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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon thank u so much
my name is alicia pm me yes i will do it 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: annie.doll

oh woww..\!!,,thanks dear...awesome update;..😊 piya is shooo shweet n innocent..😊.lovely n cutest update👏..thanks once again .and totally had a great shock to knw tht piya knws about suhaagraat...!🤣...they both r shooo cute together..😛.loving it alot...😊

thnks for pm..n dont frget to pm me when u update...sure dear i will

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awww such a lovely update, piya is so cute, and innocent,lol she knows SR, really shocking.thanks a lot dear 😊 Plz continue soon and pm me ok. yes i will do dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Aww piya is so cute thank u so much dear

Abhay is her prince n she is his doll yes she is
Piya is too young 😛
Update soon yes i will
N please do pm me sure

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

pia is really cute here, yeah she is but pls kajal, dont spoil her innocence as yet. dont worry i wil not 😛pls make abhay wait and let pia be of legal age first ha ha ha bechara abhay lol itna wait kaisey karega 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update thank dear a lot
Pia is so cute.loved her 😊

do pm me sure dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramita94

as everyone I am suprised too about the SR.. and I even know tht u can become fertile once u get ur period but still Piya is so innocent maybe after a leap where she would be older I dnno but you are the writer its up to you but plz pm me! 😊 well dear wait and watch lots of twist and turns are yet to come ...dnt worry and thanks sure will pm u..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-2

Abhay Room:

Here abhay got the biggest shock😲 of his life after listening piya words.Abhay stands up in a jerk. Abhay looked at Piya. She was busy in observing things. Abhay again sits beside piya. Abhay doesn't know how to put words now in front of piya.

Abhay: piya {piya looks at him} its too late, come on lets go to sleep.
Piya: but 🤔 hmm I feel scared mujhe akele nahi sona
Abhay: I am here only.

Piya bring her hand in front of abhay.

Piya: promise u will not leave me

Abhay sees it and holds her hand.

Abhay: I will never leave you promise.

Piya smiles and hug abhay tightly, puts her head on his shoulder. Abhay caresses her hair.

Abhay: Piya did u liked the room.
Piya: its too big, my room was so small at my home.
Abhay: do you want to change our room.
Piya: no no its nice but I want to change the color of walls. Don't you think it should be color-full?
Abhay: I love white.
Piya: I love blue

Abhay: do u scare of me?
Piya: no who said this? Aap toh mere prince ho toh phir mujhe aapsey kyu dar lagega?
Abhay: Do you know that we are married?
Piya:-----------
Abhay: bolo Piya???
Piya-----

Abhay looks down and sees piya sleeping peacefully in his arms. Abhay also closes his eyes and sleep hugging piya.

Piya was in a dark room, she was sweating fully. she was calling Abhay abhay where are you? Some one come from the back put cloth in her neck and start pulling it very hard. Piya was not able to breath. Aaabhhhayy😭 aaabbbhyy😭.. Some one pushers her to the wall. Piya fells down and her head was injured, it was bleeding.

Abhayyy piya scream woke up in a jerk and start crying😭
Abhay switch on the light and sees piya. She was panting badly and crying

Abhay: piya piya kya hua tum theek toh ho
Piya: woh mujhe maar daalega.. plz mujhe bacha lo
Abhay hugs piya tightly
Abhay: kaun kaun maar daalega. koi bi toh nahi hai yaha

Piya was scared and she was clinging on abhay. Abhay try to make piya sees him but she was not leaving. Abhay makes piya drink water. Piya breath was not normal.

Abhay: shhh shhh piya dont cry.. main yahi hu tumare saath. dont cry
Piya: lakin woh phir aa gaya
Abhay: koi nahi aayega shhh {abhay hugs piya} come on lets sleep

Abhay holds piya and piya hides her face on abhay shoulder.

Abhay {thinks}: few hours before she was talking like a kid with and now sudden change. Today is her first day in this house and she knows hardly some one here and then also she was scared so much.

Dobriyal House:

Madhu was not able to sleep as she was thinking about piya same was happening with Aranav also. He was also thinking about piya only

Madhu: Suniye

Arnav looks at madhu.

Arnav: I know tum kya kehna chahti ho.
Madhu: Aapko nahi lagta hai ki humhe abhay aur uski family ko woh baat bata deni chahiye thi.
Arnav: kya kehtey hum un logo sey. tumney dekhan Raichand family piya ke aaney sey kitni khush thi. aisey mey kaisey un sabko yeh baat bata ki meri beti ki umar 14 nahi 17 saal hai aur woh is waqt spilt personality disorder sey gujar rahi hai.

