Abhiya OS: the journey of a lifetime.edited.18oct. - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rmuk

Indu u have left me speechless now, I don't have words to describe how much I loved it. Just beautiful OS dear!!! aww...thank you romi...šŸ¤—
I am in love with ur concept and a big thank u for fulfilling my dream. An abhiya OS on cruise wow I wanted something like this badly since ages but no one wrote anything like that, but today u fulfilled my dream!!! you are always welcome dear.😊 glad that i could fulfill ur dream. 😊So here piya is an orphan who grew among her loved ones I.e dobriyals who treated her like their own daughter and abhay a rich, arrogant businessman who don't believe in love wow . I loved the way u described each character, each emotion everything thing, nature's beauty everything was just dreamy.thank u. 😳 I loved at last how abhay saved piya's pride and became her saviour and yes it's not the end it's the beggining of their love.
I would love to read this OS again and again and it's the best gift a outstanding writer like u could have given. I loved this OS and this writer writing skills. Just brillant. Gr8 job!!! aww...thank u so much for the appreciation dear,it means a lot to me...😳
If u get any other idea na on cruise like this it's a request plz write it down I would love to read it, I am a big fan of romantic stories on cruise!!! hmm..okey dear, if you love romantic stories on cruise so much then i will definitely try to write one if i get any better idea in the future! šŸ˜‰
once again mindblowing job!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey indu its nice story... i apperitiate ur effort dat to so quick... sorry if i hurt but i feel uneasy with climax... whole story is fantastic but at climax hw feeling arose so fast they hardly knw each other... hope u understand... sorry dont mind i admire all ur ff but with dis i have ques... plz dont mind and dont take it otherwise... plz plz...

thanks dear. no dear i didnot mind at all...the thing you mentioned even i myself felt it while writing the update plus i wrote it in hurry so maybe that's y...but the thing is...actually this is an os na? so there's not much space in an OS to develop feelings slowly n form the story, as it ends in just one single update unlike an FF or SS..so i had to do it like that because i wanted all the readers to be happy n so thought of giving it a happy ending or else i would have to give it a sad ending or leave for readers to imagine that...! šŸ˜• so sorry if i disapointed you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: koli97

wahooo lovely😊...miss Abhiya sooo much😭

thanks dear..😊aww..sorry for making you sad...plzz dont cry dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shria

this os was simply superb 😳 just loved itšŸ˜›

thank you shria...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great os plz update soon
thanks for the pm

welcome. n thank you alicia. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --peehu--

amazing indu...it was just beautiful...

thanks a lot peehu. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rose--

Omg What a BEAUTIFUL os:-D:-D:-) Its Awesome:-):-) loved it:-):-):-)

thanks a ton rashi.. glad to know you liked it so much! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeeest os indu!!šŸ‘wow loved it!ā­ļø!and the setting was sooo different...a cruise,amidst and abhay and piya...finding each other and love amidst the ocean waves and uniting underneath the fireworks.😳...the start of a new year and the start of two new lives as one!!love the way u wrote everything..it was so magical and beautiful!!!!!
HAPPY 2nd PKYEK ANNIVERSARY TO U TOO!!! šŸ¤—
And sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

indu...i have no words to say...that was just..just amazing superb awesome šŸ‘ šŸ‘

thank you so much juhi...😳 great to know that you liked it soo much...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luckdiya

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abhiya on CRUISE oh!!! god... nvr thought abt it...its lik a dream b'ful post šŸ¤—

thank you diya...šŸ¤—

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