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Posted: 12 years ago
superb last 2 chapters😊
just love the way abhay wished piya her birthday ..memorizing scene
poor misha cant wish her first hahaha
shit now sid and maihtili coming back
hope piya will remian safe
so piya missed abhay too
neel again crosses his limit now abhay definitely will teach him a lesson...such a jerk
abhay saved piya lovely scene


Edited by bellaaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey its interesting update... m waiting to listen neel musical instruments by abhay... but one thing i thought that u are going to make metz and sid gud but oops they never change... mujhe to metz ki entry ke bare mein soch kar dar lag raha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update !👏
Bechari mishu , second ho gayi !😆
Arggh that neel , he's really crossing his limits now !😡
Hope abhay uski zor dar dhulai karde . 😉
Waiting for maithili's entry .
Continue soon and thanks for the Pm !

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read chap 18.wow.da title was out of dis world.loved it.maithli pir aagai.thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update!
Thnk God Abhay saved Piya on time! Neel ki toh Abhay😡.
Waiting 4 BBB of Neel.
Cntinue asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awosome last 3 chp
like the way abhay wish pia's birthday
its bad sid & mathili is coming back
continu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story pl\z update soon
it's an ama\zing story to read
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww...lovely update.abhay is so so careful...wretched neel...I want to do his bbb along with abhay...and I want the whole collegeto know what he did...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great great great job.loved it.cant wait.plz continue soon.thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fshhh!!eable to complete the chapp at last😉.it was hard to write😊.and yes it's long 1😆.hope u like it.do read and comment guyzz...
"when ur hurt,i feel the pain more than u!!!"

chapp 20

pia and misha was waiting for their car outside the clg."how's the paper pia?"misha asked."fi9,ur's?"pia asked."mera to mat pu6 yaar bas paas ho jaye!!!"misha said,"btw,xam khatam,have u remembrd ur promisse?"..."what promisse?"pia asked wid confusion."grand b'day party!!!"misha said loudly."oh no,tu abtak nahi bhooli?"pia said."hw cn i frgt yaar?we all were waiting for that!!"misha said."baap re tumlog,sab ke sab pagal mere palle hi parte hain!!"pia said.suddenly a middle aged man approached to her wid wide fearful eyes.pia and misha recgnized him.he was jonathan,the sweeper of the clg."hello john uncle,how's evrything?"pia asked."forgive me beta!"john said with grief."but why uncle?!"pia asked in confusion."because i mixed a drug on ur water bottle today,so u cldn't be eable to attened paper!!"john said."whatt??!!!"both misha and pia were dumbfonded."john uncle how dare u..."misha was about to burst on jonathan.but pia stopped her."john uncle,i know u r a honest person,u c'nt do this on ur own!!tell me who forced u to do this?"pia asked."u r r8 pia beta! neal sighaniya told me to do this,he threated me that he wld kill me if i didn't act like he said."jonathan cnfrmd."oh god,that neal again!!!"misha gasped."john uncle,who else know about these?"pia asked."only u 2,neal and abhay raichand!"jonathan said."what abhay??!!"pia shocked."yes,he came to me just after few mins ago!!he was really mad pia beta,i don't know how he cld be able to know about neal!!so,i had to tell him everything."john uncle wandered.pia was also wandering how abhay cld know about those things.but the worst thing that was bugging her head that what abhay's gonna do with neal.she knew his anger and furi more than any1.when he was mad he cld do the worst possible thing!!!!! horror stucked on her face."misha u go back.i'll come after."pia said and ran towards clg ground."but pia..."misha screamed but pia was far away.after searching for some moments pia found saurya and neal on d clg ground.they were lolitering and when saurya found pia rushing to her he again got terrified."mar gaye,again that superwoman is coming towards us!!ab kya karne wali hain?"saurya said.pia came in front of them."saurya where's neal?"she asked."but sister,what had he done now?agar tume phir uska band bajana hain toh..."saurya was stopped in midway by pia's frustrated scream"stop ur drama saurya!!if u wanna get back ur brother allive then quickly tell me where he cld be?" pia screamed."ok ok,he must be in dehradoon sporting club!!he had a passion for boxing and today he had a mach!!"saurya informed.widout wasting a moment pia rushed towards road.

