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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: atul.488
nice update update soon

Thanks Atul

Originally posted by: Janani24
OMG 😃 gr8 update is pia about to confess her feelings? update soon

Thanks...yeah, maybe, maybe not😉

Originally posted by: meerubzara
superb update
continu soon

Thanks..ill continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
What a moment to stop 😆
creating anticipation ha 😆
The update was fabulous like always. Pia and Abhay's relationship has came to much normalcy but there's a pretense hiding beneath it. both are afraid wish of going further in this relationship or perhaps saying the feelings outloud would ruin their relationship. and both are pretty lonely already so noways to lose each other. its really sad and you wrote that so beautifully. 👏👏
Pi's nightmares still arent clear but its creatain she was fearful of punishment of loosing something maybe. like someone accusing her, what is her mother.. anyways will wait for those answer. i so know this feeling. being independent for a long time can really throw you into awkward moment when someone cares for you differently 😆 weird thing is you like it but you are not ready yo accept it easily because you arent used to 😳 😆
Pia in Abhay's conference, nice and i was expecting she will give a real blow to Gaurav and she did. Abhay's outrage isnt abnormal. considering his fears and the kind of person he is, i understand him here. and if piya would have told him what she planned im sure Abhay wudnt have let her go.
waiting for next update.👏

Thanks tanzie.

@Red, exactly. Piya is in a dilemma thanks to that and as usual you understand her very well...

And yes obviously Abhay has all the right to be angry.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
shreya its mindblowing part... the way pia handle gaurav, this is how he should treated but abhay is jealous gud 4 abhiya relation... but y u stop here only now update next part soon

Thanks Trishna. I will update soon.

Originally posted by: bellaaa
shreya awsome updates
loved the bonding between abhiya u show
and the jealousy part of abhay seeing sweet piya to gaurav great
wondering what she will say to abhay now
cont soon

Thank you Beenish...

Originally posted by: Rmuk
wonderful update shreya!!!
too good dear!!!
so now abhiya are again living together wow. Good move hun.
Loved the way u showed abhiya bonding and piya treated Gaurav. So Abhay jealous hun. Ufff why u stopped there. Now plz updt asap. Eagerly waiting for next part!!!
I am loving this FF like anything lol.
I an getting somewhat like addicted to this one😆

LOL Romi, thanks a lot hun😆 I am updating soon.

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#744

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
Sherya ! 🤗 Finally read this ff which I wanted to read from a while and u know what it's a master piece re ❤️ this story is so beautiful re and ahhh I don't know what to say , I shorten with words , wish I had vocabulary like Mandy so could write an essay 😕

Ok I was very surprised to see you here...Wish mandy reads this btw

the starting of the story was so cute although abhiya were like strangers but still it was cute cause childhood meetings , ahhh I love it and abhiya fighting were so cute and I loved the many one liners of abhay and piya , adorable these two ❤️ and oh my u included pkyek in this 🤣 abhay was embarrassed to except that he liked the show 😆 and why did u killed anisha ? 🥺 Poor girl she was 😭

I couldn't help including PKYEK in this😆 I had to kill Anisha sweetie, no choice..planned tha😭

that gaurav 😡 abhay was jealous seeing piya and gaurav , so cute 😳 and u kamini , such a bad spot u ended it 😡😡 hope piya confesses finally cause I hav I high doubt that she would say ILU to abhay cause its your ff 😭 u better Make abhiya confess soon 😡 or else ... 😈 And I really wonder what happened to piya in her teenage that she from a happy girl became a girl with no friends , when will u reveal It ?

I will reveal that in three or four chapters I guess...and ya they do confess soon😆
And so sorry for being so late for the ff , first had exams and then had lazyness 🤣 actually I still have lazyness 🤣 sorry for short comment sheryu , I wish to write a page but ahhh I m not very good at expressing things 🤔 I m soon gonna catch up with time and again 😃
Amazing upd sheryu and u better upd soon

catch up fast re😆

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Chapter 13 : Gamble

He grabbed her shoulders and pulled her to him : they collided with a jerk. 'I did not flirt with him,' she hissed through gritted teeth. 'You have no idea- I would never do that, because-'
'Because?' he asked, jerking her.

And then she said something which shocked him beyond belief.

'Because he's not you!' she yelled.

He stared at her in shock, releasing her from his hold. She seemed to realise what she had said, and tears suddenly filled her eyes. She blinked fiercely.
'Happy now?' she said, trying to inject venom in her voice, but the effect was somewhat marred by the fact that her voice was shaking badly. 'Happy? I didn't flirt with him , because I would never want to, because he's not you, now happy?'

