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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome.add me to ur pm list and do pm me.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome update very good and continue please👏😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all thanks 4 pm and d story omg omg its fabulous... love the update so loverboy apni minakshi ke piche piche aa gaya college main bhi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by @trishnawalia
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first of all thanks 4 pm and d story omg omg its fabulous... love the update so loverboy apni minakshi ke piche piche aa gaya college main bhi...
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Welcome dr😊
Kya kare bechara pyar to honahi tha😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey just read both the ch...😊great start dear...loved the concept nd cs👏 Plz pm me too...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww lovely...soo Pia reborn & its her past image...lovely😊thanx pm me...plz continue asap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all apologies for another huge long chapter.itried to make it short but i've many things to describe in this chap.i wish u will like it despite of it's length.and a heartly thnx to evry1 who had appriciated my work😊.i promise my next chapp will be shorter than this keep enjoying and keep replying about my ff.😃

Tujhe sochta hoon main shaam oh subah
Iss se zyada tujhe aur chahoon toh kya

chapp 3
the three persons who had just occured from nowwhere slowly took their steps towards collage building.
the middle aged man and woman seemed husband and wife.the man was wearing an xpensive denim attire and the woman was wearing a black shiffon wid sleevless blouse.but they were not the centre of attracktion.
the young man seemed merely 20 years old.wearing a black 3 qrtr t shirt and blue jeans.he had a very well built masculine body,fair skined,rectangular sharp face,black bangs falling over his fore heads,his eyes were covered with sunglasses...too much perfect!!!enough to take some1's breath with just 1 look,evry girl present there was watching him mouthwatering!!!panchi was watching over him like a statue.
only pia was the exeption,it's not that pia didn't noticed him but she was rather dazzled by the girls behavior, why they were standing there and watching him like they are in a transe!!what's so great about him hn? the boy didn't give any attention to the drolling girls and entered inside the admission office .
pia was continuously calling panchi whose eyes were continuously gazing at the direction of admission building entrance..."panchiii..."pia screamed loudly in front of her ear to make her concious."hey hey what whattt..."panchi jumped."don't ask me..."pia said in a irritated voice"chilla chilla kar gala phat gya mera,what happened to u? aisa lag raha tha ki tumpe koi bhoot sawar ho gaya hain!!!!"
"not bhoot yaar..."panchi said in a dreamy voice."that guy!!!"
"whose that guy?"then pia asked quriously."abhay raichand!!"panchi said with a blush"and they are his parents chand and hasina raichand.they just mooved hear a couple of months ago,ever since he came he,became the heartthroab of every girl of this town.oh god i c'nt believe,ab is clg ki larkiyo ka toh khair nahi!"panchi became xcited.pia gave a confusion-queston mixing look towards entrance then said in a indifferent voice"cmn panchi,u too!i can understand about other bimbos but u are not meant to behave like this!!!"
"i swear pia i've never been a bimbo in my whole life who drolls over evry handsome hunks,but this abhay raichand,he has some spacial charm u know..."panchi said.
"cmn panchi come out of ur dream!!!"pia laughed looking at her satate"don't forget ur going to marry soon. i can never allow u to ditch my super jijsss..."pia said"arey oh jijs ki salliii.."panchi said "i am never gonna ditch danish...and ur jij also know that.abhay is just my sudden likeness which never stayed for long,but danish...i c'nt ever think myself without him.he is my life and i'm very much loyal to him with my last breath!!!"panchi said with a burst.pia is terrified of her sudden mode change"ok ok no need of long speech."pia said to calm her down.."i'm convinced!!"..."u better be..."panchi said.
abhay and his familly came inside.the lady asked them goodmorning mr and mrs raichand what can i do for you?"
"i have came hear for the admission of my son abhay..."mr raichand greeted towads abhay.
"i'm afraid but admission is closed today!!!"she informrd."perhaps u could manage..."abhay asked her leaning to her table."sorry but i c'nt do anything!all seats are full."she said hesitantly.abhay smirked and and indicated something to chand! chand also indicated towards hasina and she brought out a bundle of rs15000 and threw on the table."perhaps it could change ur mind." chand said."but mr raichand..."the woman was still hesitating."sorry but mrs gupta u r forgetting whom u r talking to...if u didn't agree to admit the son of the head trusty of this clg then i've to talk to chairman."chand warned."no no mr raichand.."mrs gupta was terrified then and grabbed the bundle."your son will be admitted soon.u don't have to take the trouble to go to chairman!!!!"...she quickly started the formalities raichands smirked towards each other in victory!
after sometimes they came out.evry girl looked at abhay with their dreamy eyes.abhay smirked,he was used to this kind of attentions but never minded.his eyes fall over two girls buzzing at the corner.he continued his steps...
pia was cheerfuly talking with panchi then suddenly panchi's eyes broaded again and fixed on something.this time pia didn't got confused and turned back to sea him coming out.
the tall,handsome fig sudenly stoped in front of pia and panchi.he removed his sunglasses and looked towards them with his icy blue mesmerizing orbs!before that he didn't have any impact upon pia but when he looked straight into his eyes she felt a sudden shock.such a powerfull eyes,pia had to look away to distract herself."hello abhay,hows going?"panchi greeted him with asmile."good.."he said and gave a beautiful crooked smile.then he turned towards pia who was silently listening."so how's everything?"abhay suddenly asked her with a friendly tone.pia got confused and looked at him with a smug.abhay was continuing with his smile."fi9..."finally she answered with a sigh."but why are u asking me?we don't even know each other."she said
"look carefully...perhaps u saw this face long time ago!"abhay said with a slightly eager voice.perhaps he want her to remember himself."i am afraid you are confusing me with some1 else"pia said in a cold voice"come on panchi i'm tired now!!!"then without wasting a moment she stormed towards car and panchi ran before her screaming her name.those icy blue eyes continued to gaze at her footsteps!
precap:misha fell down from bed in sudden push...😆
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its interesting and u knw wat i cant believe that its ur first ff... u write so well and u knw wat i luv long update rather than short one so continu wid long one... and ya its request as the name of ur ff is intazaar so plz add the line of song from movie paap "intazaar intazaar meri suabha ko teri shamo ka..." something like this before any chapter of ur ff it go wid ur story and story look attractive.. either u break lines of song and add in start of of each chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so glad that u start to write an ff on abhiya
welcome yar
i read cs and all chappy of ff
great start yar
piya is so jolly nature
well narrate the dream of piya of fire and whose that person watching piya
and love the entry of abhay and how girl drooling and the power of raichands just awsome scene
and finally abhiya meet
did abhay met piya already? or thought of her someone else?
but like the conversation of abhiya
cont soon
and plzz pm me too next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update and thankz for the pm.

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