ABHIYA OS:ETERNAL FLAMES..OF UNDYING LOVE

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hmm...now am really confused from where should i start...?!!!

the concept is not just new but unique too!!!!

the backdrop that you have chosen namely sapphire...was brilliant in itself!!!!!!! 👏 i loved the name btw...😊

and Irina n tristan...? they stole my heart the moment they entered the scene that means from the very beginning...!!!!!!!!!!! their forbidden love...unbounding faith on it's immortality...the purity of their heart...the fearlesness...each and every other thing was soo...beautifully written that i felt...i was watching their bountless love from one of those pillars...hiding behind them you know...!!!! i was literally transported to sapphire...it was that beautiful...!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️

and then they got what love always gets in reward...exile...!! .but true love never dies and they uniting once again after 300 years proved that once more...!!!!!!!! wonderful...👏

but their transportation to earth was very unique...!!!! i was wondering how n in what way would they land on earth..but the the way they landed and found each other again was not only unique but also very innovative...!!!!!!!!! 😳 you surely have a spectacular imaginative power my princess...!!!!!! everytime you just blow me away with your extraordinary concepts!!!! ⭐️

and their meeting...the way the realisation sank in...and they found their lost love in eachother was so so...lovely!!!!! 😳

wonderful and mesmerizing OS..it was...dear.!!..please come up with more such unique concepts princess...loved it...thank you...🤗

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow great os plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing OS Tora👏 The Quotes In between are beautiful😊

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Tora man, wat r u made of? 😲 It was fantastic 👏 The concept was mindblowing 👏 A seperate galaxy all together, WOW! It was unique 👏 Tristan n Irina - nice names 😊 Their love story was beautifully written It was so dreamy, so pure 😳 Damn that Victoria 😡 But if it wasn for her, how else would Abhiya meet? 😛 It was so sad to see a father mete out punishment to his own child but with certain position comes certain responsiblities n he was left with no choice He told them they would have no recollection of their previous lives but true love will always find a way So Misha n Kabir turned out to be catalysts in uniting Abhiya? 😃 Loved their reunion n how they connected with each other 😳 The last part was awesome, the skies being lit with the spark of their undying love n heavens rejoicing over it 👏 The lines u had chosen were beautiful n apt for this OS ⭐️ Fantastic piece of writing Tora dear 🤗

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful OS. I loved it. 😛

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazingly beautiful OS!
True love finally found its way back;even d time n distance cudnt separate them! How Piya cried when their eyes met it was soo touchy!
U know what this rebirth concept was wandering in my mind from a long time;of course d situations n treatment were diff bt u wrote it sooo beautifully,i wud never hav been able 2 do justice 2 it.

One last thing : arey yaar saare ke saare aaj hi update de do ge kya? 1st Tanzie,then Indu,Shreya n now it is U!
Lovely OS.

Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 12 years ago

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow awesome update.I loved it.It was unique & heart touching. I mean Iriana & tristan were born as Abhiya after 300 years.They didn't knew who they r but their love was still same & as strong as in planet sapphire

Uff awesome.Write more😆

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow amazing work tora a mixed emotion cute love story... unhe milena tha wo mile pyar ke dushman dekhte raha gaye... see tora ur story make me shayar...