My first ss : De$tined to Meet updated ch-9/PG 30 - Page 3

sounds interesting
ur first attempt definately u do good i know
best of luck
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Thankyou all !
Will try to update today !

Awsome.Plz continue nd thanx 4 pm

nice concept

all the characters are same but the khuranas have not entered .. they'll enter soon .
i m continuing from when pia returned from paris . the same night sumething happened which she doesn't remember ie she rescued abhay . The next day !

Ch 1

It was a beautiful night . a full moon night with stars covering the whole sky !

2 humanly figures were roaming hand in hand with each other. The girl was as beautiful as an

Angel n her cheeks had a shade of pink. Her curly hair was resting on her shoulders. On the other side was a man dressed all in black. he wore a light smile .the girl whispered 2 d man beside her "I LUV U ABHAY!"

"ABHAY, ABHAY" MR RAICHAND SHOUTED. Abhay came out of his thoughts.

Abhay -Yes Dad.

Mr. raichand- "Here take sum blood. u r so weak. You'll feel good."

Abhay took the glass n drank it in 1 go.

Dobriyal mansion

Pia was struggling with her pillow in her bed. "What happened yesterday? Why don't I

Remember it? I was in a car n den...n den what happened. Why do I don't remember?? "

All dese thoughts were rushing through her mind.
Pia looked at her phone " oh god ! it's 8:30 ,I will be late on the first day of college! Oh no," She rushed towards the bathroom.
pia ate her breakfast in a hurry n left for the college in her car. All the thots were rushing through her mind. I hv to find out what happened last night. I want to know…..
Suddenly her car bumped into a black Mercedes!
Pia – oh damn!
She got out of the car. N saw a big dent on the Mercedes.
Not even lukin at the person who got out of the car she started 2 say " I am sorry sir. I didn't mean to. It was all my mistake. I'll pay..
She was cut by a harsh voice – it's ok
Pia lifted her face 2 see the man…

how was it guyzz ??
i know it was a little short ... next time long update, promise ! 😉

nice update

nice update!!!! abhay to sudrne se rha!!! fir se usne pia ko compel kiya!!!! bt as usval don firse ek dusre se tkra gye!!! plz next 1 big hona chiye!!

Originally posted by: 411996

nice update!!!! abhay to sudrne se rha!!! fir se usne pia ko compel kiya!!!! bt as usval don firse ek dusre se tkra gye!!! plz next 1 big hona chiye!!

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

nice update

did abhay compelled pia to forget???so i suppose she smashed her car in his ..