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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice update👏 and next update main aayega majja jajne main k aakhir plan kya hai😆 so continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing...the lib scene was so so cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's a beautiful story to read
thanks for the pm
merry christmas to you and your family

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
finally abhay save pia once again
continu asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice part waiting 4 abhiya plan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update👏 Kya dimag hai ladki ka😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
merry xmas guyyzzz!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️managed to write another chapp.hope u njoy!!!😊😊
"ye chaor machaye shor"
(😆this is also dedicated to sme1 u wl get to know at the end of chapp😆)

chapp 17

rashmi was going to xcute her next plan.in the way she saw abhay raichand coming towards her."oh god!!!"rashmi thought"why is he coming towards me?"she blushed,"i think he is interested on me.oh god i can't believe abhay raichend is interested on me!!wowww..."rashmi screamed inwardly.abhay was trying hard to suppress his laughter while he was reading rashmi's thought.abhay stopped infront of her and gave a charming voice,"how r u rashmi?"he asked."ooo nooo i am deaddd!!!!!"rashmi screamed inwardly,"rashmi..."abhay asked again to get her out of trance."what???ya ya i'm good!! how r u?"rashmi asked wid a dreamy eyes."ya i'm fine!!"abahy said and smirked to her.rashmi was in 9th cloud."i want to tell u something."abhay said."whattt???"rashmi asked sucking her brth.abhay bend over her,rashmi was frozed.he whispered in her ear,"tumne dono payar mein ulte jute pahene hain!!"..."what!!!????"rashmi's eyes fell on her feet."oh nooo..."she screamed and looked to abhay with angry face."i won't forget this joke..."she ran with mismatched shoe pairs.abhay smirked.rashmi didn't noticed when abhay was whispering on her ear he put something secretly on her bag.

pia and misha was in chem class."well done pia and misha ur assignments' answers are really good!!"shankar sir said."thank u sir!!"they both said and gve an indicating smile to each other.when the pion came to inform that principle sir was calling each and every student in seminer hall.pia knew they would be called sooner.she hoped abhay was successful in the 1st step of their plan.then a msg cme into her cell.she opened the msg box.the msg was containing only few words.."evrithings done,get ready for the showtime!" pia smirked and follwed another students.they came to seminer hall.whole clg had been gathered in seminar hall!!"what happened yaar!"misha said."just wait and watch."pia said.then after sometimes principle sir entered with teachers."2day is the most embarrasing moment in our mt clg's history."princi said,"2dzy some1 had stole rs 5000 from the student's welfare fund rs,kept on my office.".everyone gasped."i knw, that thief is among us.he/she is present hear.if some1 knows nything about this thng pls cme and tell us.otherwise we have to take further steps.evry students looked at each other."i know sir.."som1 screamed from the students.she was non other than rashmi."hey isn't she rashmi?member of student union."some1 asked from misha's side."ya buddy,but didn't do a sngle work she shld do for commitee!!"misha informd.rashmi said"sir i saw her with my own eyes.she was stealing from ur office!"rashmi said dramatically."who's she?"princi adsked."pia jaiswal from 1st year!".rashmi's words gave a huge shock to every1.kabir and misha gasped and looked to pia.but the suspect was sitting with all calm face."pia jaiswal.."princi said in a loud voice"can u come forroward?"..pia was about to stand up."no pia, don't go!!"misha said her with a worried face.pia clamped her hand,"don't worry misha i'll be fi9!!"she said confidently and took her steps forroward.suddenly she felt a lil bit nervoused,what would happen if the plan fails."don't worry,evrythings fi9.don't be afraid."a clear whisper reached to her ears.pia looked at side and saw that two beautiful blue eyes looking to her with all concerned face.pia got back her courage.she secretly gave an indicating smile to abhay and walked to prici.she stood in front of them."is rashmi telling the truth ms jaiswal?"princi asked directly."of crs not sir!her complane is all insane."pia said confidently."no sir she is lying!!search her bag she must have it in her bag."rashmi said."can i have ur bag ms jaiswal."princi asked."sure sir!!"pia handed over her bag.princi opened the chain.rashmi smilled in victory,as her plan was on it's way to succcess!!but to her surprise.there was nothing in her bag without 2 books,2 copys,a pen and only a rs hundred and rs fifty note.where the stollen ruppes were all in thousand's note."well there is nothing ms. rashmi."princi said.rashmi gasped."no sir,i saw her to steal those rs."rashmi emphesized."hey girl where have u kept those rs?"rashmi asked her roughly."i didn't stole those rs. can i ask u when did u saw me to steal those rs5000?" pia asked cooly."near about 11 pm.."rashmi said hesitantly."but i was in maths class then.u can ask sinha mam,she saw me.even i solved a problem in blackboard standing in front of her."pia informed."yes,she is r8!if u want sir i can show u attndnce regd."ms sinha infrmd princi,even sme of pia's classmate said that pia was in class.rashmi had sweetdrops on her forehead."r u sure u saw ms jaiswal in principle sir's office?"vice principle asked rashmi."yes sir."rashmi said in a low voice."then u were also present in office at that time?"vice princi asked again."of crs sir!!" she said.princi and vice princi looked at each other indicating."can i search ur bag ms rashmi?"vice princi asked."my bag!! but why?"rashmi asked in a worried face."whats the problem?if u didn't do anything wrong,u shldn't be afraid of."vice princi said.reluctantly rashmi gave her bag.after a very lil effort vice princi drag out five thousand ropee notes from her bag.evry1 gasped."well ms rashmi,what u have to say about this?"princi asked in a cold voice."sir it's not possible!!"rashmi screamed,"i sware i put this notes on pia's purse with my own hand." she said.evry1 was surprised.but rashmi didn't even realized what she was telling."u put this notes on pia's bag,but when?"vice princi asked ina cool tone."when i bumped her this morning..."then she suddenly realized what she had done.but theres no way to escape,she had told much!!!

