Abhiya ss: nw journey of love update page 7 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
The title Suggestion Came from Luckdiya and thank you Bhavna once again

here is the next update : i am not happy with this update at all i feel i could have done a better job but for some reason i am not able to write abhay's pov the way i want to

its short update but i promise starting next time it will be bigger.
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i hope i can write better starting next time as reading you alls comments i know you all have high expectations .and i hope i can reach there. thanks you all for your lovely comments

Abhay Pov:

How dare she do this to me ? I loved her so much that I went against my parents. My parents told me she does not love you Abhay. I never believed them. Instead I fought with them for her. She was using me. I hate her. I hate her face and I hate everything related to her. She will have to pay for it and then he remembers he married her sister. He married maithali's twin sister. In angry and to teach maithali a lesson I married piya. Maithali you never loved me you always came late whenever we had plans to meet. I always took out time for you. you never valued what you had Maithali. One day Maithali Dobriyal I will make sure you realize value of others and time.

Then he realizes again about piya. Omg what did I just do in fit of anger and to teach maithali a lesson I married piya. But piya could have said no. but she did not. Why. I guess she said married me seeing her moms condition. I need to talk to her. I need to tell piya. But tell her what. I do not know what to tell her. Yes I did feel sorry for piya when her mom was talking about their prestige and everything. But that is not the reason. How should I tell her I married you because I was angry at your sister and wanted to teach her a lesson. Will she be able to forgive me. Maithali killed me today I loved her with all my heart. I loved her more than anything. I have to tell piya.

Precap: meet the Raichand Family


Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Nice update Shreya!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
wow great story plz update soon
it'a an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Fab update shivi!but kitna chotu tha...abhay must not have done dis..he must have thought of other ways...poor pia..
Continue soon..cant wait!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Interesting update shreya! Do continue soon. I want to know what he says!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
this is very small!!! :-(
bt its ok ye to clear hua y abhay get married to pia. oh god poor pia!!! i hope abhiya will reliaese there luv soon! or maithli ke chakkr me abhay pia ko na hurt kr de. thax fr pm!! :-) next 1 plz update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww AWESOME UPDATE DEAR:-):-) LOVELY:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
LOL small but nice update dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update yar
waiting to know more
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely...plzz nxt time pm me...accept my buddy request.

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