pehle batani chahiye thi...bt its nvr too late. N pia I promise jald hee u wud hv everything perfect..a perfect family n ek perfect boyfriend toh u hv got..(smirking at her)

P-har baat pe mazak soojhta h abhay terko..(smilimg and wiping her tears) chale ab college .firat lecture toh miss ho hi gya h..

N they reached college...misha saw them both coming holding hands and smiling ..
At lunch misha caught pia alone..n didn't missed d opportunity

Misha- haan..just friends ..hena..ek din mai status change..

Pia- misha ..he proposed me..fir muje koi reason ni dikha mana krne ka..so..

M-hmmm.. jaisi teri side se toh kbhi koi feeing hi ni thi. Hena?

Pia blushing - don't irritate me..class chal

Kabir over heard this. (In mind- abe saale to bhi kya pia se infatuate ho gya..ofcourse look at them they luk so perfect...) n he became sad..

Eca practice
M-hey chuds -buds.. or shall I call new live birds
Maya n misha both were teasing piaa n abhay..
P-uff misha ..bas kar ab..kab tak tang kregi

M-jab tak hai jaam..mai tang mai tang krugi..rok sako toh rok lo baby..oops sorry abhay...ab pia ko baby kehna ka haq to sirf aapka h..
They all laughed..
M(in mind)- hmm..in love birds ko tang kyu karna..iss T se badla mai hi loongi..akeli..ab jab muje sach pata chal gya hi h that T was behind all that..so miss T u r so dead gone..

Pia n abhay reached for singing practice...

The head of singing committee varun and head of band committee jack has joined their committee in one..for best performace of college.
V-hey pia..welcome ..u r a perfect all rounder..n famous too..I'm sure u'll make us proud..the band n us hv combined now..
(Now moving to the rest singers n rapers n all)
So now we have to allot everyone a place..
The band will play rocking music (he hi-fived jack) n with rap we have to mix the songs..so any views how wil it go..

P-wat an idea sir jee...
N evry1 laughed..

Jack-so who can play guitar come here..piano here..and so on

Abhay whispered pia- I cnt play piano evr in my life

P-aisa kyu

A-kyuki vo tumhe mana kar raha h sweety 'pia-no' n mai aisi koi cheez nhi karna chahta jisme tu na ho..
Pia hit abhays shoulder giggling..

P-abhay shud I sing ,rap or play guitar here

A(laughing)- chida lo miss multigirl

P-no I'm serious..say na..

A-sing.. (he smiled)

Varun- so pia..what u want to do..

P-..I wud like to sing...and this is subject to change acc. To need..

V-okay..n u r abhay..so u r gud at

A- I sing..
P- very well...trust me on dat..

V-okay...

A- pia vaise paris mai ..tune shows kre h..?

P-college ke andar wale saare but bahar walo mai end moment pe I refuded all d time..kyuki mai famous hone k liye ni gaati

A-kya ho tum pia...tujhe samajhne mai janam lag jaenge..

P-take as many u want ..I dnt mind

V-hey pia..we r thinking to make u as lead..

P-oh really..I wud accept if dats an offer..

V-gr8..Practices from tomoro..u cn leave
N abhay I hv to hear how u sing ..to set ur position..

P-abhay..gulabi aankhen..pls

Abhay nodded n began singing..sang a passage..
V-wait wait..freshers party mai tum hi ga rhe the kya?
Abhay smirked and nodded

V-excellent..u may leave..c u tomoro

Abhay n pia went out
P-ye kon keh ra tha ..nhi nhi mai tumhare aage kuch nhi gata..haa?

Abhay smiled ..-pls pia ..its criously nothing infront of u

P-uff..abhay ..toh drop me to my pg

A-ghar pia ..hum jald hi usse tumhara ghar banane wala hoon..
Pia was silent whole way..they reached her home

A-pia tujhe mom yaad kr rhi thi..kal unse milne chlegi..

P-aunty..unhe pata h..matlab humarr bare mai.

A-maine nhi bataya h..so don't know

P-okay..kal sham ko..aaj thoda kam h..jo tu mess krke aaya h suba vo saaf krna h..

A-sorry..
He moved forward to hug pia..and cupped her face parting d hug..
A-miss me
He was abt to kiss pia ..but pia put her hands on his lips
P-kuch cheeze abhi sapne mai hi achi h abhay..bye..
N she got out of car giggling
A-piaaa...

