ek kahani AMATZ se ABHIYA tak ki *heart*

abhiya4evr thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
Aao sunau tumhe pyaar ki ye ek saalo purani kahani ❤️
jisme ek thi ladki jo thi rajkumariOR ek tha ladka jo karta tha farari ki sawari 😆 matlab peishai se tha ghudsawar
chhaya tha jispe rajkumari ke pyaar ka khumaar
Dono ka pyar parwan chadne laga
RAJA ki nazro se chhupke wo dheere dheere badne laga[IMG]" />
par ye pyaar ek nazar se nh chhup paya,
rajkumari usse nh uske chhote bhai se karti h pyar ye baat wo hargiz nh seh paya ...
Usne raja ko sab aa kar bataya
use laga raja uske bhai ko de dega saza-a -maut
kyuki uski prem kahani se lagi thi raja ke dil or izzat pe chot😡
phr rajkumari maithli sirf uski hogi
wo khayal bunne laga ki uski or rajkumari ki bhi shadi hogi😡 😆
siddartha ki soch galat nh thi
or raja ne abhayendr ko maut dena ka alaan kiya, or rajkumari maithli usne uske kamre me Qaid ki 😡
lekin jaisa sidhartha ne socha aisa kuch na ho paya
jaise hi rajkumari ko pata chala ke uske dewane ko di jayegi maut to use uske kamre se bhagne se koi nh rok paya😃
usne abhyender ko to qaidkhane se diya bhaga
ye vada kar ke vo uske paas zaroor ayegi
or sirf uske hi sath apni zindagi bitayegi😳
lekin uski is harkat ne raja ke krodhh ko diya jaga!
Apni jhooti izzat ko bachane ke apni hi beti ko maut dene ka liya usne faisla ...
Karva diya usne rajkumari ko kamre me qaid or lagva di uske kamre mai aag ...
Rajkumari chillati rahi leke apne deewane ka naam ..
Tabhi abhyender waha a pahcha
dekh ke raajkumari ko aag me , use laga bht bada dhakka 😭
uske sath sath sidhartha bhi gaya tha waha pauhch
kaise bachaye wo apne pyar rajkumari ko yahi raha tha wo soch ...
Dono ne rajkumari mathli ko bachane ke liye us bhayanak aag me chhalang lagai




Rajkumari ko to wo bacha nh paye lekin uske sath sath un dono deewano ne bhi apni sanse gavai 😭 😭
par kya yahi ant tha is pyar ki kahani ka ? jaha rajkumari or uske deewano ne apni sanso se apna rishta hamesha ke liye tod diya!
Shayad HA yahi is prem kahani ka ant tha kyuki iske baad in teeno ki kahani ne alag mod leliya , or ek aisi zindagi me kadam rakha jaha na to inke paas sanse thi or na hi dil ki dhadkan ek taraf maithali ko sidhartha ne ye zindagi di or saalo tak use apne sath rakha abhyender ki nazro se dur , or maithali ne bhi shayad dubara kabhi abhyender ko yaad nh kiya ,wahi dusri tarf abhyender saalo tak maithali ki yaadon me jalta raha or use yaad kar ke tadpta raha 😭
LEKIN saalo baad shayad upar wale ko bhi abhyender/abhay ka ye akelapan , ye tadap or ye dard nh dekha gaya
or usne Piya abhay ki zindagi me bhej di, dekhne me to thi wo bilkul maithali ka hi saya!
Piya ne abhay ko andhero se nikala or use roshni or pyar ka naya rasta dikhaya!
uske bejan dil ko apni dhadkan di !
Or unke pyar ko badne ke liy piya ki sanse hi kafi h ye abhay ko usne akal di 😆
OR PHIR SURU HUI ABHAY OR PIYA KE PYAR KI EK ASAMBHAV PREM KAHANI ! ❤️ ❤️
jise piya ke vishwas , abhay ki himmat or un dono ke pyar ne SAMBHAV kar diya 🥳




I dont know why i wrote all this 😳 may be i want to made this 😛 but pls no ande tamater 😆 Agr Fekna h to french fries FeKO , bht mann kar raha h khane ka 🤣 good or bad watever u think about this plz share 😉

Created

Last reply

Replies

21

Views

3.1k

Users

9

Likes

14

Frequent Posters

abhiya4evr thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
geny, nafi n kirti not fair yaar atlest chhotu sa hi cmnt kar dete 😔
Rmuk thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Res will read again and comment kal ok.
Edited
Ayesha u just touched my heart, such a heart touching piece of work. Just amazing, fab and brilliant work!!!!
u made me relieve the whole ametz story again. Just superb yaar, no words!!!!
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
trishnawaliya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
thanks 4 dis beautifull post:-):-):-):-):-)
Andromeda001 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Lovely post dear!
The journey of Abhayendra 2 Abhay is B'fully described!
..juhi.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
this is jst WOW!!realy very gud❤️
TeDylove thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
ayshu this really beautiful written👏👏

its feel like i am reading some fairy tail poem😳 all picture was going from my eyes when i am reading❤️ i still remember abhay's love pain and stubbornness😆


try more write this type but one small suggestion agar sath me 2-3 pic add kar deti jo hamari memorable movements he to or maza ata😃

but still its really good😛
abhiya4evr thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

thanks 4 dis beautifull post:-):-):-):-):-)


aww... ur welcome and thanks for liking it 😳
abhiya4evr thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Lovely post dear!
The journey of Abthayendra 2 Abhay is B'fully described!


thanks 🤗
abhiya4evr thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

this is jst WOW!!realy very gud❤️


thanks 🤗 i m glad u like it

Related Topics

Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani thumbnail

Posted by: Fearless_Lover · 6 months ago

Jab tak Hriti wapis aa kar new AT Thread nhi banate tab tak yahi chat karo

Expand ▼
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani thumbnail

Posted by: White-Lilac · 1 years ago

Welcome to Enigmatic AbhIya AT #344 Welcome to Enigmatic AbhIya AT, heaven/home for AbhIya lovers..come relive the memories, share, shower your...

Expand ▼
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani thumbnail

Posted by: simply.meghana · 1 years ago

Hello folks! My writer's block is gone for now so writing an SS with the following writing prompt You are a vampire hunter. Your roommate is a...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".