SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 11

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Nafi, please update soon. And make sure it is more daraavni 😉

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PART -5

Piya felt like she cannot see anything accept the transparent door…

Madhu jerks piya – piya pagal hogayi ho kya…see nothing is there!!!

Madhu goes to the curtain and removed it…there was nothing but accept a wall as usual…

Pia came back to sences- mom par mene dekha tha…

Pia in mind- ye kese ho sakta he…there was something behind it!!!!

Madhu scrastily- pia lagta he tum abhi bi neend me ho!!! Jao niche and take rest on the sofa…

Pia- what??? Mom pls mujhe kuch nahi hua…I hv seen something!! Trust me..

Madhu angrily- pia niche jao…agar esa pagalo ki baat karoge na toh sab tumhe pagal kahenge…jao!!

Pia angrily went from there…

But something everyone has missed there is light blood colour crack on the wall…which got unnoticed by all!!!

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Chand – abhay meet my friend arnab…we know eachother since childhood!!

Abhay smiles- hello uncle…

Arnab smiles- very nice to meet u abhay…kafi tareef suni he tumhara!

Abhay smirks…

Arnab to chand- well I need to go now …

Chand smiles- yeah chalo lets go!!! Tunhe gate tak chor deta hu…

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Pia is sitting all angry on the sofa.

Pia in mind- what happened to me??? Ye me kya kara rahi thi….no meri koi galti nahi he!!! I saw someone there…where the transparent glass door went??? Ye sab kya horaha he….

Her thoughts were interrupted by arnab who just came home now!

Arnab happily- madhuuu….ufff arree aj meri bohot purane dost se milke ayi hu!!!

Arnab went upstairs and pia looked irritated.

Pia angrily to herself- kisko bato ki kuch toh he…kya horaha he yeha!!!

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It was night 8 o clock…arnab and madhu was talking about raichands!

Arnab – u know…chand se milke I am soo happy!

Madhu- unhe ghar bulaya tumne?? Chand se me bi milna chahti hu!!!

Arnab smiles- nahi…but I am planning to throw a party soon..waha mera sarre business partners ayenge chand ko bi bulalungi!!!

Madhu shocked- tum pagal ho??? Abi toh ghar bi sahi se arrange nahi ki and u r talking about party!!!

Arnab amused- arre karlenge na bas I am sure do aur din me holayenge!!! Tum fikar mat karo…

Madhu angrily- what!!! Ye sab me akeli karungi…tum toh kal se office ja rahi ho!!!

Arnab laughs- arre nahi baba some designers will come aur wo sab kuch karenge…u only direct them!

Madhu sighs- phir thik he!! Wase party deni he toh chand raichand ka pura family ko bulana!!!

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Pia is sitting with misha in the parents room with a worried face!

She is feeling sooo weird today…as if she will go mad!!

Pia was too worried about what just happened in this evening….she was feeling scared!

(flashback)

In the evening…near to sunset…

Pia was sitting at living room all bored….she decided to read her fav vampire and horror books….

Madhu and misha were fighting over something upstairs and arnab trying to solve the matter!!! Their voices were reaching downstairs….

Pia tried to engross in the book soon she lost herself in the story!

She was sooo lost that she didn't realize what was happening and forgot everything!!!

All of a sudden she felt frighten…she felt everything was silence near her!! She stopped reading the book and look away from the book and looked around!! She saw no one was there…whole house was empty!!! She felt hell scared…

She got up from the sofa!! Only she could here sound of winds and all silence…

Suddenly the scene of the room began to change!! The environment was changing…she saw everything is changed! She was not in living room…

She was somewhere else…she even don't know!!!

It was a luxurious room….everything is very beautiful…everything arranged!! Only the difference is…the room is seems to be dull…its like pia is in some past!!!!

Pia looked around it seems like a bedroom…where is she!!!

Suddenly the room changed and it is still the same room…but the room is full of blood pools…blood is here and there!!!

Pia was hell scared…she wanted to scream but she doesn't find her voice!!!

Suddenly she hears a scream…a scream of a girl!!

The scream was non stop…pia got too much frighten !!!

Pia screamed….

She has closed her eyes and ears with hand!!!

This shocked misha and madhu and arnab!!!!

They were hell confused….the three ran down and saw pia standing with her ears and eyes closed!!!

Misha jerks pia…

Misha- hey what happen to u???

Pia slowly opens her eyes and saw everything is normal!!!

What happened to her??? What was it!!!

She saw her parents looking at her all confused!!

( flashback ends)

Pia was lost in her deep thoughts…she is feeling scared!!! What is happening around her !!!!

Pia was soo lost that she didn't noticed that misha was staring at her!!

Misha clicked her fingers infront of eyes of pia snapping her out of thoughts!!!

Misha irritated- r u doing some staring competation???

Pia confused- huh???

