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bellaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
rai both of the chappy were aswome yar
abhay is always support of piya without him piya was definitely got in problem created by neal and rashmi...
just loved it when abahy encourages hpiya in seminar hall...
neel is such a jerk...
how can he think of plan that piya is a thief his thinking so low...
good to know that he reveal in front of college
ohh no now sid entry definitely it creates something mess between abhiya
now what he is vampire or human? and may be abhay brother and something related to meenaxi too?
marry cristmas u too
best of luck for examzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
rashmi aur neel ka to bbb... nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update:D
Rashmi ki toh band baj gayi😆.
Abhay's plan was superhit!
Plz continue,eagerly waiting 4 Abhiya's love story 2 start.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Update !👏
I loved the part when abhay said "tumne dono payar mein ulte jute pahene hain!!"😆
Bechari rashmi uska plan toh pani mein dhul gaya !
This neel !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡
Waiting for siddharth mehra's entry !
Continue soon and thanks for the pm !


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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
merry christmas to you
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
loved it
wow neel's plan totally failed
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Posted: 12 years ago
are poor neel tm na hi jano to acha hoga ki abhay kaun hai 😆
aa rha hai sid taiyar ho jao sb log😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for good wishes.merry christmas.thanx for pm and for giving back to back and wonderful updates.the story is really steaming up.continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all merry christmas to u too!!!
Coming to the updates, read last 2 and just loved them. The best thing abt ur updates are that they are really enjoyable, i love the way u write things. Wah kya bajayi neel and rashmi ki. Plz update soon, i just love this ff!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hallo guyzz!!hope u all had a gr8 chrissmass.😃.now hear's the next chapp.hope u njoy⭐️⭐️⭐️

"Burf Pade To Burf Pe mera

Naam Dua Likhna"

chapp 18

"wow pia,ur super duper buddy,kya plan banaya tha,ek teer se do sikar.neel and rashmi..."misha said.they were in misha's room.it's allready 9 pm now."thx misha,but 1 thing is true.this plan was mine,but widout abhay's help it cldn't be successfull."pia said."what,abhay?u mn abhay raichand?"misha asked surprisingly."yes,afterall if he didn;t infrmd me about neal and rashmi's plan i would be caught into there trap.i told him to somehow put those stolen rs into rashmi's bag.because somehow i knew only he cld do that work."pia infrmed."awww..so,sweet!he really cares about u too much!!akhir baat kya hain yaar?what's going btween u 2?"misha asked with mischief."misha!!!"pia rolled her eyes."now pls jhut mat bolna.i often saw u talking with him"misha said."misha we r just good frnds and nothing else!!"pia infrmd."what!!!??? good frnds???baat itni door tak pu6 gayi.abhi kuch din pehele toh tum uska sakal nahi dekhna chahti thi!!"misha said wid a grin."misha!!!!"pia gave a light punch to misha and afterall they started a girly fight gigling and throwing pillows to each other.panchi entered in the room."hey, u 2!!!started again??"panchi said.they both grined with messed pillows in their hand."oh,what can i do wid u 2!!btw,theres a good nws for u."panchi said."and what's that pia asked."ur jiju had called."panchi informed."he is comin back with 1 of his business partner."..."who is he?"misha asked."siddharth mehera."panchi said."ewww...what an old fashioned name!!"misha commented."hey mishu,when did u became cncrnd about latest fashion!!"panchi asked."btw,when our jij is comin back?"pia asked."after some weeks."panchi informed.

