Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 8

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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First of all no words..just... 👏 👏 👏

ok..now tanzie tanzie tanzie dear this was an awesuume update!!!! ⭐️Even my words cnt convey the joy i feel everytime i read ur work! 😊 thanks a lot dear... you and your flattering comments 😆

ok now coming to the update..
The past was a delight to read...that typical mysterious aura wth a dreamy touch was just lovely! So thats hw he met ragini ! Hm.. thank you. glad u liked it n you will get to see more of flashbacks soon.

So jey had to give into mohini's demands! Bt then it shows jey might b bad bt nt evil like mohini! And so i was rite! The sp court ws lukng 4 abhay and it was all bcz of mohini!!
Wow! Did Jey really said dat? 'If anybdy cn hv an effct n abhay then its pia!' Gud that he atleast knws it nw! 🥱
Hm..peehu did a little magic! I guess aryan will get it and cum to help her nw! And ya dat little magic part was too gud!👍🏼 Im again saying Jeh is NOT negative, he is grey and I knowthe difference of grey and neg 😆 he is not bad but that doesnt change the fact Abhay killed his mother. n yea, Aryan will come n rescue Peehu.
Chand said, is pia a wonderwoman,nt knwng tht she really is wen it cums to abhay!
Bt aryan knws they r in manali,so wat next? Will they go there to bring them bck? I hope nt!😕

Abhay doesnt remembr anythng bt nw nd then small things abt pia continues to amaze him...and ur way of stating those small yet significant moments are amazing like always!! ⭐️😊
So abhay was supposd to hav a luk around bt he ended up in watchng a sleeping pia! 😆 U knw tanzie the moment he said her to sleep nd told dat he wnt disturb her n go for a walk in the house ,i instly knew he wud rather end up in watchng his sleeping angel and he actually did!!😆😳 wah wah,.. u knew it right 😆 Pia is now a wonder to him. he is amazed how she can be so nice and caring to her knowing he is bad towards her always. he is not in deep thinking phase...

And lastly ...abhay swimming!!! 😲 Wat was dat?? Hw did he became so merry all of a sudden?? 😲 Did he had any kinda alchohol or anythng like dat...?!! 😕 U knw wat i mean? I am surprisd actualy!!
And he pulled pia in the water!!! Tht was really unexpectd!!! And then the closeness, her effct n hm and lastly the kiss...each and everythng was highly romantic...and wonderful...!!!⭐️😍
Plz cntinue soon..and thanks for the pm dear..😳 he is not himself silly... he is feeling over emotional with everything... since in his thoughts he is a new born vampire and his emotions are magnified... i know you will love the last part...everyone did 😛 😆
do tak..cre..🤗

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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superb amazing update tanzie
liked flashback part.Ragini seemed fallen 4 abhay that day
abhiya part loved it.pia caring 4 abhay,taking him to Manali,thinking abt his food.even abhay caring 4 pia though he has no memory.beautifully written abhiya part in manali. abhay unknowingly accepted pia as his wife. last part was too cute and hot.
Aryan located pia.hope they wont come before pia breaks the spell
so aryan is also very powerfull but being original mohini is more powerful na?
Peehu is getting twins na wow.but is it will be like one baby will sacrifise itself to save peehu?
Cant wait 4 next part where abhiya will exchange blood and abhay will be ok

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Abhiya ko pyaar hua pyaar hua allh miya bhari dopahar swimming pool main ikraar hua allah miya. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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As usual faroo update. Mohini mohini what should I say About this beautiful vixen. I can already imagine rati as ragini.

So baat ab Sp tak agayi hain?? hmmm... wonder who else is the SP Court jury. Peehu is finally using her brains I just hope Aryan gets her msg. he is also suffering🥺

I loved the title of the precap.

P.S Song credit goes to shreya🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Hayeee (drooling) Wonderful Tanzie! Yay *skipping up and down*

Excellent Tanzie but you won't mind that I was laughing in this, will you?😛

So I wonder what is the history of Mohini and the SP court?

I hope she has Jeh for dinner!

Oh and I just noticed Snigie churaofied my song 😡😆😆

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

😃 amazing update!!!
So finally true love of piya s bringing abhay back 2 normal 😉
piya s surely a daredevil bt i think it s quite normal 4 her coz if she cn love a vampire 2 insanity n marry him then she cn do anything 2 save him from shackles of darkness nt bothering abt d risk of handling a deadly vampire with terrible mood swings!
Just another example of what lov cn make u 2 do!!!
peehu seems 2 be successful in giving a big clue regarding mohini's plans.
So supernatural court prob s created by mohini as a vengeance!
She s one hell of a dangerous n powerful woman 😲
loved d meeting of ragini n abhay.
Waiting 4 breaking of blackhole of time spell on abhay n action of aryan n amby against mohini!
Continue sooon!

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

simply loved the update tanzie.

the way peehu is still trying to fight for herself and her babies is amazing and pia's courage and determination to bring her abhay back is also commendable. I loved it the way Abhay is protective about her and has accepted her in his life without even remembering her. 👏

and needless to say the swimming pool scene was too cute, now waiting for some more swimming pool scene 😉

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne

It was a really good update 👏 and a long one too...😃 So...Ragini made the first step towards Abhay...and Jeh...he's intimated and also kinda scared of Mohini...😆 and our hero...Abhay made the "great" Mohini stand in front of SP Court...😆 very good...😃 So..that's why Mohini conspired to also do the same to Abhay...and most of the members were scared of Mohini because of the fact how powerful she is... and Mohini is planning to meet Piya... and Jeh finally accepted that Piya was never his...that's good but I kind feel bad for him...😔 Abhay is still very protective of Piya even when he's a total nut-case right now...😃 and Aryan finally found out that Piya is in Manali in AR Villa...hmm...and he's also a very powerful wizard...because he was born on the day of Solar Eclipse..👍🏼 and Peehu sent a note to Aryan to rescue her...I hope Aryan reaches her soon and saves her... and Maria really liked that Piya is now Mrs.Raichand...😊 and she kinda always knew that Abhay and Piya had something between them...😳 and Abhay is realizing that Piya means something very special to him...😳 and Abhay's heart...it will never change...for example..out of habit..he was staring at sleeping Piya...😳 and Piya got flushed and stammered seeing Abhay's hot-bod...😉 well...she has always been like this...and she misses being close to Abhay...poor girl...😒 and Abhay couldn't resist the temptation of kissing Piya...even when his memory is tampered and he's a nut-case...😳 That's called love I guess...you know...whenever you are close to someone you dearly love and no matter what happens you can't control yourself and your heart to love that particular person...😊 and in your story..you have shown this thing really well...as a fact...in your story...Abhay..being vampire..is not an exception...that's really...I don't have words to describe.😳..it's just so...amazing...hats off to you Tanzie...👏 and thanks for this awesome update and also for the PM...😊 and the precap's title sounds interesting...I'll be waiting for your update...😳