Misha amused- abbe kabse ek taraf dekhi jarahi he…pata nahi kya sochti rehti ho!!! Kya hogya he tumhe??? Subha se itna udas lag rahi ho ???

Pia gloomly- kuch nahi…I am not feeling well!!

Misha worriedly put her hand on pia forehead..

Misha – oye tujhe toh bukhar bi nahi hee!! Bata na kya hua???

Pia in mind- kya karu…kya me misha ko buldu whats happening around me!! Nahi…I cant misha samjhegi me pagal hu…

Pia to misha- kuch nahi..acha I want to sleep!!

Saying this pia lay on the bed…

Misha shocked- tu itne jaldi kiu soo rahi he…abhi toh sirf 8 baje he…khana nahi khana kya???

Pia listened what misha said but she remained silent!!

Misha waited fr a response but didn't got..

Misha asked- tum yeha kiu soh rahi ho??? Tumhari karma me bi toh bed he!!!

Pia remained silent…misha shrugged and got up from bed.

Misha left the room and went downstairs where arnab and madhu r talking…

Arnab asked- pia kaha he??

Misha quickly- soh rahi he!!

Madhu shocked- what?? Itne jaldi!! Wo thik toh he na??

Misha casually- ha thik toh…par lagta he dore pare he!!

Saying this misha took her laptop and sat on the sofa…

Arnab and madhu looked eachother confused and shocked.

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The next morning in Raichand masion, haseena and chand sitting on dining table…

Abhay comes from upstairs with a file all dressed up fr hos office…

Abhay- good morning mom and dad!!

Abhay take a toast and his tea…

Chand- morning beta!!!

Haseena- abhay I think u should need a break frm work!! U just came from London…

Abhay smiles- mom I am fine…I love working!! By the way when jeh is coming from hostel???

Chand smirks- today!!!

Abhay asked- for how many days he is coming!!

Haseena smirks- for for one month tumse milne arahi he na…

Abhay smiles…

Abhay gets up and said- well mom I am going now to office..see u in evening!!!

Abhay went out!

Haseena ran behind- u didn't finish ur breakfast dear…

Abhay shouted from his car- I am full mom…

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Pia is sitting with a dull face in the dinning table…she is lost in thoughts!!

Misha is eating her breakfast hurriedly…when she saw pia sitting all quiet which is soo unnatural of pia!! As she is too chripy…but one thing misha noticed pia has been too quiet since she came in this home!!

Misha broke the silence- oye itna chup kiu he????

Pia looked at misha- amm…kuch nahi!

Misha thoughtfully- hey why don't we both go out today??? I am getting bored sitting all day home…aj dehradun ghumne chale!!!

Pia goomly- no misha…not today!!

Misha angrily- what yaarr!! No tumhe aj jana hi hoga…

Misha tried to pull pia from chair…pia struggling with her.

Pia angrily – misha leave me…I am not going out!!

Hearing the noise madhu came running from kitchen…

Madhu shouts- why u both r fighting???

Misha pouts- mom see I want to go out…and pia doesn't want to come with me…usse manaona…

Madhu agrees- yes pia tum misha ke saat bahar ghumne jao…mind refreash hojayigi…kal se bohot tense lag rahi ho!!!

Pia says- but mom I am..

Misha interrupts- u r not fine!! U hv to come…that's it!

Pia thinks fr awhile then says- ok fine!!

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Misha and pia came out of the car and entered a rose children park….its one of the beautiful park in dehradun…

Pia exclaims- wow…sho beautiful!!

Misha-acha he na…

Pia grins- yeah….

She forgot everything and was enjoying the natural beauty!!!

Misha saw an icecream shop name cornetto icecream…

Misha jumps in ezxitement- pia icecream…

Pis excitedly looks around- kaha???

Misha pulls pia armas- waha…chalo!!!

They both ran to the icecream shop and came out after few mins…

Pia and misha have their favourite cornetto icecreams…

They both were enjoying it with closed eyes and walking by the side of the park…

As pia was lost in icecream she didn't looked at the pebbles lying infront of her…

A car parked just now…and a man came out!! It was none other then abhay…

Abhay mobile rang..

Abhay picked the phone- yeah kabir…I am here infront of the rose children park…where r u?? ok wait I am coming!!!

Abhay just started walking to the direction where pia was coming…

Pia was just enjoying in eating icecream and abhay was coming from the opposite direction of her…

Abhay didn't notice pia as he was busy with his phone..

Suddenly pia feet fell on the pebbles and she just slipped…

Abhay was just near her and was about to pass her…when pia lost balance and held abhay arm unknowingly and her icecream in her hand smashed on abhay black suit!!!

Pia 's arms were now around abhay neck as she was about to fall…

Abhay was wearing the googles that's why pia didn't notice his eyes…

Abhay was so stunned and didn't understand what happened as pia was still clinging to his neck…

Abhay didn't even realize that the icecream was smashed on his suit…as he was lost in the beautiful closed eyes face with fear expression….

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