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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Its Awesome Update Yar! I really loved it alot and to the core.❤️ ❤️

I really loved Abhiya's mind talk and also their convo after that horrible incident.Really
want to kill that T mean,She is such a bit*h.I mean how can a girl fall to such an extent for revenge. 😡 😡
Hope Abhay teach her the lesson of her life after finding out the truth..,And Sugandh finally talked nicely with pia,
that's good.Hope she gets to know soon that Piya is her own daughter soon.

Loved Misha-Piya's bonding.Glad that atleast pia know that Misha is her cousin sister.:-)
About Confession,Thanks alot for accepting my request.Waiting for the next part eagerly...Pls Continue Soon.
And Yes I would like Abhay or even Misha(to know first about Pia's identity then her mission,then we can get Sister duo back in action)to know about Pia's mission after some updates.Then Abhay or Misha or Both can help her and be her support,And It would be great.So pls consider this idea,I would really be glad.And. ya Its just what I would like
to see.Its totally your story and your choice.Take it freely as you want and have planned.I really don't mind. 😊

And Ya the Update was too good and long,So I have given such a long comment. 😆
Thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
I was eagerly waiting for ur comment...thnku so much

Well thnku for d ideas.I wil sirleey considr them...

N for d revealing abt pia n her mother..dat I hv thot a really nice plot...so I might stick to dat..vt for many othrs things ..thnks a ton..n pls givibg ur ideas like dat cuz I always mix them wid my plot..n try to make it more interesting

Thnks agaiin
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: temptations

I was eagerly waiting for ur comment...thnku so much

Well thnku for d ideas.I wil sirleey considr them...

N for d revealing abt pia n her mother..dat I hv thot a really nice plot...so I might stick to dat..vt for many othrs things ..thnks a ton..n pls givibg ur ideas like dat cuz I always mix them wid my plot..n try to make it more interesting

Thnks agaiin


Your Most Welcome. 😊 And Ya My comment was late coz I didn't checked the pms yesterday.So Sorry for that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
nice update👏 story iteresting hoti jaa rahi hai 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
chp 6 is awosome
like the flashback
sorry for late reply
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
beautiful update
now abhay 'll sing with pia
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry a bit late update
..do comment.I'm sure u will like it


Chapter 9

Misha with lot of insistence left at night,otherwise it was her full plan to stay at her massi's home..

Pia was shocked n in a way relaxed too..cuz misha was her cousin..dat is why she was happy today..

Next norning:: having breakfast::

P-good morning aunty

S-good morning

P-aunty I really this purple color of ur saree..

S-thnks(she became really happy,n pia didn't missed dat)..ye arn...I mean muje ye color pasand ni h zada..

Pia thot-did just mom was abt to say arnab, my dad.. I m confused

S- misha tumhari achi dost h?

P-ji..pehle din se hi..

S-hm..bahut badmaash h vo..baad mai dnt regret

P(laughing)- well I know dat.. n I wnt evr regret..

S- jo bhi h..
n she left,leaving pia alone
Pia talking to herself- muje lagta h mom abi bhi dad ko nhi bhool payi h.. bt I think muje dad ko bhi side bt side dhoondna chahiye..par kaha...yaha ke jungles mai..hmm..I need to..

Pia reached college:

She found abhay first as soon as she got out from taxi,she cudnt resist her angel smile

P-Hi abhay..
Abhay came running to her

A-hi pia..aaj time se..kya baat h..haan

P-hm..kabhi kabhi chlta h..
N they both laughed..T saw them laughing..n was too furious..n was talking aloud to herself -pia I hate u to core..kal toh tum bach gyi..but ab ni
This wasn't missed by misha ..
She went running to class..just to find dat pia n abhay were sitting togethr and laughing ..
M(in mind)-kuch toh h inke beech jo shyd inhe bhi ni pata..just frnds ,not possible
She decided to search more herself ..n thn.tell thm..since there was a doubt still ..

M-hi dudes..
Misha went n sat behind them..
M(to pia)- n u ..woah..I mean since starting u r living at my nanus house..n u didn't told me yar..pata hum kitni masti kar sakte the..but koi ni ..its nvr too late

A(in mind)- yea misha it's nvr too late..pia be ready..aaj I cnt hide from u..

At lunch:
Pia n abhay were alone..n misha was searching abt yesterday..n kabir was absent,good for both..

Abhay-pia I want to show u a place

Pia-hmm where

A-the best place of dehradun..uss din mai tuje vo jaga dikhana hi bhool gaya..trust me its amazing.. toh chlegi na(in mind-pls pls don't say no..vaha bhut kuch tumhara intezaar kar ra h pia..saari pocket money waste ho jaegi nahi toh)

P-haan..ok..(in mind-perfect,I will tell u finally) After college we will..ok?

A-ya done..

College ends..abhay was waiting in car..

M-dude..pia ..listen..kabir is not well ..he hving fever. Mai usse milne jaongi raat mai..chlegi kya?

P-ya ..ofcourse..just call me..okay..

M- chal I'll drop u home

P-no actually ..I'm going wid abhay..

M-ahem ..ahem..itna khul ke..

