Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 7

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

finally i m here n i dunno after how lng i m doing this...

a big big congrats for this 3rd thread hun n i would love to c three more thread of this story...😳😳 I missed you so much 🤗your stupid exams kept us apart... glad to see you commenting after so long 😳

ur this story is one, which i reli wanna live through as sum reli movie or serial

cmng to story, nw these days u never fail to amaze me wid ur amazing choice of words, dialogues, characters.

i never thought reading past n present would b so beautiful n make me feel totally realistic, although being very honest, i don't like reading abt ragini, believe me i m ok wid mohini bt nt wid ragini😕 Ragini is way better than Mohini because she is not sadistic 😆 but yes, Mohini is intriguing and its fun to read about her.

tel me one thing, what xactly goes in ur mind while writing abt mohini, she is like someone surrounded by hatred, darkness n all evil things, one cn feel d depth of her hatred while reading, sometimes i find her more psychotic than katherine😉 Katherine is far better than Mohini. Mohini is Lady Klaus. she is not that evil though. she had compassion fore people she loves but she got reasons to hate them and it made her hate everyone. but she is surely sadistic about her family, warlock traditions etc.

i would love to c mohini-pia's collision. love n hatred face to face

okay here is for the bestest part of the last whole chapter, d moment u started wid abhiya, i knew this is going to b xactly wat i wanted to read, d game of pull n push, possession , obsession n all d elements which r my favorites n perfect blend of intense love story ... thanks a lot honey 😳

wat abhay did in dt last, it made my heartbeat raise 5 times😳

no doubt d story is still at its best.. thanks a lot I loved the last part too. next update will make your heart race not because of any romantic moments but with excitement 😉 😆

luv u 😊 luv u too 😊

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

awesome update..tanzie..
Loved it..
I'm sooo happy for piya...she got her share of happiness with abhay in manali...
The station & swimming pool scene were superb... Whether abhay has his memory or no memory .. He is still so protective abt piya... thank you. pia will get her Abhay back @ at the place where she got him for the first time.

Ragini & abhay's 1st meeting was interesting...she already seemed so smitten by him but abhay always being ATTITUDE KI DUKAAN...lol She was smitten by Abhay. soon you will get more flashbacks.

i'm glad that finally peehu is working some BRAINS here...i hope, aryan gets peehu back..want to see aryan happy.. I want to see Aryan happy too.

Eagerly waiting for the next update...cant wait to see piya forcing abhay to bite her..loI...its gonna be sexy scary 😛

continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Originally posted by: flora212

Wow wow and wow...no words to describe! Its more then awsome! THE POOL SCENE WAS AWSOME, HOT AND CUTE!!! LOVE INNOCENT ABHAY...HOPE ARYAN ALSO GET PEEHU BACK...PEEHU MUST HV SENT A LETTER TO ARYAN BY HOCUS POCUS, RIGHT? Cant wait fr to break the sand of time magic...lol! Want to see mohini reaction! And i wonder when abhay come back to sense what he will do? I want some romu shomu with pia...pls! Rofl.
Update soon.

Thanks Naf. yes Peehu sent a letter through focus pocus and Aryan will come for her. Abhay will be shattered when he will come to his senses.. lol.. yea romance would be there but not in next update.

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Congo tanzie on bk3.
Now coming to the update, it was as usual briiliant. The way u described each and everything was superb. I loved that ragini and abhay first meeting vala part. Poor peehu felt sad for her. I loved the last part most where abhay asked piya to stay in her room and that swimming pool one was hot and intense. Once again, brilliant update. Continue soon.

Thanks Romi.
glad u liked it. You will see more flashbacks soon. thanks for the wonderful comment 😳

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Congo tanzie.Chalo now update😆😆 Awesome update tanzie.I so loved it yaar.I m gald Pia took the risk of going aline wid Abhay. And poor Peehu.Loved ragini & Abhay 1st meeting.In Ragini & abhay 1st meeting Ragini seems more interested in abhay Unlke Abhiya's 1st meeting where Abhay was also bestowed wid Pia's charm .Oh I loved tht last scene.As soon as Abhiya reached manali Pia got her share of happiness wid Abhay.I cant wait 4 nxt part where Pia's love will break dark spell of mohini.Plz cont..😳

Thank you so much. Ragini was smitten by him in the very first meeting and she was confident she would meet Abhay again. Pia will break the spell and they will share some very intimate moments in Manali... where they got each other for the first time 😳

