Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168 - Page 73

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

😡 u sure are one hell of a meanie. always ending at a point which readers are desperate for 😡


coming to the update, it was really very well written. abhay's attempts at hiding his feelings, but finally giving into jealousy, was really good.


Thanks a lot Dishu🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: koli97

Lovely update Sherya😊


Thank you Koli😳

Originally posted by: ashu1909

awesome update.waiting eagerly for next update


Thanks Ashu😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bisweswar

hate u di. ab mujhe raatbhar neend nahi ayegi apki wajahse. sirf yahi sochti rahungi ki piya ne kya kaha hoga. so pls pls pls pls updt soon . and btw di my name is mampi. nd btw di i am mampi.


Aww Mampi, itna gussa nahi karte😆 I will update soon pakka😳

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Pia is just awsm...Gaurav ki full on BBB kar di.The cliffhanger...uff..damn eager to know what happens next


You will know soon what is going to happen next😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

hats off to u for such a wonderful update.👏aaww abhay is nw living at piyas place.wow.dat gaurav😡piya ne kya bbb ki uski.loved jealous abhay all and all a fantastic episode.u ended it at a cliffhanger but i think she have spilled da beans😉thanx a lot for pm and continue soon



Thank you so much :) the next part will tell you what happened :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Jenny..

nice update:)

i think u like too much suspense.in most updates u put a suspense in the end.i think i am not wrong 😛
and about the update i want pia to confess her feelings to abhay which gave him 'Jor ka jhatka' I am really very worried for pia's nightmares.but it gives relief that abhay is with her.
continue soon...


No you are not..I love suspense😆
Lets see what she said😛


Originally posted by: shria

shreya i loved loved loved it😆😳it was just awsome & u wrote brilliantly⭐️
awww abhiya are once again staying together😳
piya & gaurav's scene was just awsome😆😆
jealous abhay☺️☺️ wow i love him
culdn't u write one more line😡 i guess she said that she loves himnw update fast😈eagerly waiting to knw wat piya said & also abt her nightmares😳



Thank you so much re😳
No I couldn't write one more line..how can I spoil my cliffhanger ending😆
I am updating in a day or two
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

abhiya are staying together and both are trying to hide their feelings from each other...pia had indeed took away the smile and attitude from gayrav's face...he deserved it.
abhay is angry on her...got jealous...i feel pia had spoken out that she is in luv with him...can't wait to read more.
thanks for pm


Thanks so much. Yeah gaurav deserved it😛

Originally posted by: Escape.My.Love.

shreya why did you stop it there. !!!!!!?!?!?! 😡 idontlikeyou.


Awie, sorry, ill make it to you pakka.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Shreya I hate u 😡 😭 *Chucks watever is within the periphery at Shreya's head* 😡

I cannot comment now 😭 Will do it later
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Its a case of pot calling the kettle black 😛 U felt like chucking stilletoes at me??? Well I feel like chucking everything I get hold of at ur head 😡 How cruel! U stopped it at such a crucial point? Now ur torturing me by not updating soon 😭 I really really hate u 😵
There's a drastic change in Pia now. She is so unlike her old self 😆 So now its Abhay's turn to share Pia's apartment? 😉 Gosh I am loving this even more. More nok jhok 😉 Pia's proximity is affecting him but that moron assumes its a platonic feeling? 😡 Uff le ladka kab sudhrega? Well atleast Pia isn afraid of her feelings. I can understand Abhay is insecure thanks to his past but still he is the one helping ppl to get over their fears n lead a normal life. Then y on earth doesn he do that with himself? He is the one who needs more help than anybody 😭 I can understand Pia's POV coz Abhay himself refused to acknowledge what was between them after they kissed that night. How can Pia confess her feelings now? Coz if Abhay rejects her then she loses him as a friend too 😭 Damn this idiotic Abhay 😡
I simply love this unnamed relation between this 😳 n u have written it so well that I find it hard to believe that ur just 17. Kudos to u 👏 I loved their lil moment in the balcony. I loved how Pia cheered him up to do better than Gaurav 😆
Pia's nightmares were never really gone n I felt so bad reading tat part 😭 Please reveal it in the next update atleast na? I am dying to know Loved the way Abhay comforted her and was there for her. Glad she didn have to go through it alone this time 😳 This part was very well written too 👏
Abhay ne Gaurav ki dhajjiyaan uda di 🤪 Me sooper happy 🤣 Loved the way Pia put Gaurav in his place 👏 At the same time Abhay got jealous on seeing Pia so close to Gaurav n now that will make him do something reckless n that he did 😉 I loved the last scene the most. Was intense n passionate n I hope atleast when Pia confesses her feelings Abhay doesn turn away 😛
I hate u for that ending n u better post the next part soon ok? 😛
Fantastic update 👏


Aww...I love you too😆 See Abhay is afraid of love now, that's it...It's easy to help others but yourself? That's the hardest thing to do.

Of course you have to mention my age every update🤣
Well Gaurav deserved it. I was rather wanting to write them both udaoing dhajjiyan but looks like Pia took home all the bouquets..Am glad you noticed Abhay though😆
I won't be revealing the nightmare thing just yet, or there won't be any fun😆
Let's see what Abhay does, eh?😆
Oh and thanks..I always love reading your comments...Makes even me feel good about writing😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

Awesum update shreya.wow abhay and pia together in 1 appartment for 3 months.waiting to know what has actual wid this scary dream of pia.abhay misunderstood her bt if i m not wrong then pia will confess that she loves him.


Let's see if you are right!
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Posted: 12 years ago


Originally posted by: Trouble.

Amazing update Shreya👏Loved Piya-Gaurav part & u stopped when I wanted to read more😳Update soon!


Thanks Prii




Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

ok like button is not working for me n loved the update n Pia gosh she was 2 gud with Gaurav's interview n did she confessed in the end which made Abhay shocked or something else?


Thanks..let's see what she said



Originally posted by: maria090

Awesum update ⭐️😳


Thanks Maria😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sherya ! 🤗 Finally read this ff which I wanted to read from a while and u know what it's a master piece re ❤️ this story is so beautiful re and ahhh I don't know what to say , I shorten with words , wish I had vocabulary like Mandy so could write an essay 😕 the starting of the story was so cute although abhiya were like strangers but still it was cute cause childhood meetings , ahhh I love it and abhiya fighting were so cute and I loved the many one liners of abhay and piya , adorable these two ❤️ and oh my u included pkyek in this 🤣 abhay was embarrassed to except that he liked the show 😆 and why did u killed anisha ? 🥺 Poor girl she was 😭 that gaurav 😡 abhay was jealous seeing piya and gaurav , so cute 😳 and u kamini , such a bad spot u ended it 😡😡 hope piya confesses finally cause I hav I high doubt that she would say ILU to abhay cause its your ff 😭 u better Make abhiya confess soon 😡 or else ... 😈 And I really wonder what happened to piya in her teenage that she from a happy girl became a girl with no friends , when will u reveal It ?
And so sorry for being so late for the ff , first had exams and then had lazyness 🤣 actually I still have lazyness 🤣 sorry for short comment sheryu , I wish to write a page but ahhh I m not very good at expressing things 🤔 I m soon gonna catch up with time and again 😃
Amazing upd sheryu and u better upd soon
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