P-wat misha...udhar dekh tera chirag..vaha tujhe ghoor k dekh ra..go wid him..he's desperate abt u.

M-iieeu...pia..just go now, misha ka mazak bhi koi udda sakta h

P- well 'its me'
N she left

M(in mind)- kitna hi chupa le pia..I know u like him..

Pia sat inside car-lets go bay
Abhay strtd driving

A-hey..tu fir shuru ho gayi

P-come on ,no ones listening..

A-hello mai deaf ni hun.I m ..mere liye hi mujhe abhay bol..

P- ufo..ok..dhradun aakr ..tu vo masti bhool gya h.i think

A-me n masti..bhool gya..chal ..chal..

P-toh fir y didn't u wanted to compete wid me..
Abhay became mute

A-its just nothing pia..ab dekh teri vaja se I'm there right..so how does it mattr..

P- acha so now sing 'gulabi aankhen' ..I'm getting bored..I didn't heard dat properly dat day

A-im driving..

P- ooo jhoot kisi aur se bolio..I knw very well u can..tab cycle chalate hue ..u nvr said no..aur ab car aa gyi to drame dikha ra h..go I'm nt talking to u

Abhay just smiled..n began singing

'Gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi, sharabi ye dil ho gayaaa..sambhalo mujhko oh mere yaaro diwana ye dil kahi kho jaye naa..'
Pia smiled
N abhay sang all d way..

They reached a farm sort of place..
A-happy now..sun lia mera gana..khud aisa super gaati h ..fir bhi muje gane ko kaha..

P-dnt make me overconfident abhay..n btw ..hv we reachd?..where r we?

A- yes we hv reachd ..let's go inside this farm..kehte h yaha aakr dehradun ki poorani lifestyle dikhti h..n its really good..

They went inside..there were few people ..n all were workers of that farm..
Pia was mesmerised to see d greenery..cottages..the village sort od lifestyle..n she loved it..

P-abhay u know..its amazing u were right..thanks muje yaha lane ke liye..
Abhay just smiled..
A-sabse best place of here bacha h..come
N he took pia's wrist..n they went between trees..from where the hill was ending..but as they moved further pia cudnt blink her eyes..they stops now..
P-omg..this is hell gorgeous
.how can..
She stop without evn completing her sentence...cuz infront of her eyes was d whole dehradun..filled with homes n lights outside them n huge jungles..it was just breath taking

A(in mind)- I'm sorry pia if wtevr I say now hurts u..bt I cnt hide my feelings..

Aftr sometime abhay spoke
A- pia..I..

P-i know its beautiful..thnku so much..
Now she turned at him..abhay was with dead damn serious
P-mm..is everything okay...(in mind-kya hua isse..)

A-i want to tell u something..
He said in an instant

P- haan bol na(in mind-i just wish ye muje kisi crush ke bare mai na bataye ni toh mera plan wil flop)

A-pia..actually..u know..jab tu gayi paris..mai ekdam akela reh gaya..matlab..sab dost mila kar bhi teri kami poori nhi kar paa rhe the...jab bhi koi masti kari..hamesha teri yaad aa jati..so I was really pissed..kyuki I knew ki tu mujse kafi saal ni mil sakti..I was just helpless..fir dad ki probs u know thm..fir dehradun aane ke baad..I thot I will forget u now..but pia..aisa nhi jo paya..itne dost gaye itne aaye ..par tere jaise koi ni mil paya..par fir muje mila pyaar pia..mujhe apni zindagi ka pyaar mil gaya...matlab tu samajh ri h na

Pia was confused..does he want to say he love someone..n he wanted to share with his best friend that is me..wat does he mean..pia nodded a no

A-yar..I'm a too bad explainer..

P-kya abhay..wat do u want to say..thik se to bol...
N she turned to the dehradun view..almost tears in her eyes thinking she has lost her abhay..he likes someone else

Abhay was damn shocked by this..he thot pia became angry..n her answer ia sort of no..
A-pia...acha okay I dnt know u got me or not..even if ur answer is a no ..dats fine..but mai tujhse nahi chupa sakta ..I can't keep it anymore
Pia turned cutting abhay-ofcourse u can ..its ur life..y wud it matter if u dnt tell me

Abhay was now d confused one

A-pia..wait ..kya bol rhi h tu..tu peeke toh nhi aayi..

P-wat..mai..u mean mai drink karke aayi hun..paagal ho gya h kya..tu pee kar aaya h..kuch bhi bole ja ra h..

A-no piaa..sun..I just wanted to say..dat I..I love you miss pia raichand ..or rai..I mean wtevr it is..urghh..(Abhay said in irritation..)

Pia hit her forehead with her palm and was laughing badly now..sitting on d ground..due to excess laughing..thinking dat abhay is so dumb to explain things..n she was thinking such weird things

A-pia..I really don't understand u..kya hua h tuje..I criously doubt tu sach mai peg laga kar aayi h kya. ..answer me back
Abhay sat infront her

Now pia was suddenly stop laughing n became serious..dat abhay loves her as well..wat else she want now..her love has found his partner..

P- I'm sorry abhay..tu paagal hai..

