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Time to celebrate mai first mai first mai first

thank you so much for this long update and abhendra misunderstands piyali...that y he is angry in present with piya but he should have listen to piyali that nigh and hear her out...and i cant believe siddharth back stabbed piyali with her trust i thought he wold have changed...cont soon

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tum kabhi baj nahi aogi!!! Dedicate kia woh bhi bbb ke sath!!! 😳 😆😛bt thanks a lot dear 🤗
anyway bt beg me 4 wat? Unresing my cment?😕

and ya dis 1 is really a long long updat! So will read wen i have enough time in hand and then cment!
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First of all before i say wether its gud i like to say this chapter was very well written ,well woven n intelligently plotted. 👏The manner in which u executed the scenes were excellent!!⭐️
The scene begins with pia asking maithli to escape. Frm that to the very last part it was all quite enthralling read.
👏I will divide this update into few parts. That is action, emotion, past n present collision.

Action- shreya this action was the best action sequence i have read till date. Except ayesha, for an action scene i have hardly seen such throw of words!! The blows pia was escaping, i felt them!! Bravo dear!!!👏 U are tooo good!!!


Emotion-abhayendra,maithli,pia n sidhharth each one of them acted exactly the way they shud! Not more nt less..splendid!!
Now about the past present section-
i really feel bad for pia! But i cnt blame abhay! Nt becoz he is abhay bt becoz he is in a wrong illusion! He is nt able to see the right picture. Anybody wud mre or less behave in the same way if they were in his place..forget behave a tormemtd vampire sufferng pain 4 centuries wud have killd pia! Bt we all knw why he didnt.he is abhay n well the othr reasn u knw why..
though this part stil seems unreal to me..m nt sure wether pia ws dreaming or it ws happng 4 real..

But ya if i for once keep my blind emotions towards abhiya aside, n judge it just as a story then as a reader i have to admit that i enjoyed each n every turn of events v.v. much!! 👍🏼I must say this time even i ws flaggerbusted! For a friction of second i was confused wether the last part where pia saw abhay was present or past. But then i realised its present. And sadly in present abhay hates maithli n pia mre than maithli. Not surprising at all cnsidering the facts that abhay belev as true. Bt the mst import thing to be noted here is abhay hates pia alright bt more than hating pia for breaking hs belief he hates pia becoz abhay thinks pia cheated on hm becz of sidh! He thinks she loves sidh!! [my pov!] So here abhay's hathred is hinting at sumthng else..a more strng emotion perhaps? The entire thing is cmplicated! Or is it me,mistaking?😕
Bt anyway like i said i am enjoying the twist and wil nt ask u to unite abhiya soon becz that wil make the story uninteresting. Its bettr to go slow becz we all knw this misundrstndng n all the twist n turns wil result in a union even mre bigger,thats bound to enchant us. 😉
anyways i wrote an essay,sorry. 😆
U Knw amng all ur works this is my fav8 nw becz of the brilliant plotting and tactful,intelligent way of executing the past n present. Managing bth is nt easy bt you are doing an amazing job here. 👏
p.s. Haseena seems to knw wat happnd or wats happng..or mayb she is nt aware of the recemt turn of events yet,just like us? Who knws bt i love the way u cnfuse ur readers. 😉😛 carry on plz..🤗

fabulous update.it was so fast paced. Pia did so much 4 abhay risked her lyf 4 him & he accused her f betrayal? I thought may b sid would change with pia's friendship but he couldn't show loyality even to her...dat was really sad. Pia i suppose is back to present wonder whose car stopped there ...i think may b sid or abhay. Amazingly written

awesome update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Awesome update...
Poor Piyali...she really loves Abhayendra...But Abhayendra misunderstans her...feel bad for Piyali..
Thanks for the PM.