WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th

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Newton123

@Newton123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

will read rest of the stories after a while

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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mansa you knw what..your piece of work is nthng bt treasures..!! And you think its nt worth the praise??!!! And if its so then i dnt think i shud continue writing anymre!! 🥱 Becz in front ur brilliance its nthng bt garbage,yes and i mean it!! Now ur exaggerating too much 😛 n dare u call ur work garbage again else I'll assure u I'll quit writing forever 😛 I wish I could write even half as beautifully as u do
Aftr going thru the updat i really dnt knw what to say,hw to say, the updat has just broken all the boundaries..the moment i startd reading it i was right there in transylvania and i felt i was reading sum rich classic work writtn by sum award winning writer!! ⭐️Fabulous!! 👏 n do u evn need my cments to tell dat?! I dnt thnk so! Your writing was everythng that any other writer cud ask for frm..exact deliveranc of actins..to emotns..to suspenc..dark aura..everythng..i havnt read VA til nw bt aftr reading dis OS n knwng u were insprd by IT i want to read that nw,bt nly becz of ur magnificient writing!! This os is power packd n reach in technic and fantastic delivering of facts..👍🏼 am nw waiting 4 the next part eagerly.infct i am impatient to read the next one, 😆 plz updat asap! 😉 and thank you 4 taking out time to write here and giving us the joy of reading, thank you Dear!! 🤗 Oh my 😲 Me n an award winnig author? 😲 Now this is too too much 😛 But thanks a lot dear 🤗 I am really really sorry for making an SS out of an OS Bcoz of me readers r waiting n probably writers too 😭

special mention: augusts-lovd dis charactr..a gud fellow,bt unfortunatly abhay didnt tak hs view wth gud spirits.. Abhay is dealing with his own demons 😭 U will know this in the next update.
abhay-as usual lovd hm! 😳❤️ Yep Abhay is a strong character but so is Pia
pia- little diffrnt 4m other stories bt cmpletly wondrful characterisatn! Luvd her as well..❤️ I love a fiesty Pia 😉

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

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Thank u all for appreciating it 🤗 n also a special thanks for ur patience 😆 I know this is an OS thread but I ended up posting a mini SS 😛 I shall post the 2nd part soon 😳

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#404

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#405

awesome awesome update mansa...btw part 3 as well??🤣..but jokes apart that's a super good news!!this plot deserves to be an ss and coming from a writer like u it's a BIG treat!!!i'm super glad..see how big my smile is??😃..

coming to the update...it was AWESOME!!👏 superbly written..painting the picture of each and every scene right in front of my eyes👏...i just loved it!! the fight was so nail-biting and u described it so well..i could literally feel the tension and the thrill!!supern job yaar!!⭐️

and piya and abhay...omg..that part on the bridge and during that training❤️ was so so so so beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time...passion and pain and love and sadness mixed together.😊..and u wrote it so beautifully!!!each and every emotion was so visible... u made me speechless..u say u write emotions well,u r way better with them than me..honestly😳...

so abhay is getting doubts about sid being a vampire...and i'm almost sure he is one..let's see what is revealed in the end eventually..😉

i'm so so so eagerly waiting for the next part...update sooon!!😆

Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 12 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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mansa..is this the piece of work..that u call trash??!!! 😳 I mean seriously..are u mad?? how can u..n how dare u call a masterpiece of this kinda work a crap?? 😡 and if this is crap then honestly..mine dont even belong in trash bin...🥱 mansa dear will u listen to me for once? Can I request u something? Please stop calling ur magnificient updates crap.. because it saddens me greatly..😔 please if u consider me as ur friend..then plz do heed my request..
the update was wonderful..with the perfect portrayel of emotions...powerful in its delivaranc of facts in its realistic way! 👏 here I felt you have changed ur writing style a bit n I loved it..😳 ofcourse I love the ur original style but this one didnot lessen the beauty of the updat in anyway,rather it made it more beautiful
about the update- I enjoyed reading the entire epi but loved the fight sequence the most..because of its powerful description...⭐️ I felt as if am myslf in transylvania infront of the tannel..watching them in action! 👏 and I cudnot tell how good u are in action scenes.. u just make it live!! 👏
and ya I loved..❤️ n enjoyed the rain scene..it was beauutiifuuul...⭐️ a perfect presentation of grief..love..longing..n passion...superb!!👏 abhay is trying to avoid pia n we all know why..😔 so thats understandable..but poor pia..she is going through the worst phase I suppose..😔 coz like abhay..she can neither avoid nor ignore it..rather she wants to dive deep in it n so denial from abhay is making things more difficult for her...
hm..so augustus came atlast...well I guessd he would n he did! now waiting to see abhay n sid's encounter...n now abhay will go after the ancients which means it will get more darker now...can't wait for the action...just hope abhay cums out of it safely along with pia.. am excited to witness the next..😃 now update quick! and thank you for this wonderful piece of work..it gave me emmenc joy to read...🤗 and one more thing..please dont ever quit writing...n please dont talk ill about ur writing skill..plzz ...
P.s. this is the 3rd time i'm typing the comment n if dis tym I get success then I suppose I will dance or throw a party! 😆 uff seriously..fed up of systm failure.. 🥱

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#407

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First of all OMG part 3 😲 😲 but im very happy I will read another part of it 😃 🥳 and why the hell did you say it was crappy or whatever 😕 it has right amount of suspense, action, emotion and passion. fabulous and Im loving the concept even more 👏 It was too detailed thats true and thats why its long but its your style of writing. so nothing wrong with it.
Coming to the update, Hmmm so my doubts about Sid being a vampire now is getting into Abhay as well. His turmoils ever so well described. Pia's concern for Abhay was beautiful and alarming because like this she will get into more danger. Her fight with the vampire was superb. Finally the slayer inside her is coming out and as a amateur she put up a real good fight 👏 but its normal she will be hurt and thank God nothing more serious happened. it was dangerous. Abhay's conflicting emotions were beautifully written. very well described how he wants her but it's easier this way since its better she live the life of human she used to and not as a slayer where death can embrace you any moment and in every footstep danger awaits.

Poor AbhIya.. they are already fighting their feelings and staying at the same house isnt helping offcourse. Pia being Pia always just knows how to have her way doesnt matter how hard Abhay is trying to fight his feelings 😆 their rainy moment was so passionate and intense I just loved it. Mad woman you say you suck at writing romance 😡
it was beautiful, heartbreaking, passionate and intense all at the same time.. superb writing 👏 their twisted confession was beautiful but yet heart wrenching. Poor them - played by cruel fate.
Abhay told Augustus something what i was thinking from the very first update. and i donno y i dont like Augustus much here. 😕 i cant trust him enough because he never seemed enough helping. but then he is trying to save his own neck thats fine. im not saying he is bad but i cant trust him completely either.
that was one hell of a update I can see 3rd part is going to be more intense for sure 😃

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago

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Newton123

@Newton123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: mandy1024

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Thank u all for appreciating it 🤗 n also a special thanks for ur patience 😆 I know this is an OS thread but I ended up posting a mini SS 😛 I shall post the 2nd part soon 😳

ok 😃

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

OS(mini SS) updated 🤗

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

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so sorry for unresing so late...

mandy that was a wonderful update👏

pia and abhay are still fighting with their feelings...hmmm...

so has sid really become one of them????

mandy yar what are u...I mean u r saying sorry because u have to add one more part to the story...yar here I m jumping with joy that there will be one more part and here u r saying sorry!!!!!!!! *phew* kuch nai ho sakta tera😆

sorry once again for unresing it so late...😳

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago