Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: sukugeny
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Fantabulous ,Fantasic N Wonderful update Indu darling...i just loved it. thank you geny dear. 😳

is really Raichands leaving Dehradun...NOoo!!!!!!!!!! lets see...😉

Loved Abhiya...just we can feel them...from long distance...U wrote so well Indu...Dark...Pure Love.Loved it. glad you like it.😳

Aranb babu...kya search kroge aap...kya krenge ye sasurji of abhay...hmm Waiting...kya shads deti ho tum inhe...!!!

kha stop kiya...U.P.D.A.T.E. S.O.O.N. for USSS!!!!PLZ PLZ Indu darling.

I just can't get enough of ur each work n writing...What a talent.

our each Writer have their O.W.N style of writing...I love u all...love u darling...ab jaldi update kro na...nxt.i can't W.A.I.T.!!!

thank you dear. sorry for late. will update very soon! 😊

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
I hate u tora and mandy 😡 😭
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Indu it was a beautiful update man ❤️
I instantly fell in love with it 😳 and u call it boring 😡
the way u described haseena's worry...rohan and alina's feelings and then abhiya part...my god that was just fantastic👏👏 thanks juhi..😳i wasn't sure wether you guys would like it..because the pace was slow na.. but if you like it then well its fine. 😊
eagerly waiting for more😳

will update soon! 😊

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Brilliant update Indu.The passion of the dark luv story...i dont have words to say how beautifully u have described it.Pia declaring Abhay as her fate & future...wonderfully described.Piya's heartfelt words were able to reach out to her dark knights dead heart...it caused a stir in his long forgotten and locked emotions...making him hold her in his arms..never to let go.In a fraction of a second...Abhiya have gone somewhere far away from the daily mundane human life.I'm damn eager for next update...Abhay's behaviour and reaction towards Piya now would be interesting to read

thanks a ton dear. 😳 happy to know you have liked it. will update soon! 😊

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: captainplus
sorry 4r commenting late 😳 now a days m abit busy its alrite dear.😊
awesome update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

abhiya part was wonderful 👏 👍🏼
lo❤️ed it ! 😊

hope rohan n arnab don't find piya soon ...

in b/w were did abhay took piya ??? 😕 just wait! 😉

tanks 4r the pm 😊

n keep up this good work 👍🏼

thank you dear. 😳

Originally posted by: vmpy
superb piece of writing.haseenas worry,chands cold behaviour,arnab concern,alina consoling her bro and above all da intensity and pull of attraction between predator and prey made it a wonderful update.thanx for pm and continuesoon.

thanks a lot dear. will update soon!! 😳

Originally posted by: samwllms
awwsum...pls updt soon...we cant wait to read more...1 second is likd eternity...jaldi updt krna...thnks for the pm

will update soon! sorry for late..n thanks for liking.😳

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Brilliant brilliant brilliant *bows*

Uff man, how do you paint a picture like that with words? I so envy you right now. You are so damn good!!! thanks shreya.😳 well..you always flatter me. 😆 but the fact is ..you are way better than me! 😊
I am worried coz of Chand though.

Naah... Ur freedom of speech is there and so is my freedom of expression ;)

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
wowww❤️no words find explain my feelings...continue asap😊

thanks koli..😳

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
wow thats a brilliant play of words Indu. reading your works is like reading a beautiful canvas painting. its written really beautifully.

thanks dishu. donno what to say..am really humbled...thanks for such a big appreciation! 😳

Originally posted by -Gauri-

Awesome upd8!! Loved it!! :D

thanks gauri.😳

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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didlr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

loved it

plz pm me frm nxt update

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: ashu1909
amazing update .abhiya lovely unbreakable bond

thanks ashu..😳

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

madam pls updt...plsssdsss plsss plsss

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani
Beautiful update...i can feel Abhiya's pain...love it...
Thanks for the PM...

thank you dear. 😳 most welcome. 😊

QUOTE=barki]Brilliant update Indu.👏 The passion of the dark luv story...😊 thanks for liking dear..😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
brilliant update
it was written so beautifully...lvd the way u portrayed abhay and pia's emotions and feelings and pia is ready to go with him leaving everything behind ...it really shows how much pia love him and she had also accepted him with his true identity. only pia could see his pain behind his such inhuman acts ..can't wait to read further. yes you'r right megha.Only pia can understand him! and thanks a lot for the appreciation dear. 😳
feel bad for rohan and arnab..they are worrying so much for her...wonder how would they accept the truth.

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
thanks and well done
like it abhay try to understand pia and his own feeling
excited to read what next

glad you like it. Will update soon! 😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
Wow great os plz update soon
I will be waiting for the update
It's awesome
Thanks for the pm 😃

thanks alisia. glad you like it. 😳

Originally posted by: devilish-grin
Superawesum update.loved it.beautifully written dear.

thank you so much dear. 😳

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Trouble.
awesome update<3

thank you dear. 😳

Originally posted by: anjali0111
Superb update
Abhiya scene was beautifully described

thanks a lot anjali..😳 hope u will like the next one too...😊

Originally posted by: Neha_bodle
awesome update.

thank you. 😳

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
nice update...

thanks trishna. 😊

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
OMG I M SPEECHLESS,,.(It has become an habit though😆).

The overwhelming emotions,electricity,passion,comfort,coming home n then again an insecurity n ferocious possessiveness all written beautifully!!!!!! thank you kirti..am happy that you found it worth reading. 😳 because i toh thought it has come out downright boring! 😆

Haseena is worried dat s understandable bt may be she s nt aware of power of true love which can convert a ferocious beast 2 a love lorn man,can evoke emotions in a barren stone cold dead heart n can soothe a burning heart. yes dear! very well said! love can do miracles!! 😳 but you see abhay was never a human..he is a total beast! so its quite hard for haseena to not worry yet she knows there is something about pia..something that can alter him n that is why she dared to take pia to abhay ! 😊

OMG Rahul loves Piya😲.Then he must make himself ready 4 d facing deadly dangerous Abhay.
hmm..ya rahul is in danger!
ABHIYA WERE SOO BLISSFULLL N HEAVENLY.Bt where has Abhay taken Piya😲.

waiting 4 more.Plzzz update sooon😳.