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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome.neil deserved dat punishment.im curious dat wat will b piyas reaction on knowing abhays truth.precap sounds interesting.thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated another chapp guyzz.it's a lil bit slow😕.but i will try to make my next chapp xciting,hope u like it😃.pls read and comment
chapp 21

"u don't know siddharth,how much i have tried to find him in this long 200 yers"maithilli said furiously."at last i got to know about abhayendra."she said."but how do u come to know about my lil brother!!"sid asked quriously.maithilli look towards the dark forrest and smirkrd.a girl wearing black knee length dress and the face was fully covered with make up and lipstick.sid was also amazed to c her,"tanushree u!!yeh kaisa avatar hain tumhara?"he cldn't cntrl himself."shutup ur mouth!!and don't call me by that 200 year old f**kin name call me 't' understand?"the girl said angrilly.sid suppresed the smile wid a gr8 efffrot looking at the 500 years old witch,although she merely looks like a teenage girl."tanushree was living in dehradoon's forrest for few years.he informed before a month she infrmd me that abhayendra had come their,he is living there wid 1 of the most powerfull vampire clan raichands'.he named himself as abhay raichand.but we r forbidden to go to that land.they belongs to another vamp clan.but ur business partner danish had invited u in there i found a way to go there,if u can go there our whole clan will come follwing u!!"maithilli said."yes,thus we can cntrl my lil brother's spacial powers!! which we don't have!!"sid smirked."yes,sid i can get his powers,i wonder sid.he was changed into vampire by me!!then how cld abhayendra can get those superpowers which we don't have.i need those powers sid,i need those power to conqr vampires world."maithili said loudly and her red eyes glew in greed."mind reading,supervission...all r really a rare gift for a vampire.u have to be too much sensable in ur human life to get those gifts!!"t whispered."i don't know anything about that tanushree,i just want to get the evry superpowers of vampires by hook or by crook,i am princess maithilli singh!!!i was born to rule the world and i'll get evrything i want!!!"maithili scramed in evil laughter."but aren't u forgetting something maithilli?"t said."what??"maithilli asked in puzzled tone."about ur twin sister menaxi!!"t prompted.maithilli was frozed for a moment but again burst into laughter,"don't laugh me tanushree ,my sister menaxi who was dead on that night!!how cld a dead human hurt me?"maithili said,"now u two go and get ready for the trip."maithilli ordered."bye jaan!!"sid looked at maithilli with loving eyes."ya bye,sidharth."maithilli gave a smile to him.t smirked secretly.after that both sid and t left maithilli behind!"what a dumb u r sid!maithilli was just using u and u r just..!!!why don't u left her sid?"t proposed."how dare u t? how can u said against my maithilli?u know how much we love each other!!"sid said crazzily."love!!sid that woman doesn't have the eabillity to love anyone!she only think about herself and when she won't need u anymore she will left u on the midway.u trust me or not this is the truth!"t said."yes,i don't believe in a single word of u.if u hate maithilli that much then why r u helping her?"sid asked."i have my own problems sid.par jab danger ayega tab main to bhagjaungi!!but tum hi bas balika bakhra banoge!!"t said."what danger?i c'nt understand!!why r u talkin about menaxi btw!!is it possible for a dead human to come back again?"sid asked quriously."u can't undetstand the power of true love sid!!the true lovers possesed a very strong willpower which can do every impossible thing."t said."really??"sid smilled."don't laugh,a feeble woman's willpower can also be stronger than u and me if she use it properly!and don't u remember how abhayendra was madly in love with menaxi?!!after menaxi's death he told us that he belives his menaxi will come back to him and he will wait for her as long as it take!!!i saw his determined voice.as much as i know him he is still waitin for nenaxi unless she is back!!!"with a single breath t finished her long speech.sid looked at the sky,it's being cleared.a new dawn was comig!!

pia found misha at the garden waiting for her when she came back home from dehradoon sporting club.misha rushed to her."r u okay?where have u gone?"misha asked."everythings fine.was aunty asking about me?"pia asked."no every1 is outside.so.."misha infrmd."it's good."pia said.then a car reached at the gate and panchi and madhu came inside the gate."arey,agaye tumlog?how was the xam?"madhu asked"fi9 aunty,but where have u gone?"pia asked.madhu and panchi smilled."we have gone to prepare for ur b'day party celeb!!!"panchi infrmd."what??!!but.."pia cldn't finish the word"yes madam,aap to raji honeko nahi the..so,hum dondo ne akele he sara intezam karliya.party is held on tomorrwow evening.and we have invited every1."panchi said mischeviously."what tum logo ne invitation tak bhej dia!!oh no."pia moaned."yes pia we all wanted to celebrte ur b'day.spacially me and arnav.ur like our own daughter.won't u listen to us??"madhu said.pia smilled and nodded in agreement.

