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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

yaar plz sid ko metz ke claw se bachalo... and wapas raichands ke pass bhej do... and yeh metz how evil she is dont even think abt her sister... bechara poor abhay... wase jab chand ne party m jane ko kaha and aby-baby ne nana kar diya that scean is mindblowing...

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don't worry yaar,sid will come out of mitz obsession.😊but it will take some time.itni jaldi akal nahi ane wali use.he needs a jodka jhatka😆.that he will get at near future.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ase insan... oops

:-):-):-)

vampires...

like our sidy boy
jahatko se hi sambhalte hai...:-]
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guyz,hears the nxt chapp hope u like😊 pls read and do comment
"saans me teri saans mili toh,mujhe sans ayi"

chapp 22

alina smilled looking at abhay's reaction while she was coming down with pia and others.'uff this vampy,he is really crazy!!hope pia reminds everything 1st otherwise,ye pia ke naam ki mala japte japte pagalkhane pau6 jayega!!waise vampy's ka pagalkhana hota hain kya?'alina thought.but not only abhay,every1 was praising pia's beauti.'god panchi!!what have u worn me?itna lamba sleves mujhse chala nahi ja raha hain!!'pia moaned in mind.she came down slowly.every1 gathered arround pia and greeted her belated b'day.pia greeted them and thanked them to come.looking arround throgh the crowd,she searched everywhere.at last she found him standing alone at a corner,wearing a bluish black dress looking to her wid her irrresistable smirk.he again took her breath away.'god,how cld some1 be so prfct!!hey pia wake up!bahut jyada ho gaya!!! 'pia almost screamed in her mind.abhay suppresed his laughter and chuckled!!grabing her long sleves she was about to go towards him then suddenly a middle aged woman and an young man caught her."hello beta!!"the lady greeted her."good evening aunty!!"pia said with a smile."arey beta,don't u know me,i'm mrs reddy,i came in panchi's engagement."the lady said.pia cldn't remember.but smilled."he is my son anup.he works in a in a multinational company.he's monthly income is rs,30,000."she said.pia cldn't understand why mrs reddy was telling those things to her."it's really good aunty!!"pia said.mrs reddy's face glew ."u like it r8.see i told u anup pia wld like him at first chance!!pia beta can i get ur parent's ph no?"mrs reddy asked."whatt!!!???"pia's jaw dropped.now everything is cleared to her."yes beta why r u shaocked?anup liked u from the time he saw u in panchi's engagement and u just said that u also liked him so..."she was stopped in midway."xcuse me aunty i have to go!!"saying that pia almost ran from that place."hey pia where r u running?"misha asked."don't ask me misha,mrs reddy is behind me,she want me to marry his son!!!"pia said."what!!!that bhondu anup and u..."misha cldn't say anothr word else."listen i'm going now,jab wo log chale jaye mujhe bula lena!!"pia said and sweeped away from the place.

pia got out from the house and came to the lawn behind the mansion.it was a lonely place.there were a baricade of iron bar at the end of lawn.after that a deep unending gorge of himalay was streched.it was chill at outside.there might be another snow fall at the night.suddenly pia saw a fig standing near the baricade.first pia was lil bit amused who was standing at that place?but after sometimes she idenfied him and slowly forowarded her steps.

a plane arrived at the delhi airport.sidharth and danish came out from airport."so,sid we will catch up the bus tomorrow,there will be 2 to 3days to reach dehradoon."danish said."u don't know danish how much i'm xcited to reach there!!kitne dino tak hum yaha ane ka intezar kar rahe the!"sid said."why r u so xcited sid?dehradoon is not that much famous place!!"danish asked."well i like hills,beauti of the nature and mystrys and dehradoon is perfect place for that.and somewhere i heared dehradoon's girls r so beautiful."sid said."c'nt u thnk nythn other than gals?i d'nt knw how cld i introduce u to my fiance panchi.she hates guys like u!!"danish said."really,then i'll definately meat ur fiance."sid said.