Firstly CONGO SHONGO TANZIE FOR 3 BOOK 😃
Whatt a outstanding update yaar !!! 👏 👏 🤗
dil garden garden ho gaya 😍 abhiya in pool ☺️ 😍
u know tanzie i always waiting for ur update but when u update i want to read it in totaly peaceful time .so,no one disturb me nd i can enjoy this ff fully 😛 😃 because i love it to much 😆
Thanks for pm and update soon 😊

Originally posted by: -Chinky-

Heartiest congratulations tanzie darling 🤗
I am so happy to see the Book-3 !! I wont mind if you open book-33 also 😛
And thanks for clearing that supernatural court and vampire council are two different things. I thought both are same 😆 thank you dear. 🤗 book 33 😲 mujhe marne ka irada hai kya 😆 i understood many people got confused so cleared the idea 😊
Lastly though I cant promise, I will still try to be punctual with my comments..😆😆
Cant wait to read the next chapter.. I will wait because I have got used to with it now 😛 😆
Keep writing 😃

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Totally loved this update 😃 It was written brilliantly in terms of story telling 👏 BTW if I say more u'll say I am flattering u 😭 even though I say the truth 😛😆 thanks a lot dear... 🤗 though i still cant accept myself to be as good as you say Im 😆

The first part where Abhay meets Ragini for the first time was very significant indeed, waiting to know more about what went wrong there

I am especially curious to know more about Mohini. She is surely an enigma 🤔 I will write more flashbacks soon

So Abhay is finally warming upto Pia a bit even though his memories are not back 😳 The railway incident surely proves how protective he feels about her even now 😃 glad u liked it

Glad to know that Jeh doesn't blindly believe Mohini, its always good to be on guard. It was really humane of him to tend to Peehu even after he got to know she was Aryan's wife. Takes a lot to do that n I am glad somewhere deep down he still has some humanity left in him. Hopefully Alina being alive and the fact that it was Abhay who rescued her will finally open his eyes. Its also decent on his part to have accepted the fact that Pia was never meant for him though I know it will hurt a lot but still he is not brooding over Pia like an obsessive lover 👏 Please dont let Jeh turn negative 😭 For some reason I kinda like that character even though they screwed it in the show. I never meant to make Jeh a confused character like of the show. he is grey and im trying my best to portray him like that. he surely has humanity inside him which made him save Peehu - an unknown person to him who needed help. and when he will see Alina he will realize somewhere he has done a mistake. but doesnt change the fact vampires and werewolves are forever enemies and Abhay is still the killer of his mother.

Aryan finally located them n I hope Chandeena dont arrive way too early n disturb their romance 😆 I also hope Aryan gets Peehu's clue n hopefully he can save both Peehu n his kids. BTW is it twins for Aryan? 😃 I was super duper happy to know Aryan is no less powerful than Mohini but I suppose being an original will have its own advantages n for now Mohini has an edge over him. I wont let chandeena come until Abhiya becomes crazy for each other 😉 yeap, twins for Aryan and he will reach peehu on time.

Waiting eagerly for Pia to undo Mohini's dark spell n next update I want more Abhiya moments please 😃 The last part surely seems to give out a hint that we are in for loads of Abhiya romance in the next update 😉 you are wrong 😆 the last scene wont be extended but yes you will get plenty of abhiya moments because the spell will break next update.

Congrats on book 3 🤗 n I hope we get book 4 as well 😊 provided u dont mind 😳 lets see... thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: urmita

congo on book 3...😊ur writing just gets more awsome with each update, if that's even possible...👏

abhay ragini meeting was significant...the attraction seemed only on ragini's part, definitely begining of trouble...waiting for fuul story... thanks a lot dear. glad you liked their meeting. i will write more flashbacks soon.

abhiya scenes were superb...abhay is so protective of her even without memories...i hope with aryan's help chandeena doesn't arrive too early nd ruin abhiya romance... 😆 they will arrive but before that abhiya will have plenty of time 😉

so peehu sent aryan her location...hope he finds them...

glad jeh does not trust mohini blindly...pls dont let him turn negetive totally in this ff... Aryan will find Peehu... n Jeh is not negative. he is grey and he will remain like that.,

nd waiting eagerly for pia to undo the spell...nd for mohoni to get messed in her own trap...

continue soon...😊 will see next update

hey tanzie, congo for ur book 3 & thnx for such a lovely update...😊

dear when ur going to update next part??????

Originally posted by: 411996

dear when ur going to update next part??????

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