A-pia I'm dead serious abt it..I love u..mai tere bina nhi reh sakta hun
One tear dropped from abhays eye
Pia came closer to him

P-hey abhay..ro mat yar
(Wiping d tear off) maine kab kaha i don't love u..

A-nhi ..p..p..par ye bhi to ni kaha u do
Staring pia in eyes..

P- abhay..I love u a lot..I really love u too..
Tears were now in pias eyes..

A(smiling)-mere asoo apne walo ko importance dene ke liye wipe kre kya..
And they both laughed lightly..
Abhay wiped pia's face and hugged her..

A-i'm sorry..u know na ki mai samjha ni sakta ..smjh ni sakti thi..bas itna hi jaanti h tu muje

P(hitting his shoulder)- do u realised ki tu kya bakwas bol ra tha..I hope I wud hv recorded..meri jaan hi nikal gyi thi..I thot tu kisi aur se pyaar karta h..

A-shh..pia..I cnt imagine in my dreams as well..I'm just urs..I m all urs..
They parted smiling to each other..and stood up

A- kya pia..mera lifetime.moment ki comedy bana di tune toh..

P-haww..me..hw dare u say dat..kuch bhi bakwas bol ra tha..mujhe bhi kis budhu se pyaar hua...jisse express karna bhi ni aata

A-pia I was scared ..kahi humari dosti bhi na kho du mai..
They stared in each others eyes..
P-mai aisa nhi hone deti..abhay..Jab paris gayi..tab realise hua..u were nt just a friend..bt a lot more..I loved u always..bt actual mai bade hokar pata chala..these feeling r love n nt just deep friendship..aur shyd ye hi vaja thi we met here..yet again

A(holding her hands)- pia I hv something for u

P-ab aur kya

A-come...
They went to a cottage sort of thing..which had a table in center wid food..

P-abhay..y hv done all this..

A-cuz its raichand style..

P-agr mai mana kar deti toh..waste ho jata na

A-puri pocket money waste ho jati...bt tere liye kuch bhi...
Pia hugged abhay..and this a lot more passionately..

A-tuje khana dikha aur decorations...miaha ke sath mat raha kar pia
They both laughed..
And began having food..
Abhay was just staring at pia
P-kha na abhay...its good

A-tere aage khana kaise dekhu..

P-shut up..tu aise dialogue kabse marne lag gaya ..haan

Abhay began singing - tujhe dekha h toh jaana sanam pyaar hota hai deewana sanam...ab tere pyaar ki dose chahiye begam aur khana ye kam..

Pia blushed and laughed too..-come on..abhay..

A- kya karu mai..pehle itna control karna padta tha...
Pia smiled..

P- abhay pata I'm just so so happy..I cnt tell..I always loved u..par lagta tha pata ni kbhi milungi bhi ya ni..

A-pia jab sache dil se kuch maango toh zaroor milta h..I was just so depressed before I saw u in colg..par jb tujhe dekha..yeh fil dubara dhadakne laga..like there has been a union of hearts..


Precap:::
@ college
Misha- haan..just friends ..hena..ek din mai status change..

Pia- misha ..he proposed me..fir muje koi reason ni dikha mana krne ka..so..

M-hmmm.. jaisi teri side se toh kbhi koi feeing hi ni thi. Hena?

Pia blushing - don't irritate me..class chal

Kabir over heard this. (In mind- abe saale to bhi kya pia se infatuate ho gya..ofcourse look at them they luk so perfect...) n he became sad..



Hey ..pls comment n hit d like button ..how was confession scene.I tried to make it a bit comical cuz I'm bored of serious confessions..hope u like it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just loved it man.❤️Its Amazing+Awesome=Perfect Update. 👏
I'm really speechless today.The confession was just Mindblowing.The best I have ever read. 👏 👏 Don't have words to explain how much I enjoyed and loved reading it.❤️😃
I have never ROFL or should I say laughed so much reading a confession scene.It was hilarious.I'm so glad you made
it so much comical rather than making it typical or emotional types.

Also I want to share one thing,I was missing Pkyek and Abhiya so badly today.My mood was so off and sad missing them 😭 😭But Thankyou so much after reading this I'm feeling much better and lighter.So Thanks alot yar for updating this part today.😃

Ok Now Coming to the Update,Loved it When Abhay sang gulabi ankhen and Also when he sang Tujhe dekha toh ye jaana sanam and Abhay's version me When He said,Tere Pyaar ka dose chahiye begum and khana kum..It was really nice and hilarious.Also while eating,When he was staring at Pia and Said ki Pehle kitna control karna padta tha,That was so Romantic...Hmmm Lagta hai Ab Abhay ka saara control khatam hone wala hai.😆
And The way He started the convo anyone would have thought the same way Piya did...She is Right Abhay is really Very Buddhu.😆
Precap-Kabir is sad,Hmmm Koi baat nahi dude Misha is there for you.So Just Chill. 😉
Pls Continue Soon...
Thanks for the pm. 😊
Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update.Finally Abhiya confessed.I m so happy.Bt OMG Abhay ke lifetime moment ko piya ne comedy bana dala...lol.Thnk God Kabir understood everything.Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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