Pia was about to ring the bell , she heard a voice
"Miss pia rai...tumse do minute baat ho sakti" pia turned back n found dat person was her nanu..in d corner of her mind she remembered her dadu's voice
'Pia shekhar bahut hi chalak hai..'
She now knew he has doubt on her cuz of what abhay blurted in d morning

P-ji..uncle

S-yaha nhi garden mai
Pia followed shekhar
Before pia cud ask or tell anything..shekhar started speaking

S-jo mai puchu uska saaf saaf jawab dena ..kon ho tum?

P-pia rai uncle

S-humse tumara kya rishta h,tumhara dost suba family kyu bol kar gaya ..bolo

P-ek tenent aur land owner ka rishta h uncle..aur usse ni pata tha ki mai pg mai reh ri hun..he thot dats my family..

S-aur jo vo ladka sugandh ko zinda dekh shocked kyu tha..meri beti ka zinda hone ya na hone se tumhe kya faraq ..

P-i dnt knw uncle

S-dekho ..agr tum meri baat ka sahi jawab nhi dogi ..toh mai police bula ra hun...vo the ache se sab sach bulva denge..

P-aap aise nhi bol sakte h..mai galat nhi hun..
There were tears in her eyes...

S-tum aise nhi bataogi..
He took out his phone n was abt to dial 100..
P-ruk jaiye mr.sharma...

S-intellingent girl..ab bolo sach..maine tum par ache se search kar li h..tum pia rai nhi ho ..kyu aayi ho yaha jhuthi identity lekar

P-mere dadu ne kaha tha aap pathar dil h..mai nhi mani..par vo kitne sahi the ..ab realise hogya h..aap jaana chahte h na mai kon hoon toh suniye..mai pia dobriyal hoon

S-dobriyal (becoming angry)

P-haan vo hi dobriyal jis se aap ko nafrat hai..vo hi dobriyal ..

S-yaha kya karne aayi ho?

P-abhi maine apna introduction sahi se nhi dia h ..mai vo hi hun..jisse aapne uske janam ke baad apni maa se alag kia..muje meri mom se nafrat karvai..jisko pal pal apne gaali di..jis bache ki masoom shakal dekh kar bhi aap jaise pathar dil ko daya nhi aayi..aur muje mere ghar ki chaukat par chod aaye..yaad aya mr.sharma...yaani galti se aap ..mere nanaji h..aur mujhe iss baat par sharam aati h..(weeping)

S-oh...toh tum meri aur sugandh ki zindagi narak banane aayi ho ..bilkul apne baap par gayi ho.

P- ye hi faraq h ek ache insaan aur aap mai..mai itni bhi girvi nhi hun ki aapne mujhe vaha phek dia aur mai aapko barbaad karne aao...mai apni maa vapis lene aayi hoon..aur mai aisa karke hi rahoongi

S-na...krogi toh tab jab mai tumhe aisa karne doonga...to uss arnab ki beti h ..tujhse bhi mai utni hi nafrat karta hoon jitni tere baap se..aur tujhe iss baat ki saza milegi..tujhe apni maa nhi milegi

P- aap kitna girengi..kitna..agar aapko dad se problem h toh theek h..maine kya kia hai..jo muje apne parents ka sukh nhi mil sakta..agr mai uski beti hun jise aap nafrat karte h ..mai 18 saal apni maa se dur rahi..kya yeh meri dad ki beti hone ki saza kafi nhi h..(crying badly)..aur kitna ..

S-nhi..bilkul nhi..

P-toh aap kuch bhi kar lijie..mai apni maa kp lekar hi rahoongi..(wiping her tears)

S-mai aisa hone nhi dunga..tumhe aaj hi ghar se nikalvata hoon

P-(cool way) ah..nanu..ek saal ka contract ban chuka h..u r late ..
Shekhar became furious

P-mom ko toh aap bata nhi paenge ..police mere sath bhi h..iss umar mai itni taqleef mat uthaie

S-mai tumhara maqsat poora nhi hone dunga..

P-kuch bhi keejie..bas ek baat yaad rakhna mujhe aapka bhi thoda sa aapka khoon bhi hai

N she went inside the house

Shekhar was mad at evrything right now..
S-pia dobriyal..nafrat h muje tumse bhi ab..

Pia smiled at her mom-hi aunty...vo apke papa..kuch theek nhi lag re mujhe..is he fine?
N pia laughed


Hey sorry for a late post...but I hope u enjoyed ..and i also hope u love d wittimess I hv put..In abhay n pia...pls pls do comment wat dialogue u liked d most...n othrwise comment how u liked the post..

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm