ABHIYA OS:ETERNAL FLAMES..OF UNDYING LOVE

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great os plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

thank u dear...it's an os...so i won't give any more updates😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner
Amazing OS Tora👏 The Quotes In between are beautiful😊

thank u..😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Tora man, wat r u made of? 😲 u ask me that every time mansa😆It was fantastic 👏 The concept was mindblowing 👏 thank u😳A seperate galaxy all together, WOW! It was unique 👏 Tristan n Irina - nice names 😊 tristan inspired from the movie "STARDUST" and i came across Irina in a story book😊Their love story was beautifully written It was so dreamy, so pure 😳glad i could bring that purity out😊 Damn that Victoria 😡 But if it wasn for her, how else would Abhiya meet? 😛 It was so sad to see a father mete out punishment to his own child but with certain position comes certain responsiblities n he was left with no choice He told them they would have no recollection of their previous lives but true love will always find a way indeed,it always will😃So Misha n Kabir turned out to be catalysts in uniting Abhiya? 😃 Loved their reunion n how they connected with each other 😳 The last part was awesome, the skies being lit with the spark of their undying love n heavens rejoicing over it 👏glad u enjoyed it!! The lines u had chosen were beautiful n apt for this OS ⭐️ Fantastic piece of writing Tora dear 🤗thank u...and another thank u for such a big and wonderful comment🤗

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi
Beautiful OS. I loved it. 😛

thanx a lot😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
Amazingly beautiful OS!thank u😊
True love finally found its way back;even d time n distance cudnt separate them! How Piya cried when their eyes met it was soo touchy!
U know what this rebirth concept was wandering in my mind from a long time;of course d situations n treatment were diff bt u wrote it sooo beautifully,i wud never hav been able 2 do justice 2 it.glad u liked it dear😳

One last thing : arey yaar saare ke saare aaj hi update de do ge kya? 1st Tanzie,then Indu,Shreya n now it is U!hehe..😆
Lovely OS.

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: SheDevil
wow awesome update.I loved it.It was unique & heart touching. I mean Iriana & tristan were born as Abhiya after 300 years.They didn't knew who they r but their love was still same & as strong as in planet sapphire
Uff awesome.Write more😆

glad u enjoyed reading shrish...😳...will write more if any ideas come to my lazy daisy mind😛

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
wow amazing work tora a mixed emotion cute love story... unhe milena tha wo mile pyar ke dushman dekhte raha gaye... see tora ur story make me shayar...

thanx trishna..nice shayari😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
fab os. True luv nva fails even though abhiya didn't remember anything they found each other. wonderful update & thanx 4 pm

thanx...yup that's the main theme..true love winning against all odds!!😊