He stared at her, an unreadable emotion in his eyes. She jerked away from, moving away and turning in the opposite direction. Then she heard his voice, ragged : 'I didn't-'
She whipped back to face him, suddenly furious. 'Didn't what? Didn't know? Didn't guess? Don't you- don't you dare pull that one on me! You know perfectly well how I felt!'

Her shoulders sagged in defeat. She turned away again. 'All these months, I tried so hard...so hard, to make it easier for you,' she choked out. 'I thought you would be more comfortable to talk to me as a friend, I would have done anything-anything just to be able to talk to you again. I know you knew about my feelings for you- I know they would make you feel awkward-'

'Why?' he said softly. 'Why did you- pretend?'

She let out a mirthless chuckle. 'You're asking me that, Abhay? You're asking me why I didn't tell you about my feelings? You think I was ready for more humiliation? Ready to lose the only person I'd ever fallen for, without even meaning to? Ready to lose whatever I had? You're seriously asking me?'

'Humiliation?' he repeated. 'I never humiliated you-'

'But you're going to do it now, aren't you?' she whispered, her heart breaking. 'You're going to be really polite and nice now, and say, 'Piya, I am really sorry, but I'm not the person you want' when it's really you who doesn't want me!'

She turned to him. 'Go on, will you? Go on, tell me I'm not your type. Tell me I'm too cold, too heartless- tell me that you told me you didn't believe in relationships, love,all that garbage- go on!' she said, now shaking him by the shoulders, wishing he would react, instead of standing there, unresponsive.
'Tell me, Abhay!' she said, uncaring of the tears that were running down her cheeks. 'Tell me- I need to know I'm not good enough, so I can hopefully get over you-'

He gently took her hands and pulled them from himself. He was looking at her, his eyes conflicted.

He's debating how to let me down gently, she thought. 'Fine,' she whispered at last. 'I'll- I'll go now and leave you in peace.'

She turned and made her way out of the balcony, running to her room and flopping herself down on the bed, sniffling into the pillow, regretting her outburst- what a despo he would think her, maybe like the girls he'd dumped who ran after him-

Footsteps sounded, came closer. The door of her bedroom flew open, and she cursed herself for not locking it before.

'Go away,' she mumbled. 'Leave me alone. I'll stay away from you if you want.'

There was no answer. She began to think he'd gone, when she heard Abhay's voice, very close to her. 'Get up and look at me will you? Don't make this more difficult.'

She sat up in pure shock. He was standing next to her bed. He wordlessly pulled out a handkerchief and held it out. She wiped her tears away and crumpled it in her fist. 'I- I'll wash it for you,' she mumbled. She wished he would say something,anything instead of standing there.
'I lied.' he said suddenly.

She looked at him in surprise. He looked suddenly vulnerable, the hard lines of his face softening. 'I lied,' he repeated. 'I'm sorry. I thought- I thought I could-'

He broke off in the middle, looking at her as though expecting her to reply.
She stared at him, puzzled. 'About what?' she said.
He drew a long, ragged breath, running his hand through his hair.
'About- that night I kissed you.'

Her mouth fell open in shock. 'Wha-what?'

He sat next to her, his hands reaching out , gripping hers. 'I remembered everything. I just- lied in the morning, because I wanted the easy way out.'

Her mind was in a whirl. 'You were right in one thing- I wasn't ready for a relationship. I couldn't...can't- give you that fairytale romance you write about. I'm not- Piya, you have to understand- my father- I know what he did to my mother. What if- what if I do the same thing to you? What if you find someone- better, worthier-than me? I don't- I won't be able to handle it,' he said desperately.
'I thought-maybe, if I pretended nothing had happened- there was a chance both of us could be safe. Well, now I can see that it's not working, and I'm breaking you apart with my indifference, and it's not doing wonders to me either, when all I want is to kiss you and instead I have to make do with a simple 'Hi'- It's not going to work.'

Her heart was beating fast. 'What- what are you saying?'

But he wasn't listening to her. 'After all my plans and theories, all I've done is dented your esteem of yourself because you think I don't want you,' he said in a low voice.

'And I'm so tired,' he continued. 'So tired of fighting this... Piya, I can't fight anymore. Not- not when I'm hurting you like this, it's not worth it, Piya? Will you- do you think you could... maybe...give me a chance... I'll do my best to start again.'