pia came near the fence and stand at the left side of him."hey what r u doin hear?i thought u r inside!!"pia asked him."i know after running from that anup u'll come hear!"abhay said."so,u heared that?"pia laughed."ur xpression was worth watching!"abhay said."really?!"pia's smile widened.abhay was looking at her laughing face silently.how beautiful and pure she looked when she smilled like this!menaxi...his menaxi.was it really matter if she remembered everything or not?he just wanted her to be happy and to smile always.when he used to call menaxi's name and when he took pia's name,both gave him same feelings.name didn't matter.he just want to know if pia loved him or not?but what would happen when she would come to know about his most dangerous secret?his true nature!!unknown to him abhay was closing the distant between pia and him.pia also didn't noticed because she was busy at laughing but suddenly she saw abhay's face was just inches away from her and he was looking at her with that intense gaze,and she saw something which she never saw before.hunger!! yes he was too much hungry indded,not for her blood.but for just once to touch her face and feel her.looking into those eyes pia suddenly lost herself.abhay was also amazed looking to her reaction.without further hesitation he pulled her closer by her waist.pia put his both hands arround his neck.abhay listened to her heartbit which was running faster than ever.they both looked at each other.pia never saw him that much close,moonlight was glittering on his glorious marble face and he was looking like a greek god.pia never saw that much beautiful man in her whole lifetime.abhay was also amused by her beautiful face which was looking like an angel in moonlight.for the 1st time in life pia didn't get afraid by his closeness.she surrendered herself to that beautiful icy blue eyes which was intensely gazing at her.she closed her eyes feeling his cold breath on her face.abhay leaned to her and whishpered in her ears,"pia i want to tell u something!!i don't know u'll believe or not.but i am saying the truth!".pia opened her eyes and looked to her with a concerned gaze."i believe u abhay,i don't know how i developed this in this small time but i trust u most in this world!"pia said with a determined voice."pia i want to tell u that...that ur the most imp person in my life!!i c'nt stay away from u for a single moment.i want to give u each and every happiness in this world and to keep away every sadness from u forever!!i..I LOVE U PIA!!"abhay said with his beautiful manly voice.blood boiled and rushed through pia's vain,she looked to him with an amused face and her chicks turned red.she cldn't even spell a single word."trust me,this is the very truth i have said u,i just want to know do u feel the same way for me?"he asked again.his eyes curious and intense.pia suddenly cldn't found the answer.'cmn pia i know u feel for me,i can hear,every bit of ur heart,screaming those three words to me but i want to hear that from ur mouth!'abhay said in mind.but at that instant they heared a voice."pia,pia.."misha was searching for her.looking into her wide eyes and red chicks,abhay smirked."i'll wait for ur ans pia,no need to hurry,and know 1 thing that ur deccision won't effect our frndshp!it will be as same as brefore if u want to keep it!!"abhay said and before pia cld react he quickly left the place and vanished into fog!pia was shocked with the incident,she felt,her every feeling was changing."hey,there u r cmn those reddy's r gone!"misha said."what!!?oh ya let's go!"pia got out of trance and quickly get inside with misha.

precap:"panchi,how can u understand that u r in love with a person?"pia asked.panchi smilled ,"this is a very complicated question but when u feel that a perticular person has become very imp to u and u c'nt stay without seeing his face once in a day,when each and every scratch on him makes u feel his pain.when his every word increases ur heartbit!!that means u r in love wid him."

ps:abhay in party,😳
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late update😊,my sever wasn't working yeaterday😕
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 pia ke liye rishta aya😆
yay!! finally abhay conssed his feeling to pia😳
waiting for pia's response
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
V nice as always.mrs.reddy and anup scared piya.so abhay at last confessed his love to piya.loved it.but danger has arrived.precap sounds v interesting. 😊 thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow u knw wat its perfect update and that reddy's remind me of scean in pkyek serial when pinto's parents ask 4 misha rishta... nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guyz hears the next chapp pls read and don't forget to comment 😊
Naye naye naina mere dhoonde hai
Darbadar kyun tujhe
Naye naye manzar yeh tak te hai
Iss kadar kyun mujhe