Madhu starts crying bitterly😭😭 Arnav sees her

Madhu: Sab meri galti hai agar mey us din piya ko us tution waale ke pass chodh kar nahi jaati aur na woh piya ke saath zabardasti aur usey maarney ki koshish karta 😭. Sab merey kaaran hua hai.

Aranav: Waqt aur kismat ko koi nahi badal sakta madhu. yeh sab piya ki kismat mey likha tha. Kitney doctors ko dikhaya kaha kaha nahi gaye hum lakin sabney yahi kaha ki yeh bimari ka ilaaz waqt hi hai..

Madhu: meri bacchi kitni khush rehti thi woh us haadsey na jaaney uski khushiyo ko jaisey nazar hi laga di ho. Meri bachi toh jaisey hasana hi bhul gayi ho. aur yeh bimari arnav hum kya karengey???

Madhu starts crying again 😭and arnav console her 😭

Arnav: sab theek ho jaayega madhu, abhay piya ko sambhal lega.


Morning Time:

Abhay was getting ready. Piya was sleeping while hugging pillow. Abhay comes to piya to wake her up. Abhay smiles and watches piya sleeping like a small kid.

Abhay: Good Morning sweetheart

Piya opens her eyes and sees abhay.

Piya: arey aap.. Aap kab uthey.

Abhay was again shocked to see piya behaving like this. But he kept silent.

Abhay: jab meri princess so rahi thi

Piya: come on abhay princess chotey bacho ki kahaniyo mey hoti hai.

Abhay was confused..

Abhay: okay go and have shower.. sab humara wait ka rahey hai.

Piya was feeling dizzy. she puts hand on her head.

piya: hmm

Abhay left piya and goes down for breakfast when piya falls on bed and her eyes were closed. Everyone was waiting for piya. Abhay looks at time. Piya comes down she was wearing blue full sleeves top and black skirt with black and blue muffler. Her hairs were straight and she was wearing diamond earings. She was looking so beautiful. Abhay was amazed to see her beauty and he was drooling over her again and again.

Piya: Hi everyone.

Everyone smiles. She takes blessing from everyone. She comes and sits with abhay.

Kabir: Bhai aaj mujhe school sey aap pic karogey you promised we will go to video game zone.

Piya was thinking why kabir was calling abhay bhai...

Abhay was drinking water while listening kabir and there goes the earthquake when piya said

Piya: Abhay Bhai mujhe bi saath chalna hai...

Abhay threw water from her mouth and start coughing. Everyone start laughing.

Piya: Abhay bhai sab has kyu rahey hai
Abhay: piya mey tumara bhai nahi hu
Piya: lakin Kabir toh bhai bol raha hai na toh mey kyu nahi
Abhay (angry tone) kuch bi bolo lakin bhai nahi
Piya: nahi mey toh bhai hi bolungi

Kabir: arey piya bhaa { his mouth was open when abhay stares at him) I mean piya bhai toh woh merey huey na tumare toh woh

Piya: merey toh kya:

Abhay was becoming hell angry... She makes piya stand up in a jerk

Abhay: I will tell you ki mey tumara kya hua.. I am your husband dammit.. Kab sey mana kar raha hu ki mey tumara bhai nahi nahi hu lakin nahi zid kar rahi ho

Piya starts crying and abhay closes his eyes.

Dadaji: Abhay yeh kya tarika tha piya sey baat karney ka
Teju: Ha abhay yeh tumney bahut galat kiya woh bechari toh abhi yaha aayi hai
Haseena: Kitni baar kaha hai itna gussa mat kiya karo lakin nahi tum koi baat nahi maantey.. rula diya na

Abhay: waah kya baat hai woh toh abhi aayi hai aur mey aapka apna khoon mere baarey mey na soch kar usey daant rahey ho..

Piya looks at abhay.. Abhay sees piya

Piya: Kati ... kati tum bahut burey princess ho mey tumsey kabhi baat nahi karungi mujhe ghar jaana hai...

Everyone was trying to stop piya crying...

Abhay(thinking): Strange piya kitna ajeeb behave kar rahi hai..o God kaha fas gaya mey...

Precap: Abhay consoling Piya...

Guys tell me how was the update.. please do like and comment... love u all...





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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update..so feeling bad 4 piya...abhay is ao caring piya said abhay bhai🤣 🤣...its too funny...continue soon..precap seem nice
Edited by Aish-Naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update
loll Pia calling abhay bhai 🤣🤣.it was hillarious

what a twist!! Pia has split personality disorder. feeling bad 4 her
Arnab and Madhu should at least tell abhay the truth
Edited by .rumki. - 13 years ago

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