neal was waiting for rashmi near comerse building.he saw rashmi coming to him with dry face."what happened.did pia got xpelled?"neal asked in xcitemnt."no"rashmi said."why?but after this type of harrasmnt..."neal asked."actuallyneal,our plan had failed."rashmi said in a dry voice."what???!!"he cldn't believe his own ears."how did it happened?"neal was furious and screaming to rashmi."i d'nt know." rashmi said with tension."perhaps we cld answer another female voice reached to them and neal looked to it's source .he saw pia with a huge group of students includung misha,kabir and abhay offcourse!"hey whats all this?"neal asked furiously."sorry neal,if i won't help them to find u,princi would rsticte me!"rashmi said poorly."you!!!.."neal greeted his teeth.rashmi quickly left the place.neal gave an evil smile to pia."so,pia u again managed to save urslf this time.good!!saurya was r8 about u."he said widout any griefvin his voice.pia didn't gve any ans and smille a lil."ur game is over neal!!now get lost from hear."abhay said with tremendous anger in his eyes."remember 1 thing jaiswal,i'm not defeated yet!!"neal said."guyyzz,look at his attitude.pakde jane ke baad bh kaise baat kar raha hain.aaj to hum issse chodenge nahin!!"kabir said furiously and all students prsnt there were boiling and was about run to make him 'neal kabab'then pia stopped them."leave him guyyzz.there won't change anythng if u beat him.let him go!!hum aise loose ch ke muh nahi lagte."she said.neal gave a deadly look and left the place.the gathering started to breake after sometimes.kabir said"u shouldn't leave him so easilly pia,why did u stopped us?"kabir asked."don't forget kabir neal is the son of mr singhaniya who is 1 of the reputated person of dehradun.if we might take any step against him his father would surely draw a case agnst us and send us into jail."pia said."cmn pia we must go now!!"misha said.pia searched for abhay but he was not there.where did he gone?she cldn't even thank him for his support.

neal was about to get in his car he saw abhay standing in front of his car."hey what r u doing hear?get out of my car's side."neal said furiously.abhay came near him.his eyes were burning in fire,"listen neal,today i left u in single piece only because pia forbided me.but if u do any harm to her,then no 1 can save u from my hand!!u got it?"abhay said in a deadly tone."how dare u!! tum mujhe dhamki de rahe ho? neal sighaniya ko?u knw who am i?"neal scrreamed and abhay quickly grabbed his coller furiously,"yes i know u very well u moron!but know 1 thing,that girl is evrything to me,if u do anything to her,u'll surely know who am i?"saying those words furiously abhay left him behind with confused and boiling in anger.

precap:"ur jiju had called."panchi informed."he is comin back with 1 of his business partner."..."who is he?"misha asked."siddharth mehera."panchi said.

ps:so,the song at the begining is dedicated to neal😆.hows it.reply soon.
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...loved it...uff abhay ka gussa...neel u r dead now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late reply bu t now I hav read all the 3 updates u did which I missed but I loved all ur updates they were awesome ...i loved the way abhiya did piya's assignmemt it was such a sweet gesture of a lover boy who cant see his live in any kinda pain awww...and their team work in reaveling neal was fabulous and lastly abhay's deadly warning
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Posted: 12 years ago
P. Kahin siddhart mehra abhay ka bhai to da evil guy and he is a vampire hunk too and was he in or is in love with meenaxi too

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