in dehradoon sporting club,neal just won a round and his oponent was nocked out at a corner.the crowd was cheerring on his name.lifting his two boxing gloves coverd hands he was screaming in the overjoy of winning.then suddenly,his eyes fell on the door and he saw his approaching death coming towards him like a black thunder.that guy stunned evry1 present at that hall.he removed his black shirt continuing his running.evry1(spacially females) gasped looking to his well build,stone hard muscles and chest under his black vest.he jumped in the boxing ring like a fearless lion and grabbed the vest of stunned neal in a sweep."whaattt theee???..."neal cldn't even finish his words and flinched in pain as abhay threw him on the rope holding iron bar with a huge force."i told u not to harm pia!!!!..."he said with a roar.his eyes were burning in anger,neal was allready paralized to look into his deep blue firey orbs."this is for trying to heat pia with ur car."abhay twisted the joint of his right hand with a gr8 sound of breaking bones."that's for trying to proove her a thief!"abhay said even more furiously.before neal cld feel the pain abhay crushed him on the floor of ring and gave a stroke on his backbone with his elbow!!blood over flows from neal's mouth.he had allready loosened his most of senses."this is for trying to kill her."with those words abhay stroke on neal's face and he fell on ground all covered by blood.now he furiously grabed his throat and suddenly his hand fell on neals silver chain."aahhh!!!!"abhay roared like an animal in pain.and flinched away from him.abhay fell on the ground with immmense pain loosing his sence.at that instant,god knows how neal got up from ground.although his legs was shaking he forowarded to abhay's falling body with jumbled legs.neal gathered his full strength and lift his hand to give a stroke.but at that instant pia got inside.he saw neal was going to strike abhay.her heart jumped in horror.she forgot that she came hear to stop abhay to kill neal."abhayyy..."pia screamed in her full strength.that scream was enough to brought back abhay's sence.he quickly opened his eyes and gave a punch to neal's face."ahhh!!!!"neal screamed and fell on the ground.totally knocked out.abhay stood up in a sweep.the hall bursted into clap and droolings of girls on his victory.abhay looked into the direction from where he heared the scream.he looked at that side and saw pia looking at him with horror stuck face.abhay got out of ring leaving unconcious neal behind and avoiding the crowd.and went to the inside of the hall.pia saw abhay's two plams ozzed with deep red blood before he vanished behind walls.pia dumbly looked at his way and to the blood covered body of unconcious neal.she ran towards the way where abhay went.

