Abhiya ss: nw journey of love update page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everyone,
I got this idea for a fanfic on abhiya it's will be slightly similar to the movie Aaina. I have not decided the title yet. If you like it I will continue it and you all can come up with a title. Please do leave your precious comments even if it is this is boring n not good .

Here comes chapter 1:

A newly married young girl sitting in the room all alone in the dark. Here she was sitting all alone with no one around her to console her.. She never ever thought life could be so cruel ever.
In Her pov flashback
I had just arrived home yesterday to attend my sister's wedding but instead I got married as my sister ran away today morning. My mother madhu was a heart patient and she couldn't bear the pain as it was too much grief caused by her own daughter.Then came the groom who was looking for his bride too be he asked me what happened why are you crying. I gave him the note and he after few minutes walked up to me and my mom and told my mom I will marry your other daughter today. After the marriage we came to my mother for blessing but we were too late my mother had breathed her last.

Flashback over just her pov:
For any girl the day of her marriage brings lots of happiness and brings many new relationships but for me it brought only pain n sadness . I do not know if I will be accepted by my in laws as I have heard from my mother they were against their son's marriage to my sister. My sister and him I should say my husband were madly in love with each other and were going to get married today .
One thing I do not understand is why did he marry me when he loves my sister so much he could have waited for her and he does not even know me at all. It was the first time we met when he came to get sister as the priest was waiting for the bride to arrive. Did he marry me out of pity for us as he heard my mom worried about my future . Well then I do not want his pity either I never wanted anyone's pity. Maybe that couldn't not be the reason as I saw him angry after reading my sisters note I saw him clenching his fist with the note n I saw him tear the paper but I did not see angry in his blue eyes when he came up and asked my mom for my hand in marriage. But the when we came to his mansion he took me straight to his room and left slamming the door so hard that I could feel room shaking was that his angry ?
I do not know anything about him really and I do not know where he is at all

All i knew is his name is abhay.

Precap: abhay's pov
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Nikvi29 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter 1 page 1
chapter 2 page 7
chapter 3 page 12
Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice concept dear.
Looking forward for next part
so abhiya are already married, gr8.
I wonder why abhay married piya?
continue soon and pm me.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
my name is alicia pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey damn good... very very interesting... plz continue... full on agrement... plz continue and ya dont forget to pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rmuk

Wow nice concept dear.
Looking forward for next part
so abhiya are already married, gr8.
I wonder why abhay married piya?
continue soon and pm me.


Thanks romita
U will find out in the next update
I will pm u for sure
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
my name is alicia pm me


I will pm u Alicia
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey damn good... very very interesting... plz continue... full on agrement... plz continue and ya dont forget to pm me...


Thanks I am pm u next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept. Lukin 4wd 4 abhay's pov.do pm me also 4m nxt tym
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept shivani...mala aavdli story...chan aahe..suru thev mala khup vachaychy abhay pia vr tuzyakdun..thnx..br ka...vl b waiting...for more abhiya...

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