He was looking at her, and she saw the emotion in his face as he stared into her eyes, and Piya let out a choked sob , burying her face in his chest. She felt his arms wrap around her at once, pulling her close as if he would never let her go.
'Should I take this as a yes, then,' he asked finally, tilting her face to his. She nodded, hardly being able to speak. She saw his mouth curve in a sudden, genuine smile and his eyes lowered to her parted lips, sending a thrill of current flowing past her.

And then he cupped her face and lowered his head.

Her eyes fluttered shut, her lips quivering in anticipation- but he merely brushed his lips over hers. Her eyes flew open, staring at him : he was smirking, his eyes teasing, as he lightly touched her mouth, knowing the effect it had on her, and her eyes narrowed. 'Don't tease,' she hissed. His eyes widened in mock innocence. 'Tease you?' he whispered, this time taking her bottom lip, and nibbling it softly. 'I would never,' he finished, before finally capturing her mouth, causing her to shiver, her arms reaching around his neck, pulling him closer.

His eyes were still open, and she saw the raw emotion in them as his hold tightened on her and his lips and tongue wrought havoc on her senses.

When they broke the kiss, Piya was gasping for breath, and his own breathing hardly seemed even. He pulled her close again, sealing the distance between them, and Piya whimpered into the kiss, as his hand worked on her hairpins, quickly freeing her hair, so that it tumbled down on her shoulder as he ran his fingers through her locks.

They were brought crashing down to reality when a loud BANG resounded through the house, and they both jumped apart.
A gust of wind had flown in from the balcony, causing the door to slam shut.

Piya closed her eyes, trying to calm her racing heart, when she felt his feather-light touch on her arm. 'You're so intelligent,' he murmured, his fingers moving upwards, tracing patterns over her heated skin, causing goosebumps to erupt. His other hand caught her chin, gently turning her to look into his eyes. 'Why did you think I didn't want you the same way?'

She let out a breath she didn't know she was holding. 'I'm not- well, I don't really know people, much,' she faltered, 'plus, the few people I dated, they didn't, well- there was nothing, and they thought that I was too frigid.'

She saw the sudden understanding flare in his eyes, before it was replaced by gentle teasing. 'Their loss, my gain, then,' he said softly, tracing the shape of her mouth. 'Besides, I could never think you frigid, especially, after that night- God, that dress, Piya-'

She saw his irises darken, before he pulled her close to him, placing a soft kiss on her forehead.
'I don't know how you even believed that miserable excuse of a lie,' he told her.
She let out a soft chuckle. 'You're a good liar.'

They stayed like that for several minutes, before Piya said suddenly, 'Remind me to send a thank you note to Gaurav.'
She felt him tense at once. 'Why?'

She pulled away, grinning. 'For making you jealous. I mean, I never expected that you'd actually think I would-'

'I'm sorry,' he said looking genuinely contrite. 'I just- I saw you smile at him like that, and I just- stopped thinking. I'm sorry I accused you like that.'

'You think I mind that now?' she said, the sparkle back in her eyes.
He looked haughty. 'Of course not. But I had to say it anyway, didn't I?'

Piya's eyes widened, and then narrowed. 'Abhay Raichand, are you telling me you didn't mean a word of that?'

He pretended to be lost in thought. 'I don't think so,' he answered. 'Well...maybe a word or two of that apology...?'

Piya replied by hitting him with a pillow. He retaliated by swatting her away, and feathers flew in all directions as a furious pillow fight enused, before both of them collapsed in laughter, and Abhay, looking at her, felt like a teenager, suddenly.
Suddenly, Pia stopped laughing.
'I've got feathers in my hair!' she said , her face the picture of horror.
She got up and ran to the mirror, looking in horror at her reflected.
'Doesn't make you any less beautiful,' said Abhay carelessly from behind her.

She turned to him. 'Really?'

He tilted his head to one side. 'Hmm...well, you do look just a bit like a very fluffy and half-burnt chicken,' he said, smirking. 'You know...the black against the white also makes you look like a distorted chessboard. Or a zebra crossing-'

He saw her eyes widen with outrage and she chased him out of the room, slamming the door behind him.
But of course she hadn't locked it, so he stuck his head in and called, 'Did I mention fire-breathing dragon?'

He escaped, before she could reply.

Piya emerged from her bedroom about an hour later, feather-free and wearing a scowl.

Abhay looked up. 'You tied up your hair again,' he said, sounding disappointed. She glared at him. 'My hair belongs to me,' she snapped. 'I'll keep it the way I want to, thanks very much!'

Abhay smiled this time, and she could detect a triumphant gleam in his eyes. 'Perfect. You belong with me.'
'We haven't even dated yet,' she retorted. 'How do you know who I belong with?'