chapp 23

pia was still in shock after the party was over.misha was busy in unpacking gifts.but she was not a lil bit interested about that.she cldn't believe her ears.abhay?he just proposed her?!but did he really like her?!pia thought deeply.no,he was telling the truth.she cldn't be wrong this time.the way he looked at her with that intense gaze,his concern,he was the first person to come and save her always while she was in danger.and yesterday,how he was mad at neal...!!!after that their talk in locker room,and today his confession...everything indicated only one thing.although pia didn't gave much notice to those things before.but now..the biggest problem was what she should tell him?she didn't had a lil bit xperience about those things.she didn't even thought about those things.her will was always to be a settled & successfull woman. it was not that she didn't talked to boys but all of them were just good friends of her and nothing else.untill this guy..abhay raichand who came in her life like a unxpected sweep of wind and change her world.did she really feel the same for him.it was true that she liked him also.she enjoyed evey moment she spend with him!but cldn't it be a close friendship?but what she felt when she was close to abhay it might not be only..."hey pia who send that?"misha asked breaking her train of thoughts.pia looked at her with confused face.she was holding a little rectangular box all covered with black velvet cloth."what's that?"pia asked."don't know yaar!!even there was not any name of sender.only some few lines."misha said.pia took the box from her.there was a paper glued on box which contained a line

'the most priceless gift i had for the most beautiful girl in my life'

"wow,kya line hain!!pia do u have any secret lover?"misha asked."shut up,pehele dekhne to de,what's the gift!!"pia said and opened the box carefully.they became surprised.it was containing a pair of beautiful designer anklet."what!!??who can give me gifts like this?!"pia wandered.misha took an anklet and her eyes wided."pia this is made of pure silver.look it is really heavy!!"misha said.pia frowned and took the anklet from her.she was r8!!"misha who can give that much xpensive gift to me?"pia said.misha jerked her sholdier in confusion.pia looked at the anklet and smilled,"jo bhi bol,it's very beautiful!!don't u think?"she said."chalo u liked it na?so,what's the matter who had send this?"misha said.suddenly madhu called her and misha ran.pia smilled and kneet the anklets in both of her ankles.it fitted her perfectly!she woke up from the ground and walked in the room the sound of that anklets made her childish smile wider.she didn't noticed the shadow beside her window who was keeping an eye on her always."i was keeping this safe for those long years.i'm glad that i can give it back to u menaxi!"abhay smilled looking to her face glowing with happiness.

again pia saw a dream that night,in her dream there were a boy and a girl.there face was blur.but she cld clearly heared there voice.the girl was saying,"u brought it for me?!"her voice was amused."u like it?"the boy asked."ofcourse,it is beautiful.thx abhayendra!"the girl said in a cheerfull voice."a friend never say thx to a frnd spacially when he brought gifts in her b'day!happy b'day menaxi!"the guy said.after pia's dream broke.it was almost 7 am.she woke up rubbing her eyes.it was an odd dream.but nice!a boy and a girl..what was there name..ya abhayendra and menaxi!sweet name.hey wait a sec.!!pia remembered,abhay used to call her by this name.yes,menaxi!!the thought of abhay caused a faint blush on her chicks.she thought many times but she also had some doubts.it was clear to her that abhay was not only a friend to her but something more than that!but what was that she cldn't decided yet.she yanked and jumped from the bed.the anklets on her foot sonded like a beautiful hermony through the whole house.panchi caught her at the verandah."hey pia goodmorning!"she greeted."same to u panchi"pia said.suddenly her eyes fell on her legs,following the sound."oww pia nice anklet!where did u get it?"panchi asked."some1 gifted me yesterday!"pia said with a smile."wawoo!!i am just wandering most of the people will gift u books because they know u r a book warm!otherwise teddys,show pices,flowers.yeh anklet kisne diya hain??!!oww oww some1 spacial??!!"panchi said in a mischevious smile."arey nahi panchi!!do u think that some1 cld be interested on me?"pia asked."seriously yaar u don't know urself quite well.tum jaise ladki ke liye to ladko ka line ke line lag jayenge!!"panchi teased"but seriously pia,u r hear for more than 6 months.koi bhi ladka tume a66a nahi laga!!i remember within the 6 months of our clg we allready had 3 crushes."panchi smilled saying that,"but u know pia,when mom and dad fixed my marriage to danish and we met each other i found the true love in him."panchi said.pia's face suddenly became thoughtfull,"panchi,how can u understand that u r in love with a person?"pia asked.panchi smilled ,"this is a very complicated question but when u feel that a perticular person has become very imp to u and u c'nt stay without seeing his face once in a day,when each and every scratch on him makes u feel his pain.when his every word increases ur heartbit!!that means u r in love wid him."she said"but why r u asking those things to me?"with every description of panchi,only one fig flashed in her mind and she ran away with red face leaving doubtfull panchi behind.pia quickly got inside her room and looked into mirror.she cldn't even identify her ownself,this pia was really another person.she never thought it cld happen to her.a heavenly smile appeared on her face.she quickly grabed her cell to call,but then resisted herself.she thought to go herself.she wore a white salwar which really looks pretty on her and got outside.

