SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 10

Originally posted by: Divya6696

Lol.. Tu ne update kiya..
Phir bhi.. I am commenting for the previous ones..
AWESOME Naf.. I loved the concept.. scary one indeed..
I loved the first two.. kuch jyaada nahi hua.. but last one.. like I said.. thank god I read it in the morning.. and the newest one I am going to read in the afternoon.. Lol.. I really loved the story..

And btw.. I love the siggy.. *wink*

Puffy.. I am very very very very sorry for the late comment.. like its 13 days since I reserved the first place but I won't unres it because I know you won't see it..

thanks for sharing i was totally in the story when it end😡 nice updates. ha abhay

story achi chal rahi hai par darwaze oops no pardhe ke piche ka raaz... and abhay kyo chila raha hai idiot... plz jaldi se update karna...

Originally posted by: flora212

toh tu ab ayi he coment dene...😡🤣chal koi gal nahi atleast coment toh kiya!!! 😉thanks ...ha ha siggy jo tujhe pasand aygi...by the way thanks fr it once again...😳

its ok😳 but next time dont be late be late again if u r not busy..😡😆

Gussa matt ho..!!!!
Sorry bola na..
and thank you bhi matt bol.. I loved making it for you.. 😳
Ha re.. comment karungi.. 😃

Originally posted by: Divya6696

Gussa matt ho..!!!!
Sorry bola na..
and thank you bhi matt bol.. I loved making it for you.. 😳
Ha re.. comment karungi.. 😃

Awesum update.
chalo it wasnt much scary.bach gaye.lol
i lyk horor stories alot bt the prblm h dkhne ke bd halat khrb ho jati hai.
aww
abhay a gaya.arnab abhay ko dkhega n want him 2 be his damad.lol
cntinue soon

Beautiful update!
Loved Chand n Arnab convo,so Abhay is elder son.
Btw wat was behind d curtains? I m lovin this mysterious story.
Update asap.

nafi ye utna darawna nai tha😉but acha tha😃

hi nafi. Main tumhara ff ka koie new reader nahi hu par main bohut lazy hu isliye itne din comment nahi kiya. Iss story mae pia ka umar kitne hain, agar jo larki 10 years pahle mari thi vo pia thi toe pia itne jaldi bari kaise ho gayi. Mere ko iss tarhaka scary storys bohut pasand hain.amazina updet and thanks for the pm.