He rose from his seat, moving closer, a predatory look in his eyes. She backed up, yet came up short against the wall. His arms came around her waist, pulling her inexorably close. She could feel her resolve to stay angry melting away...why was she angry in the first place? She couldn't even remember.
'We don't need to date...I already know everything about you,' he murmured, his gaze deliberately moving over her, causing a blush to form on her face with the sheer intensity of his gaze. 'Do you really think I want to date you?' His voice was low and hoarse. Piya swallowed. 'Don't you?' she asked, almost timidly.
His gaze met hers, unwavering.
'No,' he said, 'of course not. Why should I?' He trailed a finger from her forehead, to her nose, to her lips, stopping at the pulse point on her neck. 'I have so many better things to do with you,' he murmured as he bent down to nuzzle her neck.

For countless moments, she was lost. His fingers had freed her hair again, and she was unconscious of how much time had past.
He pulled away at last, regretfully, warm affection in his eyes.
'I've lived with you long enough, Piya,' he said softly. 'You are mine, as I am yours.'

She stared at him in wonder, drinking in his face. 'It feels like a dream,' she whispered. 'As if...you'll go away when I wake up.'

'Talking of dreams,' he said softly, 'did you know it's almost 10 o'clock? You haven't even had dinner.'

She shook her head. 'This is your fault,' she told him. 'You kept distracting me. Good thing I'd prepared it already.'

'I distracted you?' he said in mock indignation. 'May I remind you, Miss Piya Jaiswal, that it was you who wanted more-'

'Stop,' she groaned. 'Please- I need to eat, and so do you.'

'So I do,' he agreed. 'I'm ravenous.' But he was looking at her.

She shook her head, going over to the dining table. 'You never did tell me what you were talking to Gaurav about,' he said suddenly.
She waved a hand. 'It's not important. You wouldn't approve.'

His eyebrows rose, and her cheeks went slightly pink. 'I- just-I told him a few home truths, is all. And I may have threatened to publish his dirty secrets in my magazine.'

He nodded. 'Yes, that seems like you.'
'What?' she said, spoon midway to her mouth.
He looked uncomfortable. 'Look, this doesn't mean I think any less of you,' he began,'but I think you have a...ruthless side of yourself. Like if you had to stab someone, and you hated them enough to do it, you'd probably go through with it.'

She had gone sober. 'Is that- does it mean I'm evil?'

He grew solemn. 'No, it doesn't, Piya. It just means that deep down...you have a lot of anger and pain bottled up inside you. You've learnt to calm yourself, so when that explodes..it's really going to be bad. I'd pity Gaurav- I bet he won't be sleeping tonight.'

He suddenly rounded on her. 'You hate him, don't you?'

She nodded. 'Everytime I think of what he did...to you... I feel as though I want to hurt him..make him feel the pain he gave you.'

He smiled slightly. 'That's very... Thanks for caring, though,' he added, smiling lightly.

But his eyes were clouded, and only when Piya talked did the storm behind his eyes disappear, even for a moment.

As they cleared away the table and washed the dishes, Piya turned to him. 'Abhay?' she said, suddenly nervous. 'I- could you, I mean would you-'

He understood. 'Of course I will. I was anyway going to ask you about it.'

She wrung her hands, looking suddenly ashamed. 'I- I don't-'

He took both her hands in his and squeezed them. 'I'm not pitying you,' he said. 'I was afraid too, your nightmares worry me.'

She gave him an unsure smile, and he followed her into her bedroom.
'You can take the right side, I'll take the left,' she told him.
'Okay,' he said.

Right before sleeping, she turned over to him. 'You know, you have that side too,' she said softly. 'Which one?' he asked. 'The right?'

'No,' she said. 'That ruthless one. I saw it in your eyes, when you met Gaurav? You have that side too, you just keep it under a really really tight control.'

'You're the first person who told me that,' said Abhay after a pause. 'I never cease to be amazed by the way you understand me.'

Piya smiled into her pillow. 'Good night,' she said. And then she was asleep.

Abhay however lay awake, staring into the darkness. What had he done? He'd lost control of himself- and it had led to this. What would Piya do once she found out the truth? He hoped she would still have him. He couldn't let her go. He hadn't felt this alive in years, and he wanted to be alive. After a long time, Abhay wanted with all his heart to have a happy ending...but somehow, the dark clouds in the horizon of his mind didn't seem to fade.