she didn't know the way to his house.but she managed to found after asking a few people.she was surpised to c that the house was just at the edge of forrest and qutite a lonely place.but the house seemed empty.there was a huge lock hanging from gate.so,with distressed heart she was about to go back when some1 closed her eyes from her behind.she didn't afraid a lil and smilled."why r u closing my eyes?"she asked."u did the same thing with me in locker room!also do u know ur eyes makes me crazzy??"the beautiful manly voice said. pia shifted his hand from her eyes and look behind to sea abhay's beautiful face just inches away from her.she took a few steps backward from him to keep her mind stable,"why r u hear?"abhay asked quriously.although he knew everything before."to give u the ans of the question u asked me yesterday night!"pia said with an indifferent look."relly,what have u decided?"he smirked."what do u think i would say,frm the first day of the clg u r getting on my nerves!!i told u to stay away but u never listened.even u became my good friend which i cldn't imagine in my worst nightmare!!but sorry abhay i can't be ur friends anymore."she said with serious face.abhay's became stunned by the change of her mode.should he wait for more times?but suddenly pia smilled"cause i understood,u r more than that to me!u r the person for whom i care most in this world,for whom i cld cry and also smile with him!he,who came in my life and changed everything!i don't even know when i developed this feelings for u,but yes,u won me!I LOVE U ABHAY RAICHAND!".she said those words looking straight into his icy blue eyes,her voice didn't shake a lil bit.that time abhay got hypnotized by her.he came out of transe looking at her smilling face.then with a flash he ran towards her and hugged her tightly!!pia was amused to look at his reaction.she didn't xpected this guy who always flirt with her,cld have that much intense feeling for her!she kept her hand on his back and closed her eyes with an angelic smile.

precap:"...mujhe chodke to nahi jaoge na?"she asked him."never!!!"he said with a smile.

ps:hows this quickly reply karo😊
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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so sorry ria for commenting to late but now a days busy in studies exam will becoming so thats why more inactive form forum...come to the updates last 3 chapters ufff too good yar..just love the angry side of abhay how he beat neal...he deserve that...just love the scene of abhiya in locker room...and shyly piya place her hand on abhay eyes☺️...alina is so funny too na...shit this maithili and sid both are so evil and T helping them...abhiya confession❤️ superb scene how abhay held her close by waist and look to her intensely so romantic...abhay only come to party for piya so sweet...aww abhay gift piya anklet that he gave this to mexanci😳...but piya didnt know about this...so finally piya confess her feelings to abhay yupieee☺️...aww so cute gesture abhay hugged her so tightly but now sid and maithili coming back hope both abhiya remian and fight back with them...
awsome and mind blowing updates👍🏼
Edited by bellaaa - 12 years ago

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