Abhiya FF:It is not easy to forget you UPDTD PG31 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear, i really hope that jay makes sid see reason and he understand how much abhay and pia need and love each other
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its ok about da link.nw feeling v gd after reader the latest chap.it was full package of drama,emotions,thrill,suspense nd action.v well written.u r rt actually i was v attached to dis ff from day one.so dats v why its v difficult to say it good bye.but still v glad to hear dat ur going to start nw ff.will b waiting desperately.n do pm me whenever u update.best of luck.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh sid pagal ho gaya hai😡
hope sb thik ho jaye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read both the chps!! Ooh such a sad end to chp 11!! :'(
Pls end the ff on a happy note!! :'(
But it was fab as always!!
-Gauri
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update
n its really cute of jeh to notice da things b/w abhiya
but da precap 😭 sad
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here goes the last update......

CHAPTER 12


The next morning atmosphere itself was gloomy. Birds were not chirping that much. Sun was not ready to come out of the clouds. Cattle was crying continuously as if she sensed the loss.

All were ready to go. Piya had done her packing, anxiously waiting for Abhay. But he was nowhere to be seen. It was the time for them to go. Still Abhay was out of sight. She wanted to go and search for Abhay, but she was afraid of her brother. So instead she went and hugged Sreevidya. Piya was having hard time controlling her tears. She had started considering Sreevidya as her own mother. She thought that she'll never lose her...but now...she doesn't want to lose this mother and her son who love her madly...but what to do...sometimes life doesn't give us choice...

After bidding Sreevidya a teary farewell, Piya took her bag and went out of the house. Still Abhay was not present. Her heart was hammering rapidly... each passing second without seeing Abhay's face...she felt she is dying...she silently prayed to God to grant her at least this wish...to see Abhay before she goes...

And the God did grant the wish... There he was near the gate waiting for her. She almost ran towards her...she want to hug him and tell that she too loves him the way he loves her... but something inside her stopped her from doing that...

Abhay extended her hand towards her. Piya looked at it only to see a bunch of PLumeria flowers in his hand. Her vision blurred as her eyes filled with tears. Even in the last minute he was trying to make her happy by gifting her favourite flowers... she felt soo lucky to love him...she looked at his face... she became concerned as she saw the sand all over his face indicating what had transpired when he was plucking the flowers. She took hold of her duppatta and with that slowly started wiping the dirt off his face. He closed his eyes as it to saviour her touch for the last time...

At this moment, Sid also came out of house. He saw both Abhay & Piya in a trance. He coughed in order to break them from their trance. And it indeed did. An embarrassed Abhay and Piya started looking elsewhere.

Sid: "Challo Piya... Let's go... Abhay... Won't you come with us to the car?"


Abhay wanted to say No. But he didn't want to miss a single second he can with Piya. So he reluctantly followed the brother-sister duo. They all walked through the paddy field to reach the main road. All were immersed in their own thoughts. Piya was feeling that each step she take is equal to hundred steps... she wanted to yell at her brother to stop and run towards Abhay... alas...she can't do that... Fully involved in her own thought process she almost lost her balance... If it was not for Abhay, she would have definitely fallen down... this didn't go unnoticed by Jay.

As they reached the main road, Piya directly opened the car door and sat inside without looking at Abhay. This hurt Abhay deeply. Little did he knew that Piya had done like that so as to avoid her breaking down in front of him... she knew that if she look at him, she would lose control over her emotions... she doesn't want that... especially in these circumstances... she closed her eyes remembering all the times spend with him, her hand still holding the plumeria flowers...

Sid: "Piyu... what is this? You already sat inside? Come out... Won't you say goodbye to Abhay...?"

She wanted to protest...but... she managed to keep her emotions at bay and got down from the car still holding those flowers. With great difficulty she extended her trembling hand for a handshake. Before it could meet Abhay's hand Sid pushed her hard from backside. She lost her balance and fall on Abhay... But this time he managed to keep his balance holding her from the waist securely...her chest almost touched his... her hands were in his abs... His hands were wrapped around her securely... after a second's pause, they both looked at Sid bewildered.

"What you guys think of yourself? Was about to sacrifice your love? That too for me? Idiots... how can you do that? Agreed, I was too preoccupied to notice the bond you both share from the beginning. It was only because of Jay that I realised everything..."

Abhay and Piya looked at Jay shockingly. Jay smirked seeing their reaction.

"What? You people were too obvious... since I didn't have any other work to do; all my eyes and ears were on you... I gotcha..."

Sid went towards Abhay, his voice possessing a serious tone.

"Abhay, my little sis had suffered a lot of pain from her childhood itself. If it was not for me and my parents, she would still have her parents...I tried to give her all happiness in her life... Now, her happiness lays in you... you saved her life yesterday...and you took her heart with you... I can see that she loves you with each fibres of her body... I am giving you the most valuable person in mine and Jay's life... Make sure that you give her all happiness... Will you promise me that?"

Abhay and Piya were on cloud nine hearing that... they never expected such a happy ending... Abhay immediately promised him the happiness of Piya... Sid's smile widened hearing this. He gave Piya a small kiss in her cheek and went towards car... now it was time for Jay to take control of the situation...

"Well... happy ending huh? You story doesn't end here... you, Abhay... we are giving you both one week time... you can enjoy how much ever you want... after one week, you need to come to our house with your mom and our sis so that we can fix it officially... till then, try to have control over your overpowering feelings.. Will you?"

Jay's words embarrassed Abhay and Piya... Piya's face flushed red. Jay could not help but to smile at their reactions. He got in the car with Sid and waved them goodbye. They too wave them back... Abhay and Piya looked at the car till it went away from their sight.

Now it was time for them to express their feelings which were unspoken till now. Abhay slowly disengaged himself from her... he cupped her face in his hand...his hazel eyes pierce through her baby brown eyes...he leaned forward... she closed her eyes in anticipation... he smiled seeing the effect he have on her. Slowly, slowly he dropped a soft kiss in her forehead and whispered


"I Love You Piya..."

She opened her eyes which were glowing in love. Abhay scooped her in his arm and twirled around... she started giggling like a kid hugging him closely.

She threw the flowers in the air which gave an additional effect to their love... he slowly stopped twirling her... he looked at her rosy lips... An unknown emotion surged through him... he slowly bent towards her lips... Piya closed her eyes waiting for Abhay's lips to touch her trembling ones... As their lips met, they felt fireworks inside their body... they could no longer feel any pain... they could feel only love... Pure Love...

*******THE END*******

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay...i'm 1st.Beautiful ending...Abhiya together 4ever..just amazing.I'm gonna miss reading this.Plz try to write something new on Abhiya
Edited by Monami_50 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww that ws an awsum update...loved it...too
good..jus wow i wud say...the end ws gr8...btw thnks 4d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg! That was amazing! Abhiya together. But it ended! Do write something again
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Posted: 12 years ago
u knw rose its best story na jyada lambi na jyada choti wid perfect ending... sweet si, pyari si, masum si luv story which touch my heart... like my prince princess one... thanx 4 dis story

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