Originally posted by: Andromeda001
It was B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L Shreya! A truly spectacular piece of writing! *claps* Mindblowing n out of d box concept, very intricately n beautifully written, esp complexity of emotions was described sooo well!!!
First I will comment 4 previous chappy😳. Piya finally came 2 know abt d true feelings of Abhay frm dat note dat he left there n now she is drowning in guilt dat may be it is her who drove him away. All d emotional turmoils, fights n outbursts were written soo realistically *trust me i cud see those throwing things n outbursts of Piya*
Alina, rightly said, "Piya ended up loving equally complex person as her". Both are complex, stubborn, introverts of biggest order and also hurt very deeply hurt by their experiences wid life n so r a kinda afraid to trust again n r reluctant to give dat place to anyone n accept their feelings. Both r similiar yet different in a twisted way. Finally Alina put some sense into d head of Abhay n made him accept his weaknesses n insecurities. I hope this time he wont deny his heart.
I do not deserve this praise..khair chodo..ab tumhe free mein dena hai do😆
Thanks a lot Kirti...yup Piya and Abhay ek se badhke ek🤣 Yeah Alina made him accept it
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Shreya what shud i say! D note u added at d end must have cleared d concept of magnetic dipoles to all😆. No it wasnt rushed at all! Beautiful beautiful!..Piya didnt realize d car she is following is *innocently* standing outside her own apartment! I cud literally see Abhay in awkward situation before actually starting d talk. So d roots of all this were frm their schooldays. Finally all explanations ended to d same point dat he loves Piya. The words n way u chose 2 express all these emotions were simply mindblowing!
Finally Abhiya kiss n *ahem-ahem* n proposal too.
Will miss this ss shreya, it is nt only close 2 ur heart bt ours too *in fact all those gals here who find themselves relate 2 Abhiya here in one or other way*
Superb Attempt!
Vasudha
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