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Posted: 13 years ago
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tum mera pichha nh chodugi na 😆 @shria
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya4evr

tum mera pichha nh chodugi na 😆 @shria


nahi kabhi nahi hamara saath to janam janamantar tak ka hai🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shria


nahi kabhi nahi hamara saath to janam janamantar tak ka hai🤣🤣🤣


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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Romi:dont worry romi i m not going to take ur tittle 😎 wo tum pr hi suit krta h ,meri batein to sugerfree hoti h 🤣 about ff ..mmm... i have two story for ffs which i was planning from last 8 or 9 months ... i know long time *sigh* bt i m nerverse actualy highly nerverse 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AYEASHU TUMNE CH 2 LIKHA KYA?😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ha likh liya or last night hi post karne wali thi , bt mere phn msg folder se use yaha copy krke post krne me at least one hour lagta h , mene copy kr ke use yaha post kiya lekin usse phle wo post hota mai so gayi 😭 or phn off ho gaya..ab mujhe sari mehnat phr se krni padegi ... 😭😭 bt aj update kr dungi 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya4evr

@Romi:dont worry romi i m not going to take ur tittle 😎 wo tum pr hi suit krta h ,meri batein to sugerfree hoti h 🤣 about ff ..mmm... i have two story for ffs which i was planning from last 8 or 9 months ... i know long time *sigh* bt i m nerverse actualy highly nerverse 😛


sory for poking my nose but kya karu mein hu aadat se majboor😆
@blue itna time se soch rahi ho😲😲😲😲 itna time mein to ek baccha bhi born ho jata hai par tum abhi tak soch rahi ho🤣🤣 dont be nervous mein hu na😎😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya4evr

ha likh liya or last night hi post karne wali thi , bt mere phn msg folder se use yaha copy krke post krne me at least one hour lagta h , mene copy kr ke use yaha post kiya lekin usse phle wo post hota mai so gayi 😭 or phn off ho gaya..ab mujhe sari mehnat phr se krni padegi ... 😭😭 bt aj update kr dungi 😛


tumne mujhe tragic ff likne ki dhamki di thi na isleye tumhare saath aisa hua😉 mujhe to bara bara accha laga ye sun ke🤣🤣 check ur scrap😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@shria: mujhe phle se pata tha tm us me apni nosy zaroor poke karogi 🤣 , chal i will write my ff but hoga to vo tragydic hi , phle hi update me abhiya ko mar dungi 🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Abhay n kabir was hell shocked after seeing that all girls were partying there ,they were dancing on the songs played by the dj . They looked each other confusingly , then they tried to searched misha n pia ... Bt then they got another shock that not only girls were included in the party bt two Men too were dancing in the center of the girls... They performed striped show there n all girl cheered for them
"go Roko"...
"c'mon hunter" ... ( that were male stripers/entertainner's names , desi boys 😛🤣)

n some girls even whistle for them 🤣 ...

Abhay n kabir: they hire male entertainers ...!!!! 😲😲

both were extremly angry now n again searched for misha n pia ... After a while kabir found misha at bar side as usual at her fav. Place 😆 He went to her .. Bt pia was nowwhere to found n abhay's eyes were looking for her impatiencely .He was angry, no doubt ! N suddenly his eyes stopped at a girl . the girl was standing with the male entertainers n she wore a baby pink color sleeveless top over blue color jeans . Simple look bt still she was looking gorgeous. The male entertainers were giving a special attention to that girl n she was just smile at them . That was enough to incresed abhay's anger because the girl was none other then piya, his piya !! N seeing her with another man was boilling his blood , he stepped toward her , bt piya was unknown of his presense till he reached to her n held her wrist , first piya was surprised when she felt that someone was holding her wrist bt touch was fimilar to her , she turned around n shocked to see That it was abhay.



Abhay's rage could easily be seen through his eyes bt he didnt utter a single word ... Piya knew that abhay was angry n that scared her little.
He tightened his grip on her hand , was about to moved from there with her bt before they could moved Roko (male striper 😛) held piya's other hand n stopped them ...