when abhay reached home,he found alina eagerly waiting for him."hello alina,i'm surprised to c u hear at this time."abhay said."abhay i need to talk to u!!"her face was all worried."what happened alina,u don't look good."abhay asked."pia is in danger abhay!!"alina said quickly."whattt..."fear caught on his eyes.he tried to read alina's thought soo that he can detect why alina was talking this insane words.but her mind was jumbled up with random fearful thoughts.he cldn't detect a thing."abhay i saw a vission last ni8!!she is coming back abhay.maithili is coming back!!".alina said in frustrated voice."wahat????!!"abhay was in gr8 shock."yes abhay,not only her,ur brother sidharth is also wid her."alina informed."siddharth.!!!"abhay uttered the name with gr8 furi"what have u seen xsactly?"he asked."i saw maithili and siddharth standing in front of each other.maithilli told siddharth that the time had come,they were going back to dehradoon.siddharth said that everything would be prepared as she said.after that the vission blured!!"alina said wid a single breath."damn,that means siddharth didn't got out of maithili's trap till now!!"abhay said."abhay why is she comin back?does she come to know about pia?"alina asked in worried voice."no way,but how can they come hear? u know this is the land of our vampire clan,no vampires from outsider clan can enter in this area,they will be destroyed by our protective shield!!"abhay said with thoughtfull face."untill some1 from this territory invites them in!"alina reminded."damn it,but i'm 100% sure no1 from our clan cld invite." abhay said."not vampires,but they cld be invited by humans,they also belongs to this teritory!!"alina said."humans!!who gonna invite those 200 years old living deads!!"abhay said with confused eyes."we should inform this to ur dad.he can talk to ur clan leader about tresspassing of siddharth and maithili."alina proposed."good idea!!"abhay said.they both went to chand and told him everything briefly."what maithili is comin hear r u sure alina?"chand asked.he was very much surprised."yes,i saw that!!"alina confirmed."we must go and inform our clan leader,abhay get ready, tomorrow we r going to kasauni to meet him!!"chand said."tomorrow!!but how can i go there leaving pia all alone.if anything happened to her within my absence."abhay said."u must go with me abhay,we have to inform about each and every details of maithili and only u can do this!!"chand said."but dad..."abhay said."u must go abhay i'm sure they won't come hear quickly,they need to be prepared and they need time for it!!"alina said."and also we r comin back tomorrow!!pia won't be in any danger in this few hours i suppose."chand said.abhay was not a lil bit agreed to go with chand leaving pia hear all alone and unsafe!but he also understood that if he didn't go he won't get any help from other clan members,and fighting alone with a powerfull vampire like maithili was all insane."ok!!..."abhay said with hesitant."and 1 thing,don't go to meet pia tonight to warn her!"chand said."but why?i have to tell her to be carefull..."abhay said stubbornly."ok u may go,but think when u'll be at our clan leaders side 2morrow and if he cld detect the scent of human body from yours.then can u understand what may be happen to pia and u?"chand asked."dad..."abhay looked at his father with a shocked xpression."yes,pia has a quite strong pure aura and scent,when u met her last night ur body was fully covered with that.so,it won't be hard from them to detect her scent from urs.so,quickly go to ur room and be ready for tomorrow!"chand ordered.abhay and alina came back to abhay's room."i've to go now,i'll try to get more info about maithili and siddharth."alina said."ok.."abhay said with a shrunked face.alina smilled."u wanna talk to pia r8?"she asked.abhay didn't give any ans."ok,u c'nt meat her but u can call her from ur cell!!"alina proposed.abhay's face became bright.alina smilled and got out of the room.

pia was studying late nights.xams were coming,she had to be prepared.it was almost midnight when her cell rung."who is calling me at this time."she thought.she grabed the cell and got startled to c the name flashing in the screen.she pushed the ans button and held it to her ears."hello..."she said."r u ok?"abhay asked from the other side.his voice was somehow ...painfull."ya i'm fi9,but where were u? i wanna thnk u for ur help."pia said.abhay smilled."sorry,i was lil bit busy.listen,i won't attened clg 2morrow!!i'm going out of town."he informed.pia didn't know why she felt sad after hearing this."when u'll come back?"she asked in a low voice.abhay sensed the sadness in her voice,it aswell as pleased him and also gve him sorrow.he never thought of a day without seeing her from the day he had meet pia."just after some hours.it's only a short 1 day trip.but,u be carefull okay?"abhay said."why r u asking me to be carefull?i c'nt understand!!"pia asked in confusion."no,i was...wandering about neal.he was too furious today.he may try again!"abhay suprresed the matter of maithili."u r r8.btw thx for the help today!"pia said.then a long pause came inthere conversation.pia didn't find anything to say."can u go to ur room's window!!"suddenly abhay said."what!!??"pia was startled."i said go near window."abhay said."but why???"still she was confused."please?!!"he pleaded in so beautiful voice that pia cldn't deny him.she quickly came to window and the outside scenery mesmerized her.it was a full moon night,snow had covered the ground.when did that snow fall occured?pia was not lil bit cncrnd about it.moonlight was glittering over snow covered ground and it looks like several scattered diamonds.so beautiful and heavenly."wow,it's beautiful!!"a whisper came out her mouth."u like it?"abhay asked."a lot!!"she answered still mesmerized."the 1st snowfall ofthe year.my gift for u!!btw, happy b'day!!"abhay said with a beautiful manly voice.at that instant the clock strucked 12 at midnight.pia was all startled."how do u know about my b'day."she asked.abhay smirked."i told u,i know u more than u know about urself!!so how's the gift?"he asked."it's magnifisent! the most precious gift i ever had.thank u abhay!!"she said with a smile.abhay's dead heart was overjoyed by her happiness.he badly wished he cld c her glowing face with his own eyes!!but it wldn't be safe for her."my pleasure!!now, njoy ur gift and gdnight."abhay said."same to u.they both cut the phone unwillingly.they never wanted to finish this convo.pia looked at the mesmerized beauti of nature and gave a heavenly smile.

precap: pia got out of xam hall as quickly as possible with her shaking legs.

ps: now ab jaldi jaldi batao how's it?😃
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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