Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

ALS that was truely brilliant. The conversation bwt abhiya was very well written...they finally disclised their feelings:D

beautiful description of emotions

Loved it

Great ending

Thnx fr pm

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

i liked the way you made the two dumbos finally see sense 😆 and that note about magnets was written really beautifully

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

OMG!! shreya that was such a beautiful end...i just loved it..

finally they cleared all their MU and confessed their love..

and last part was so cute and naughty..too mushy...and i love mushy!!

shreya this was one of my fav fic..and i am so gonna miss it...

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

wow great story
i'm really going to miss reading this story of your
thanks for the pm

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

beautiful ending shreya👏👏 They talked and sorted out everything.,.😃

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

awww... At lst dey cleared all d MU
❤️ed d end :)
its awesome..

Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1087

Last update already?😲Guess I missed a update or two.Well,I'll miss this SS a lot,since it's one of my favourites.

The update was wonderfully written.👏And not rushed at all.

The words you've used here to describe their feelings and things,well done 'cause those tell you a lot about the person.I loved the way you described the big confession.

Hope you start a new SS/FF soon😃

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1088

amazing happy ending
-poor abhay problem in confessing his feeling to pia & stretched conversation like rubber
but atlast confessed to pia
when abhay confessed , that time pia reaction was awesome but nxt moment , she came out from trance & accept abhay
abhiya moment really beautifull , romantic, passionate , expressing feeling to each other , all emotion describe in beautiful manner
& atlast a beautifull note which was amazing about magnet - this signifies abhiya lovestory in unique way
- thanks Di , for such a beautiful abhiya lovestory which was started since school day & come to at present time & accept each other
but Di,I'm going to miss story

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1089

wonderful update.

for the first time abhay let out his feelings in open and confessed and accepted everything clearing out all of pia's doubts and fears also.

loved it.

the last part was romantic and brilliantly written the parallels drawn b/w abhiya and the poles of magnet.

both of them were complex characters in this ff and it was interesting to read about them.

awsum ending and would definitely miss reading it.

very well written.

thanks for pm.

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mire

@mire220

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1090

amazing story!! i luved all the updates..
superb written.. i will miss the story..:)

thank you sooo much for a beautiful abhiya lovestory!!!
hope for a new ss from you..