Roko: hey Man whats ur problm? Where r u taking her ?

Now piya was more scared because abhay's angry eyes were stop at where roko was holding her hand , n she knew that abhay cant bear this ..

Abhay: (glared at roko angrily) LEAVE HER HAND !

Roko looked at piya confusingly

Abhay: (with more angry tone) I...SAID... LEAVE... HER HAND !!

that scared roko n he immidiatly leaved piya' hand 😆

Abhay: (cont. in Same strong n angry tone) NEXT TIME IF U DARE TO TOUCH HER , THEN U WILL NOT ABLE TO TOUCH ANYTHING ELSE IN FUTURE ! N THATS MY PROMISS ...ABHAY RAICHAND' S PROMISS...!!!!

n before roko or anyone could react ,abhay rushed toward piya's bedroom with her , leaving all other behind confused n shocked .!



Piya's room


Abhay locked the door as soon they entered the room

piya : abhay leave my hand ! Mujhe dard ho raha h

abhay: (tightened his grip) tumhe dard horaha h ? N wt about me , huh?

Piya: y u behaving like this ,as if i did a crime , its just a party abhay!

abhay: (angrily) party my foot !!! I was missing u n here u r buzy in partying with other men 😡

piya: yeah i can see how much u were missing me (rubbed her fingertips on his cheek n showed her fingertips to him because it had lipstick color which she removed from his cheek)

Abhay: Pia i can explain it !

Piya: (angrily)oh plz abhay leave it , i dont want any explaination ! (tried to free her hand from his strong grip)

he pulled her toward him without loses his grip on her hand

Abhay: (angrily) But i want an explaination ! I want to know what the hell u were doing with those men?how cld u do this to me ? Look at me pia n tell me didnt u think evn for once about me before doing this ?

Pia: (avoiding his gaze) did u think about me before going to that bachelor's party????

Abhay: (shockd n leavd her hand) u know about bachelor's party ?how?

Piya turnd around to avoid direact contact from his eyes n fold her hand over her chest.

Piya: (shoot angrily) i know about ur bachelor's party , i know about that dubai importd belly dancers 😡, i can see u had fun there , but did i asked anything ? NO ! When i have no prblm after knowing this ,then y u hv abhay? Dont i have any right 2 do fun or clebrate in the same way u do? Y should only boys have all the fun ???

Abhay was hell shockd n extrmly angry , many things was running in his angry brain .
"how cld she think that he was enjoying that bachelor's party ? How cld she think that he have any interest in those belly dancers ? How she cld she expect that he will not have any problm after seen her with that male entertainers."

he lookes at her angrily bt be4 he cld react he noticd a small smile on pia's face ,which she tried to hide from him , actually she was trying hard not to smile 😛 , now all was clear to abhay , she was doing acting to fool him ...Yes She was enjoying abhay anger n his jealousy which were proving his beyond all boundies love for her ... Now abhay's anger vanishd n he pulled her close to him through her waist with a sudden action , that shocked her . They were so close that even air cld not passd from between them n abhay cld heard pia's heart beat which increased because of him .

Abhay: (smirk n lifted her chin up with his finger ) hmm.. What u said ? Plz say it once again😎

piya was confused n shocked but not ready to accept her defeat 😛

Piya:(in a trumblng voice because abhay's closeness was affectng her ) y-y so-ould o-only boys have a-all the fun?

Abhay : (raisd his eyebrow) n u think which u were doing was fun ,huh? Then let me show u what actualy called FUN 😉

abhay pressed his lips to her n start kissed her with all over love he has for her . Piya's eyes widend with shocked, first she didnt respond the kiss because she want to showed her fake anger by this bt it was becaming hard for her to controld the argue to kiss him back ...the kiss was sending a sensation in her body through spine n his lips were teasing n sucking hers lips n challenging her for her
response.now she cant take it anymore n gave in ...she
kissed him back with the
same intensity of love and
passion.she lifted her arms to his neck n caressed
his silky black hair and his arms were pulling her even more closer to him.piya grew weak in her
knees bt abhay held her with his strong arms through her waist n crassed her back while deepened the kiss.they tasted each other mouth .after a long n passionate kiss they separated to catch the
breath.both of them gazed at each other.abhay looked at her intensesly which made her blush even more n he loved the way she was blushing.he gently caressed her red color's cheek n wishpered seductively in her ear.

