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Posted: 12 years ago
wow pia ne kya back fire kiya shekhar par maza aa gaya... how could he do dis to little child... and abhay sach m cute hai... i waiting to see how misha give t a strong dose of black coffee dat too sugar free...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

wow pia ne kya back fire kiya shekhar par maza aa gaya... how could he do dis to little child... and abhay sach m cute hai... i waiting to see how misha give t a strong dose of black coffee dat too sugar free...






Thnku so much trish...I love my both characters abhay n pia so try to add maximum wittiness n best dialogues there
...n yes i'll do something really gud for T...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnks for reading..will continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here goes the nxt ch..enjoy n comment

recap-abhay blurted some nt to b told things which became trouble for pia cuz it didn't went unnoticed by her nanu. Now abhay knows pias whole situation .pia becomes lead singer.pia have conversation wid her nanu ,he knows d truth n still hates pia.

Chapter 11

Dinner ,sharma nivas:

Pia-uncle aapki tabiyat kaisi h

Shekhar-jald hi theek hone wali h..sugandh mera khana mere room mai bhejo

Sugandh-ji papa..

Aftr sugandh came back

P-aunty aap bhi toh khana khayiye na
Sugandh nodded

P-aunty pata ni aapko dekh kar aisa kyu lagta h ki agr meri mom zinda hoti toh vo aap jaisi hi hoti
She noticed sugandh flinch on d word 'mom'

S-pia tumse pehle aur bhi tenent aaye h par koi tikka nhi..kyuki vo kehte h mai ache se baat ni krti..mere itna bure honw ke baad bhi tum mujhse itni achi kyu ho?
Tears were forming in pia's eyes

P-kyuki maine kabhi maa nhi dekhi...toh pyaar ki aadat nhi h..(a tear drop from her eye)

S-I'm sory..mai tumhe nhi keh sakti ki muje maa keh lo kyuki kuch cheeze allow nhi krti

P-ye kuch cheeze shekhar uncle h ..mai janti hun

S-u r interfering too much..khana khao aur jao..mujhse baat krne k paise nhi deti tum
N she left..leavind a dis-heartened pia.

Pia was about to sleep her phone rang it was rajesh her dadu

P-hello dadu,aap soe nhi

R-bas sone hi wala tha , kya progress h beta
And pia told him evrything

R-maine toh kaha hi tha vo bahut chalak aadmi h..usse bachke rehna pia vo ab har chal chalega tumhe vaha se nikalne ki isliye jaldi se sugandh ko apni taraf kro . Bechari she is suffering too because of him..

P-hmm..yes dadu..u don't worry..I'll handle yaha tak pahuchi hoon toh aage bhi pahunch jaongi.. goodnight dadu..love u

R-bye beta..
As she cut the phone ,the phone rang again,it was abhay this time

P-hello..

A-hi darling, I'm missing u

P-abhay..u r disturbing my sleep

A-pia ..here I'm missing u..aur tujhe neend ki padi h

P-haan toh..agr I dnt sleep toh tere bare mai ache ache sapne kaise aayenge..
Both giggled

A-acha chalo ok..mai to bas teri awaz suna chah ra tha sone se pehle ..
Pia smiling didn't speak anything

A-so gyi kya?

P(cutely)-i love u abhay

A-mm..love u too..so ja ab..
A(in mind)- ye pia bhi na pata nhi kabhi kabhi ekdam unexpected kuch bhi bol deti hai

Mount college ,morning:
Pia and abhay was sitting in class waiting for teacher without speaking to each other from a while

A-pia kya hua..suba se itni chup chup kyu h

P-abhay I just hate my nanu vo mom ke sath aisa kaise kar sakte h..he kept mom locked in a room for a whole year when I was born taki vo vaha se bhag na jaye .koi! apne bache ko dukhi kaise dekh sakta h abhay
Abhay just kept her hands in his.

Suddenly misha came running to abhay n pia-guys chalo chalo jaldi .
She pulled pia n abhay out of class

P- kya hua misha..

M-look there..she sent that bas***d to assault u..it was her plan..

A-this bitch. .ye T ka kam tha ..par ye aisi buri haalat mai kyu h..
T was sneezing badly ,her face all red..her clothes were in a position of wardrobe malfunction n she was surrounded with people in a circle.

M-uske deo ko I replaced with pepper spray..

A- dats really applaudable

P-thnx misha. .but ab bahut h..

M-no pia wat bhut h ..she desrves a lot more

P-mai ek izad dar ladki hun..iske jitna nhi gir sakti misha
Pia went to T clearing d crowd
P-( to crowd)pls go away from here..( to T)T could u just go home n hv a bath..jao

T-I'm ...I'm..sorry pia.

P-sory muje nhi apni soch ko bolo..kisi aur k sath kuch bhi aisa mat krna dubara ..pachtaogi ni to..run now..
Leaving a guilty T pia left from there .

