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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Update !👏
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wahoo amazing update & ur ff really soo much interesting👏btw I love long update dear...& try more long dear...thanx 4 pm me...continue asap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update
do pm me 4m next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww thank u for lovely response😊.now the next chapp & this chapp is totally dedicated to my most fav 2 ch of pkyek...misha and pia..so sorry no abhiya.but hope u'll enjoy it like my other chapps and i don't think i could ever post a small chapp😆.and also i won't be eable to post chapp for some weeks my exams are coming😕 btw i'll pm u as soon as i'll be back from my exam till then be well do well and keep replying,love u all😊
yaro dosti badi hi hassen hain
ye na ho toh kya phir,bolo yeh jindagi hain..😳
chapp 4
"hey pia,if u and abhay don't know each other then why was he talking like this?" panchi asked turning the steering wheel of car."how could i know?"pia made a face"perhaps i've only one assumption that he was trying to flirt with me." she told with an extremely irritated and monotonus voice."oh god!!"panchi gigles"you know pia u have quite a nerve! he was talking with u like this and u totally overestimated him!if there was any other girls i can bet she would be faint at the spot,tume to award milna chahiye!!!"panchi said mischeviously.
"now come on panchi!!!"pia laughed"i hadn't done anything gr8,a person unknown to u comes to u and asks odd questions,then u are not supposed to droll over his beauti and looks!!thats what i think."she said.panchi smilled"u r very different u know pia,from both inside and outside."pia also gave a light smile"not different panchi,i'm just a little bit serious about my study and career!ever since papa died,me and mama came to face this rough world and i felt the reality!i saw my mama to manage both officeworks and hoseheld alone with only her two hands and she faced everything just to brought me up,so i've decided my 1st priority would be to get a good job and make my mama proud.untill then i c'nt allow myself to deviate from my aim for any reason!!!" pia was lost in her word.panchi patted her shoulder lovingly.pia smilled towards her.panchi said"i know,some day u'll be a very successfull person and make sugandha aunty proud."then added wid a slight irritatin."kash misa ko bhi thoda bahut tumhari jaisi akal mil jati to mom dad ki chinta thodi kam ho jati!"after hearing misha's name,pia was back in her mode"us misha ki bachi ko main aaj dekhloongi...just one min late and admission would be over!!! i won't leave her this time."pia said with the funniest angry face ever!
there was a room in beautiful dobriyal mansion,all messed up!!books,cloths,guiter,jeans every stuffs were scattering hear and there,one pair of snikker was near almirah another was near window,walls were almost covered with the popsatrs' pics.among this mess there was a bed in which a curly short haired girl wearing attires like a tomboy,sleeping unconciously!!!no need to say that was our darling misha dobrial,unconcious by the countless pegs which she took at the party of yesterday night.panchi and pia entered in her room."now look at her..."panchi said with a dissapointing tone."just wait panchi i'm handling her...she rushed towards bed"misha,hey mishaaa,alsi kahiki,queen victoria uth..."speaking those words loudly she pushed so hardly and misha fell down from bed in sudden push...
misha was allready woke up by loud voice and that push was enough"heyyy...what...auochhh,hey whose ittt!!!!"misha rubbed her hair and opened her eyes...when she saw pia infront of her standing with a angry face,her jaw drooped"pia you!!!????" pia crossed her leg and sat infront of her."yes i am"she informed."but the time..."then misha looked at clock.
"aaa..."she screamed but stopeed in midway by pia's angry voice!!!
"yeah it's 2:30pm and u supposed to be pick me at 8am."she said with a burstt and grabbed misha's coller."u call me best friend and u knw what u have done to ur best friend???? i've never walked that much long distant after my 6th grade independance day parade!!never been trapped in roadside because of rain and u know ay almost missed my admission if panchi didn't pick me at the road!!!"pia burst out all her frustrations and panchi was qutely enjoying at the corner.it was alwas a treat to watch the convo btwn them.
"eeekkksss sorry yaar..."misha said in a funny-scary voice."actually maine kal raat kuch jyada hi pi li thi..."pia was almost in tears and started to beat misha "ouch ouch buddy what r u doing?"misha said."ha isi layak hain tu..."pia had allready started sobbing"that bunch of rubish wines are more imp to u than me?i'll kill u!"now misha smilled heavily."what happened,why are u smilling?"pia asked."agar marnewala khud ro raha ho toh mar khanewala kya kare?"misha said with a smile.now pia also smilled in teary eyes and hugged her from back side,they both stand up smilling and supporting each other..."why u always do it misha?"pia asked in a sobby voice"u know i don't like to beat u it hurts me too." misha smilled and rubbed her tears"now stop crying,u know ur beating is like tonic to me if i do'nt get it freq i fell ill".they both smilled."chalo,"panchi interrupted"if everything is done btwn u 2,pia get freshen up..."
"arey bhai yahan kya ho raha hain?"suddenly mr dobrial appeared in the middle."hey papa,aap kab aye?"panchi asked."just now,but awaaz sunke lag raha tha upar mahabharat chal raha hain!!!!"..."what bharat????"misha asked confusingly."tu chup kar.u know papa what have ur lovely daughter have done?"panchi explained everything."misha i've told u many times..."arnav told after hearing evrything"just be a lil responsible,like me..."before he can start a voice interruped"yeh hunar bhi use apse mila hain!!!"mrs dobrial came inside."madhu tum..."arnav get confused."ya me,i told u to send ur car at 12 but there was nothing and i've to come hear through 2 hours bus journey!!!"..."but i..."arnav continued.panchi indicated them,it's time to go.panchi pia and misha skipped out of the room...
precap:pia never thought that she would heared that voice again,but...
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
Polly.P thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Loved the update as always !😊👏
Loved Misha and Piya's convo .
Precap seems interesting .
Do continue soon .

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update...👏love frindship relation dear...carry on...continue asap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update...great bonding b/w misha and pia...loved it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update.enjoyed it a lot.precap sounds interesting.thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
lovely update
loved friendship between Misha and Pia
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Hey this was awesomely written.U r doing a gr8 job.Just caught up wid chp2,3 n 4;all r lovely!
Continue asap.

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