"its called FUN in actual mean"

pia blushed hard bt then abhay leaved her aburptly

Abhay: (teasingly) i think i should leave now ... U want to do fun in ur bachelorette party .so, have fun ! I m leaving 😉

piya was confused by his behaviour .

Piya: (held his hand to stopped him) abhay ?😕

abhay: (again grabbed her waist n thrust her toward his chest n said in huskily voice) What huh? U want me to stay here with u ?(nibbled her earlob)



piya:(closd her eyes in anticipation) hmmm...

Abhay:(teasing her in seductive voice) I dnt undrstnd , u want me to stay here or not?(kissed below her ear)

piya: (her breath became heavy n voice trmbld ) y-y-yes...n-n-no...!

Abhay:(nibbled on her second earlob n cont. Teasing her) yes or no ?

she clutched his shirt tightly to control her raising desires n passion .
"yes... yes ...!!"
abhay smiled at
her reaction and the planted a trail of wet kisses back n forth from her ear to lower jaw.he kissed the
side of her lips.piya's heart was throbbing fast,very fast.her hand moved towards his neck pulling him even more closer
to her.when abhay kissed the side
of her lips she turned her head to fully received one more passionate kiss, her trembling n anticipated lips waited for his to kissed her bt abhay again left her abruptly and chuckled.
Piya:(in a longing
voice)abhay...??
Abahy:(teasingly) kafi der hogayi h piya ,ab mujhe jana chahiye.

Piya:(she knew that he was just teasing her.so she thought to play his own game on him )u wanna go ?ok go ,waise bhi i want to enjoy the party , u know roko n hunter wo male stripers jo neeche h , they r so good in dancing n stripe show ... I must say hunter have a tough body ! Even i heard roko is execillent in kissing ... A girl who kissed him 6 month back is still droll over him ! 😆

Abhay felt a pinch of jealousy in his heart n his temprature raised again ...with a sudden action He pinned her
to the wall ,held both her hands tightly with his on the wall , pia understood that she succeed in her plan .

Abhay:(asked angrily) better than me ?



Bt before piya cld repld ,he start kissed her down her jawline , all over her neck ,coller bone n on her shouldrs furiously n passionationtly without loosnd his strong grip from her hands ,C was breathing heavily n unevenly .after a while when his anger dcreasd he leavd her hands n grabbed her waist to pulld her close...he cuppd her face n kissed her
forehead,her eyelids and traced her rosy lips with his finger n said huskily

"no one is better than me !"

then he pressed his lips over
hers slowly.it was a slow kiss which soon turned in2 a passionate one .he was teasing her n his tongue enterd in her mouth.C welcomd his probing tongue and teasd him back with the same intensity of passion.they were exploring each other with their kiss.her hand
found a way to his back and her nails were digging his back with the deepening kiss.his hands were tracing her back and pulling her even more closer to him.they were lost in each other in that moment of ecstasy . Finaly there lips partd for air , abhay was embracing her in his arms n piya's head restd on his chest ... A Beautiful moment in which they cld spend their whole life.

after sometime pia broke the silence

"abhay..."

abhay:(without opened his eyes) hmm...

"I m sorry abhay for hurting u"

"misha's plan...?"

"hmm"

"god one day they both husband n wife will creat fight between us ...!!"

piya:(chuckled) bt mujhe party tumhari wajah se attend karni padi !

Abhay:(shockd n confusingly lookd at her) meri wajah se??