abhay was standing inside the lonely locker room.he was gasping in anger.his eyes didn't loose the fury at all.he was all angry that he cldn't kill that wretched neal!!pia reached at the door of the locker room and found abhay inside.she quickly got inside the room abhay was standing facing his back to her.so pia cldn't c his facial xprssn but listening to his freq breaths she easilly understood that he was awfully mad."why are u hear????"abhay suddenly asked shifting his neck lil bit to her direction."what do u mean?i have to come,otherwise u wld kill neal!!!"pia said in a loud voice."yes,i'll kill neal!!don't u forget he tried to kill u!!how dare he!!!"he said in a furious tone."so,what's the matter if he tried to kill me?!!for that u'll kill him cold blooded!!!??? r u animal?? who always wants blood for blood!!!"pia screamed in anger."YES, I AM AN ANiMAL!!!"abhay turned his furious mad face full of anger to her," u r r8, i'm nothing but an animal,who doesn't have any1 in this wrld rather than u!!who can go to any extent for u! who can destry each and every being that harms u even his ownself!!!yes an animal pia!!i'm a true animal!!!"abhay's eyes were full of anger,furiness,and madness.his deep blue eyes were blazing in firy sight!!pia was frozed looking into that eyes,horror stucked her face and dumbed her.she was like a feeble deer who was standing in front of the fearless lion caught by her hypnotic gaze,who didn't have strength to scream.unknown to pia a teardrop rolled from her horrified wide eyes.looking into those tears abhay suddenly got back his sence and noticed her shaking features.his anger melted intogrief and his eye color changed slowly into normal."pia,pia..."before abhay cld finish pia turned back to hide his tears. it eas the 1st time she cried infront of any1 else,rather than her mom.she didn't like to show weekness.abhay was mad to his ownself to make her cry,"pia i'm sorry,i'm really sorry.i didn't know what happened to me!!" he said in a mad but appolozizing voice."why abhay,why???u told me u r an animal!!so,why r u regretting now?an animal shldn't have any kindness towards any1!!"her voice was cracking and she secretly rubbed her tears.to cntrl her outburst she bit her lips and was about to go outside,"pia,pia listen pls don't.."he streched his hand to stop her and his palm caught her view.with an worried face she quickly grabbed his palm and turned to face him."what happened to ur hands??i saw those were bleeding!!!!how is it??"her voice was almost broken and tears were flweing from her eyes although she saw with amusement that there was not a single drop of blood on his palms.abhay understood she had seen the blood which was caused by that silver chain on neal's throat which he healed just a moment ago.but,he was rather surprised to c pia's reaction and his worried face."tumhe dard to nahin ho raha hain na?is it fi9 now,wher's ur other hand.sit down and let me c!!"she forced him to sit down."pia it's okay,nothing happened...!!!"abhay tried to assure.but suddenly pia kept her one hand over his lifeless heart and pushed him to sit,"i don't want to hear anything!!now pls listen to me at once!!"abhay was almost stunned by her touch over her dead heart and he cldn't deny after watching her wet eyes.pia sat along with him and looked into his broad palms with tearful eyes."pia i said.everythings fi9!u don't need to worry!!"abhay said again."ya,everythings really fi9 for u r8 abhay??!!but it's not dat easy for me!what do u thnk u only care for me!!u knw how much i was terrified when i saw neal going to heat u!!what i felt when i saw ur blood covered palms??u never know how much i was afraid when i was rushing madly to come hear!!if something happened to u i cld never forgive myself!!!!"pia bursted those words and look away bitting her lips to cntrl her outburst.abhay was in too much shock after hearing those words.'pia u care for me that much!!!!!for a bloodsucker like me,'he said in his mind'i thought i cared for u more than u!!but u again prooved me wrong,ur feelings are much deeper than me,the purest feeling for me that i ever sensed from a girl.i'm sorry pia,i'm so sorry to hurt u!!pls forgive me pls!!!'saying those words in his mind he gently grabbed pia's one hand with his broad palms.pia was almost stebillized then.she looked towards abhay and was mesmirized.she never saw his eyes that much beautiful and full of love.there was concern for her,grief to make her cry,above all a overjoyed happiness and amusement.pia felt her every pain washed asay after looking into those eyes who cressed over her face.every corner her heart filled up with a butiful feeling.she smilled and suddenly covered his two eyes with her free hand.abhay was stunned by her formal gesture.he felt her soft hands over his stone hard eyelids."aise mat dekho,"pia said"nazar lag jayegi!!".she said.abhay touched her palm and breathed her beautiful scent.pia removed her hand and stood up.they looked at each other with a smile.then she left the room with all startled abhay.

meanwhile in new jercy,it was almost last few hours of night.a girl was standing at the middle of dence forrest.a male fig approced out of the forrest.the girl turned back,she had the look xsactly like pia,same facecut,same height only she had straight hairs and wering a red victorian gown."everything's done maithili,we r ready to go.".the male voice said."it's a very good news sid.time to go back to our homeland!!"maithili dark red eyes blazed into evilness.they both smiled like evil.

precap."u don't know sid,how much i have tried to find him in this long 200 yers"maithilli said furiously.

so hows it?jaldise rply karo!😉
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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