PS. I hope I won't get things thrown at me now. My head is hurting.😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

i m speechless the way you described pia's outburst and her feelings was really brilliant.

and finally Abhay had to accept his feelings too. yippe. but what is abhay scared of now, that he already knew about pia's nightmares thru misha, is it?

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Posted: 12 years ago

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shreya..shreya..shreya!!! Main kia bolu? Wat shud i say?!!! I really donno ths time hw to xplain dis update or what i felt!! Truly i dnt knw ! Becoz u see with ur projection of complicated emotions in such a charming manner is undoubtedly beyond my limited power of praise! You are wonderful!! The way u have put the whole thing presenting the update wth the right amount of romantic tonic..it is simply tooo good!!👏 👏
things are taking turn , i wnt say unexpctd bt surely wondrful n interesting!! I wnt ask any questn as to wat abhay is lying tht pia wud knw or anythng..becz for nw i just want to njoy their light moments until sumthng happns tht change evrythng again...
And ya their moments were sweet and loveble!!😳
plz cntinue soon!! N thanks for pm. 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Shreya this update stole my breath away I loved the way u portray conflicted emotions 👏 Its so mature n u seem to understand the psyche of characters very well ⭐️ U shd consider being a psychiatrist n I mean it! Pia finally confessed but I could say she wasn happy doing it when she did for somewhere deep down she feared rejection Pia's outburst kinda forced Abhay to confess his feelings n he still seems unsure to me 😕 No I am not saying he is unsure of his feelings for her but he is unsure abt pursuing the relation Y do I feel there's more to Abhay tat we r yet to see? 😕 Man was their moment hot or wat? ☺️ But yeah damn the window 😛 I loved the way Abhay was teasing Pia 😆 I hope things dont take a turn for worse esp after reading the last words I fear for Abhiya Fabulous update dear 👏 n so so sorry for the late n chotu comments

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bleak_House
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I have many things to tell shreya bt i dnt know how..
You have once again bowled me with the beautiful way of unfolding human emotions..their complexity..insecurity..and torment..the war that goes all the time..which sumtimes solves matter..sumtims makes them worse..

No matter how aptly science explains the function of hw the brain works..or how the hormones are respncble for the diffrnt outpour of emotins...the human mind is still cmplicatd and the innumerable emotns they flicker still more mysterious.
And in your story the two protagonists are simply project that diffrn equally uncmprehensible aspect. You deserve a gud round of applause! Really you'r doing just great dear. 👏
till nw the emotns they had..the way they have reactd to situatn is so perfct that i cnnt point my finger on anythng that i didnt find probable here..!

Abhay cme for pia,to help her. Their friendshp is so beautiful..easy..yet twisted!
Bth knw wat they feel 4 each other bt they dnt hav the courage to cnfess! Bt their past wasnt a very gud so i cmpletely undrstand the fear. Pia was afraid that if she tells her feelings things will change. Surely she isnt sure hw abhay wil react ..she thinks the easy..cmfortable thing they have..she wil lose. Cnt blame her..she is afraid of losing friendshp for sumthng whch she isnt sure whether at all will b reciprocatd..hm..
Abhay..he is here for reasn..for nw thats mre important to hm becz she is mre important..her well being.. Mre than anythng else..

Their moments were wonderful. The way he reachd her wen she was having nightmares and soothd her was soo lovely. The light moments made me smile. 😳 Great job again!👏

oh..gaurab! A total hypocrate!! N pia beat hm! Wow! The questns she threw at hm were 2 gud a way to hit hm at the ryt time..ryt place! Lovd ths pia! She may hav prblms dealing wth her own self bt wen it cums at doing her job or anythng that she sets her foot in..she is just amazing!!!👏

bt abhay? 😕 pia did everythng for hm and he? Lashd at her? bt again after wen i look deeper..i see..he is fighting too..just like pia..in others ways...and i really hope pia brings hm out just the way he wants to bring her out.
And wat pia said at last? Why cnt she flirt?!! This parts a puzzle..for me..did she mean she loves..? Nah..i dnt think so. Bt then wat is it? Or does it have link to her past? Then abhay wil get the info 4m unexpctd situatn..bt wil b of help..definitely!
Well i wnt bother my nt so intelligent brain..😆 bettr wait for ur next update!😉

Carry on..and once again marvelloso dear!! 🤗 you rock! 👍🏼
p.s. I cnt believe am cmentng in two of ur works one aftr anthr...😲 😆 shreya u sure have ur way.. always..at least wth me. 😛 😆
and wthout my cmnt net thk kaise ho rakta hey?😉 ab ho jayega..😉 just joking..😆