Piya: ha tumhari wajah se ...because jb misha ne mujhe tumhari bachelor party ke bare me bataya to i was damn sure that will not go there at any cost ! mera itna cofidence dekhkr misha ne mujhse bet lagayi ki agr tum party me gaye to mujhe bhi uski arrange ki hui party ko attend karna padega *sigh* i loose the bet n rest u know ...


Abhay: bt i went there b'coz kabir was pleaded me !

Piya: it doesnt matter abhay ,the point is u were there !


Abhay: then i m sorry too !

piya: (Again rested her head on his heart) dont be sorry abhay i know u were missing me , yeah when i came to know that u were at party with those belly dancers ... I got angry on u but when u called me ... My all anger vanished ,it was feeling great That inspite of surounded by a group of beautiful girls u were still missing me ... I m the luckiest girl in the world abhay becaue God grant me with ur love ... I LOVE U SOO MUCH ABHAY ❤️❤️

abhay:(touched by her words n embress her tightly)I LOVE U TOO PIYA .. bt if u knew that i called u then y didnt u pick up the phn ??

Piya :(looked in his eyes deeply n grin) agr me tumhare calls ka jawab deti to kya tum yaha ate ?

Abhay:(shocked) tumne ye sab jaanpuch kr kiya ?

Piya grined n nodded, abhay

smile n lightly rubbed his nose with hers

"My smart would be wife" 😎

piya: (shyly) abhay see my mehendi, hows it ? Mom said that the color of mahendi is depend on how much ur life partner loves u ...

Abhay: (widely smile n kissed on her both hands) then its a another prove of my love for u ... Its beautiful pia , just like U !

Piya: (gigld n proudly) u know mom n misha was shocked after seeing my mehendi color , kitna gehra color aya haina?

Abhay: gehra bilkul hamare pyar ki tarha h

kissed on her forhead n again embressed her in his arm ,his chin on her head n her head rested on his heart.

Aftr sometime their sweet momnt was disturbd by mish n kabir who were knoking the door ... Abhay unlockd the door n kabir n misha enterd in the room n said sorry from both of them bcoz they thought abhay was still angry on pia ...


Abhay: (grin) its okey bt i m glad u did it otherwise hum aj nh mil pate (winkd at piya) haina pia?

Piya blushed bt kabisha were confused 😆 ... Misha was half drunk so it became more complicated for her 🤣

kabir: hmm... Its mean all is well between u two

abhay: yup (smirkd without moving his gaze from piya)

kabir: oh then its great !! Now u have to go abhay ..it already too late... N dont worry their party is ended ...Mene sabko bhaga diya 🤣 ... Now u too go before mom dad arrive otherwise mom phr se tumhare kaan kheechengi 🤣

abhay:(Looked at kabir ) agr tum meri hone wali sali ke hochuke pati na hote to shayad abhi tak yaha khade nh hote !

Kabir : dara mat yar ..!

Abhay: ok i going bt first u two turn around n put ur hand on ur ears!

Misha: jb turn around hi ho jayenge to ears close karne ki kya zarurat h ! 😳

Kabir: sushh..misha abhay ne kaha kaan band to kaan band 😛

they both turned around n placed their hands on their ears , abhay stepped toward piya .

Piya:(nervously)abhay what r u doing?

Abhay: sushhh... (kissed on her cheek) we will meet tomoro piya n after tomoro u will be mine officialy ...till then take care i want to see most beautiful bride , i hope u will not dissapoint me !...(piya smiled) KABIR DONT TRY TO BE OVERSMART...!!

kabir:(who tried to heard their talk) Oops sorry sorry ...(Again placed his hand on his ears)

abhay: *sigh* or indono se sambhal kr rehna (lightly kiss on her lips) bye ... Kabir u can move now ! Ok bye both of u too !

kabir: wait yr mai ata hu tujhe bahar tak chhodne !

N he too followed abhay , piya run toward her window to saw him again ... Abhay sit on his car seat n looked at window n she gave a flying to him , he catch her kiss n drove off ! Pia stayed at the window till his car disapeared from her eye sight.





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Edited by abhiya4evr - 13 years ago

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