You were honestly disappointed with this update Tanzie? 😲 This is one of THE BEST update of this FF ever 👏 I'd say this is a milestone. U have it taken it a notch up with this brilliant piece of writing ⭐️ Vampires are no fairy tale beasts n trust me had this part been mellow as a reader I'd be disappointed This update was perfect beyond perfection for me 👏 Its OK I know what u will say, that I am exaggerating n all that 😛, but this time I honestly don't care coz I am going to tell what I exactly felt on reading it: Superb, Amazing, Brilliant, Captivating, Passionate, Fantabulous, Outstanding 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Pia's outburst on their passionate encounter was amazingly depicted. Here she is with a man whom she loves with every fibre of her being who has no recollection about her n then his touches rekindle those fond memories she has of him 😳 It was truly touching 😭
Haseena n Chand have gone to SC. I hope their appeal doesn go in vain Coming to Ragini, I really wonder what could have possibly gone wrong there. Abhay did seem to love her but from what we saw of him till now Ragini was just like any other woman he had probably dated and then left 😕 Whats with this mystery?
I am so happy that u showed Armaan 😊 Had missed him. When will Armaan n Amby realise their feelings for each other? Amber deserves her share of happiness. I hope they get together soon.
I am glad Aryan could rescue Peehu 😊 I hope nothing happens to Peehu or their unborn. Mohini is under the illusion that Abhay will be doomed 😆 Wait n watch honey, ur in for the biggest shock of your life 🤣
Coming to the main part of the story, what shall I say? It was brilliantly written, infact best part of this FF ever. Abhay's scorching thirst, Pia's determination to bring him out of the BlackHole Spell, Abhay trying to control his thirst for not hurting Pia as she had been good to him was wonderfully written 👏 Pia selflessly offering her blood to him n Abhay lured by the call of her blood but more determined not to harm her was portrayed brilliantly. My heart went out to Pia who had to endure so much pain to bring her love back 😭 Especially when the knife cut through her belly Then Abhay trying to save her despite the fact that her blood was driving him senseless, healing the cut while taking in the pleasure of her intoxicated blood and then biting her again was very realistic for a vampire who is blood thirsty, but at the same time doesn want to harm his victim. 👏👏
And then Abhay finally giving into his beast! 👏👏👏👏👏 Superbly written ⭐️ Every intake of Pia's blood telling him her story, infact their story was mindblowing 👏 Then Abhay after having sucked her dry finally came out of Mohini's dark spell n what does he see next? 😭 His love who has gone to extent of laying down her life for him was on the brink of death 😭 Abhay's pain n guilt was wonderfully portrayed here n kudos to u for that 👏 Abhay ripping his chest to revive Pia n Pia feeling every emotion he went through was so so emotional. Now both of them exactly know how they feel about the other 👏 WOW! Am speechless but yet I have written a marathon of a reply 😆 They finally fought against all odds to be together 😍
Mohini ko 1000 volts ka jhatka zor se laga 🤣
Once again fab update Tanzie 👏
Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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