Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#941

😊Wow shreya this is really incredible

Sorry I am been a really late in in replying

I just read all in one go and I love how you showed abhay intrigued by piya from childhood and abhay making few mistakes to make piya number one. How he found the author piya intriguing and he actually went to meet her

Glad Alina played Cupid made piya move to Kolkata

Loved how piya made fake pictures and sending that bugging girlfriend away

Piya watching pkyek wow and abhay comments

Stop doubting yourself seriously I loved each chapter

Alisha part was really sad poor girl committed suicide And piya could related herself to Alisha. Abhiya blaming themselves for Alisha death When they really were not why she committed suicide

Abhay drunk and he told piya his past and he does not want to turn out like his dad felt really bad for him.

Piya card to abhay for his birthday and bday cake design was so thoughtful

Poor piya she kept on blaming herself and her selfish parents blaming her for her brothers death . I just hope abhay tells her he did this to help her

Last part was hawt ☺️

Superb, amazing, fantastic, wonderful, out of this world

Your writing in itself is a masterpiece I just love. How you write and take us to another world. Serious used never doubt any of your updates they are all brilliant .

👏👏👏

Continue soon and sorry for being a late Latif

And thanks for all the pms

Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 12 years ago

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#942

There you go again Shreya, never ceasing to surprise me.
I never knew, you could write such intimate scenes so well and believe me dear, it definetely cannot be called cheap. It is very much classy. I really loved the way you wrote.

Now I really doubt your age 😆

Still wondering why he wants to stay away from her...

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DestroyedInLove

@DestroyedInLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#943

awesome update.It was not cheap at all.love this hot hot update😳.hayeee my abhiya

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#944

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm

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captainplus

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#945

great update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

bt wat xactly is abhay hiding ? 😕 coz it seems like all mystries r solved

n lo❤️ed the last part

hope abhiya tell ILU 2 each other soon

tnx 4r the pm 😊

Edited by captainplus - 12 years ago

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 12 years ago

#946

awesm update shreya
thanx fr pm

update soon

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 12 years ago

#947

^ ^ ^ ^

Haha.. 😆 Don't worry!!! I was just kidding you know, I can never do that! 😃
Okay, Coming back to the updates..

I believe I'm a 'real' reader. 😆
The Chapter - very well written Shreya!! 🤗 Very interesting - full of surprises, or shocks rather!
Wasn't her Bio teacher the one Piya had confided into, and was comforting her? Her death was tragic and more than enough to trigger her nightmares even more. 😔
Considering Piya looks so beautiful, I can only imagine how cute she must be looking as a baby! 😳
My books are the same! -_- My Bio textbook isn't a book anymore 😆 Its a bunch of pages 🤣
The Paintings wala part - I was all Awww 😳 How chweet! Btw that eyes' painting reminded me of Saraswatichandra 😆 Jenny always has a sketch of that guy's eyes with her 😛
God the end of the update! I so wished to freaking wring Piya's parents' neck!!! 😡 😡 How can some parent blame their own child for something like this, accusing her of murder of her own little brother?? 🤬 Pathetic!! 🤢 I really would've strangled them!
This made Piya change drastically leaving behind the lively, happy, childlike self and pick up a cold, hateful demeanor - To protect herself from further heartaches! 😒
It was heartbreaking to see Piya like that - all vulnerable 😭
I'm so glad Piya has Abhay by her side who cares so much for her, loves her so much! 😳 🤗
Once again.. Fabulous Update!! 👍🏼 👏

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I would've cared about the rating you know!! 😵 😆
Fantastic Update!! 👏 ⭐️
*GASP* 😲 I've read, even heard about people cutting but I swear I never felt as bad as I did yesterday!! 😭
I was thinking of chhapo-ing a lamba-chauda essay on how self harm is bad but then I realized how hard it must've been for her to have gone through all that at such a tender age. There are times when you wish to leave everything and all but whatever said and done - Self harm is not the solution! Period.
Oh definitely!! Piya was surrounded by some really crap people 😡 😡 or she would've been so different to what she is today!
I read the upper half of the update for a few more times again but could not really pick out why Abhay would be doing that. I thought I did yesterday but now, I guess I don't 😆
Yesss deffo he's head over heels for her but man! Confess toh kare 😛
Uh.. ohh.. ohh-kayyy.. ☺️
Omg Shreya! you should've really seen me reading that and I swear you would've had the laugh of your life!!! 🤣
Ohh Abhay!! Confess to her when she's awake you know!! -_-
I can understand you were super nervous writing this one but trust me it turned out really good! ⭐️
In the parts I read you were never trashy or cheap! 😃

Both the updates were really good Shreya!! 👏 ⭐️ 👏 Loved them both ( 1 and 1/2 actually 😉 🤣 )
Waiting for the next chapter!! 😳
Update whenever it is possible for you to.. 🤗

P.S.: Look, I came to IF as I promised 😳 😆

Edited by Divya6696 - 12 years ago

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#948

that was super hawtt and emotional update shreya
loved the way u described of piya flash back scene when she remembering how she tried to suicide... that scene was grt
glad that misha and kabir also helped abhay ...poor piya she really beared so much
and what could i say about the last part ☺️... that was mind blowing the hotness and sizzling chemistry between abhiya ufff too much but why they were both not confessing their feelings? waiting for that
cont soon

Edited by bellaaa - 12 years ago