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so..you said you arent cmfy wth fight n romantic scenes!! Bt that's shocking becoz the fight sequence was purely amazing!! ⭐️ Atleast to me!! I felt am watchng sum fight sequence frm troy/the lord of the rings! And am being honest! The attacks,counter attacks..everythng was fantastically depicted! I enjoyed it! Bravo!!👏
and the next..abhayendra piya- they coming close,the sudden tension of the moment, abhayendra's passion..pia's hesitation and surrender..all was very well described!! Even the timing of their every move,expression was just absolutely perfect!!! 👏
great job!! 👍🏼
then the way pia handled the whole situation with sheer intelligence really adds sum extra charm to her character! 😊 I Like it!! 👏 nt exaggerating bt i love the way u portray the womans characters specially pia! ❤️ Ofcourse abhay too! And womans arent weak in ur story and i like tht! 😊
nw reina! Anthr interesting character..! Her encounter with abhay was terrific! The way abhay acted..hs anger..tht was too gud!! Nw i have gave up on guessing who reina actually is..😆 I will rather wait 4 u to disclose. 😉
bt this part was very interesting and important turning point in the story i suppose as it holds key to many unanswered questns tht will arise in the future updates..n mayb sum missing link in the past as well!
And also the secrecy this particular scene had is fantastic! ⭐️ The style by whch it was handled is really great!! 👏
now the story is getting mre interesting..waiting to see how all these leads to sum definite events and change or modify the course of actions!
The way you are tackling the past..the present is really commendable.. 👏
And pia-sidh and abhay -sid scene was again a gud read! Very well written..
Now honestly i cnt wait for the next chap shreya! U have left no choice! So update soon!! 😉
P.s. Dnt u also start plzz! Nt usd to see 'nt satisfied' kinda note in ur posts! Samjhi? So 4m next time edit tht part plz! 😛
Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago
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