a policevan had stopped in front of raichand mansion.chand unlocked the door before some1 knocked."goodevening inspector!!pls come inside."chand greeted in a velvet voice."hello mr raichand.sorry to disturb u,but we have a complain against ur son abhay."inspector infrmed."and what's that?!!"chand asked."mr sighaniya complained that ur son had tried to kill his son neal!mr raichand,i know u r a very reputated and powerfull person of this town and i didn't build up the case officially.so.."inspectr gave an indicated look towards chand."how much u need inspector?"chand asked."nothing just.."before inspector cld finish chand said"go to the left side room,my secretarry is there.u'll get ur money."..."ur a very good business man mr raichand!"officer said and went to other room and bid adue chand after collecting money.after he hasd gone chand came to abhay's room.hassena and alina was standing at a corner.abhay was sitting on a couch witha furious gaze towards wall."haseena,samjhao ise!!today,he was just going to xpose us!!!"chand said angrilly."i didn't do anythin wrong.i didn't kill him.he wld be fine!!i promissed i wld never do nything that will xpose us.but i c'nt tollerate if some1 hurts pia!!"abhay said in same angry voice."hold urself abhay!!u c'nt loose ur furi for that mere human girl!!"chand said."she is not a mere human girl.she is my menaxi.."abhay screamed."i don't have time to waste fighting with u!now get ready.we r going to attened a party."chand said in a comanding voice and get out of the room."i'm not going anywhere!!"abhay said stubbornly.hassena was about to tell something but alina stooped her midway and said,"okay if u don't wanna go,then stay!!we don't have problems.cmn haseena,hum to ja rahe hain pia ka b'day celeb party attened karne!!"..."what!!!??"abhay turned to alina with a shocked face.alina gave him an mischevious smile.

party was about to start.people had started to cme.alina came with kabir to meet them."hello alina!!"panchi and misha greeted her wid a smile."hello guyyzz hey where's b'day girl?"alina asked."we r just going to fetch her!!"panchi said."can i go wid u?"alina said."sure cmn.."misha said.when the trio reached at pia's room they saw in a shock that she was not ready yet!!"pia,what happned?why aren't u ready yet."panchi asked."sorry panchi,but mujhse ye sab nahi hoga! i never wore that kind of coastky dress.and also i thnk i won't look good in that gown."pia indicated the gown panchi kept for her."arey,who said that u won't look good!!koi batake to dekhe uski toh.."misha said.pia's face became more confused."pia relax,u'll look really good in that gown.trust me.cmn,main tume taiyar kar deti hoon!"alina proposed."but.."pia said."no offense.just come.."alina said.

raichand's reached at the party.arnav and madhu greeted them."nice party mr dobriyal."chand said."thanku mr raichand!!"arnav greeted.abhay was searching for pia at every corner but cldn't find her,perhaps she didn't came down yet!"btw,where r ur daughters?and the girl for whom the party is held?"chand asked."they r comin.."madhu infrmed.at that moment pia came down along with others wearing a beautiful blue gown which clung to her body like a flowing water,her hairs r knitted in a bun.some locks were hanging over her right eyebrows.she was looking xtremely grgs and beautiful.abhay cntnud to gaze her with amazed eyes.

precap:for the 1st time in life pia didn't get afraid by his closeness.she surrendered herself to that beautiful icy blue eyes which was intensely gazing at her.she closed her eyes feeling his cold breath on her face.

pia's party dress 😃
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.both haseena and alina shares good bonding with abhay and he is really obssesive and protective of piya.love his craziness.chand never understands him.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar plz sid ko metz ke claw se bachalo... and wapas raichands ke pass bhej do... and yeh metz how evil she is dont even think abt her sister... bechara poor abhay... wase jab chand ne party m jane ko kaha and aby-baby ne nana kar diya that scean is mindblowing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
precap is looking interesting
continu asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing abhay to pia ka naam sunte hi sab kuch bhul jata hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome wow i love this
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
abhay is so much in luv with pia hope pia reciprocates him the same way.
got to agree that t is more smarter than sid and know maithili's exact motives.
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update👏 God this metz!!!! metz ka real face t jan gayi bt sid use akal nai ayi...pia ka nam sunti hi abhay sab chiz ke liy han kr deta hai😆 eagerly waiting for next one...!

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