P- canteen chale..I'm hungry

M- pia pura plan chop hogya

P- I'm nt so cheap..chale abhay

A- mm..pia aaj mom ne jaldi bulaya tha ..so gtg

P-okay.. call me..

Canteen:
Misha n pia hving lunch

P- misha dnt mind wtevr I ask..

M-anything u can

P-sugandh aunty ki shaadi nhi hui?

Misha sadly- pia..I know tujhe bhi massi pe taras aata h na..hui thi unki shaadi..par kuch problems ki vaja se mere nanu massi ko vapis le aaye..actual mai he was always against massi's choice n he just wanted a reason to prove his superiority..jo unhe mil gya tha

P- wat reason

M- that mom didn't told..toh listen na aage..massi gave birth to a baby aftr she was separated..n u know wat my nanu gave dat baby to massi's in-laws n separated a mother from her child..n since I know d story I don't talk to nanu as I used to . My mom says massi ki condition ki vaja nanu h..agr unhone kbhi aisa nhi kia hota that baby n massi wud hv been so happy

P- that is so not human..kya h tumhare nanu

M- pia pata h kabhi kabhi I think abt my cousin ki vo jaha bhi hoga ya hogi kaisa hoga

P-u dnt evn knw if d baby was female or male

M- no body does..nt evn nanu who gave dat child..bt I just wish vo khush ho..I feel agr vo kabhi muje mile toh mai usse hug karu aur bolu 'dude I'm with u'

Pia started crying..
M- oh sorry pia senti hogyi na mai..sorry yar tu serious mat ho..
Pia smiled while crying and stood up

P- misha hug me

M- okay bt hua kya ( hugging pia)

P-ab bol 'dude I'm with u'

M- no its okay..tu ye sab muje acha feel krvane k liye kr rhi h na..its ok really pia
N she sat down
Pia staring at her amazingly sat down

Suddenly misha was staring pia with wide eyes..

M- oh my god pia..tu ..tu..massi ki ..ki..beti h..( still staring)
Pia was smiling now
M-hey bhagwan mere sar pe rod maro..mai kitni gadhi hoon..yes pia ..vo hi curly hair, vo hi aankhen, vo hi fairness..how couldn't I...
Misha hugged pia while sitting- I'm so so happy pia..

P-misha mera gala..I need to breathe..

M- sorry..that means u knew I was ur cousin..pehle kyu ni bataya?..does massi know abt that??.. n how is ur dad,y u told he's dead?

P- relax I'm nt going anywhere..I was afraid ki shyd u hate me too..n nhi mom ko nhi pata but nanu does..n he still hates me ,he is trying evry mean to throw me out of d house..n misha my dad he has escaped sonewhere..

M- woah..escaped..really..how?

P- the reason y nanu got mom back here.

M- oh no..thn y u told dead

P- muje ye baat kuch hi din pehla pata chali dat my parents r alive..tabhi mai yaha aayi hun misha bt nanu is making it difficult

M-hmmm..pia ab tu ruk aur dekh how I make nanu out of ur way..u dnt worry abt dat..(giving a mischevious smile)


Precap::

Haseena- pia..my darling..kaisi ho beta..luk at u kitni sundar ho gyi ho..

Pia- really aunty. Koi to keh ra tha mai bachpan mai bttr thi (eyeing abhay)

H-jisne kaha..uski aankhen khrab h

A-mom..dats me..aisa toh mat bolo aap

Haseena n pia laughed

H-chlo beta..andar aao..


Sorry a short post..will update soon..dnt forget to comment ..n tell how's d story going..hope u liked it..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
good one...
PM me next time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update!Loved it to the core.❤️
The story is really going forward very superbly.I liked How the bonding betwn Piya nd Sugandh is getting better than before.Again I especially loved Abhiya's convo.❤️It was super-cute.When she said"Soungi nahi toh Tumhare ache-ache sapne kaise ayenge.And Both giggled.It was very cute part.And Then When She said "I love you',Abhay in mind "Ye Pia bhi na,Kabhi bhi kuch bhi unexpected bol deti hai"...Something like that...It was a good one.

Then Comes My treat Misha ne Sach me T ki achi band bajai yar.Loved it.❤️Great Work. 👏 👏
That T deserves that Though Piya is also right Wo T ke jitna gir nahi sakti,Coz She is a Izzatdar ladki after all. 😆
And My Most Fav part after Abhiya's phone convo 😉 When Piya ask Misha ques and after that Piya told her everything in indirect way.It was Simply Awesome. "Misha Hug me and Now say I'm with you dude."Really Emotional and funny at the same time. 👏 ⭐️ .
Precap - Pia and Haseena ke beech me Bichara Mera Abhay...LOL...😆
Pls Continue Soon.
Thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice update
update soon
i am waiting to see the precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
a super awesome update.piya nanu😡hope piyas mom opens up to piya soon.precap was nice.thanx for pm and continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
aahaaah its nice update finally misha ko pia ka raaz pata chal gaya now lets see how duo cousin give shekhar taste of his medicen... waiting 4 next part...

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