Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

Awesome update tanzie

Wow so kol finally met his old buddy Abhay & uff I love their bonding.

Mohini ki toh band baj gayi.She seems disturb.I guess she has not yet realized tht kol & Abhay have met

WOW I m glad tht pia will fight Abhay's case though Abhay is reluctant 2 do so.

Cant wait 4 more

Plz cont..

Love u🤗

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

lovely and amazing update tanziee
kol looks cool yar and gud to know that mohaini is in danger now
emotional scene when abhay conv to aryan and agreed him on take the responsilbilities of him...
whats wrong with arnab yar every time he went to create poblem for piya
amber is so happy to have babies na nice scene
finally kol and abhay discuss the court members
no doubt mohaini is so evil
wow piya entry rockkksss
so now she will handle the case of abhay
just love the smirk face of kol lolzzz
cont soon

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

First and foremost I am really really sorry tanzie for commenting so late, u know na festive season so was busy with them and study too have started so got late!!!
Now coming to the update I won't say any adjectives this time as I don't have any to define ur heavenly writings dear but yes I would say one thing that is it was not at all boring, it was hell interesting!!!
Thanks for the note tanzie it cleared my doubts, even I was thinking piya can never do any such thing and u cleared it so thanks!!!
Arnab and piya's part was just beautifully written!!! I won't judge anyone here, both arnab and piya's behaviour was right according to them so no question on that.
Poor aryan feel really bad for him, no word can console him now, I just hope he get some happiness in his life atleast in form of his son and daughter. I loved the way u showed aryan's protective side for abhay, it was just beautifully described.
The kids part was so cute.
I loved kol's entry wow finally mohini ki band baajne wali hai. Piya barging in and straight away announcing that she will abhay's lawyer was damn hillarious, idk why but I was laughing like hell. Wow kol now undeestood what's so special about piya, poor abhay and it serves him ri8, piya is that's why perfect for abhay.
I wonder what will happen in sp court. Plz update soon tanzie, once more outstanding job!!!! Continue soon and yea sorry for small comment hope u won't mind!!!!

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Awesome part.
I loved it to the core.
I really loved the bond between Kol and Abhay.
They surely are good friends.
Piya has decided to be Abhay's lawyer.Wow!
Abhay won't be able to convince Piya to stay back this time.
I liked Kol's comments on Piya and Abhay a lot.
I hate Mohini so much.
I wish Alina's testimony might help Abhay.
Tanzie you are a wonderful writer dear.
I'm sorry for the delay in comments.
I'm a bit busy with projects,presentations etc.
I'm also sorry for the short comment.
Plz update the next part soon.
Take care!

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

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captainplus

@captainplus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

heeellow ! u may kno me as a silent reader . but i read al ur ffs very regularly bt i m very lazy 2 comment .bt thought of commenting 2day .now coming 2 the update i love ur writings a lot n the way u r taking this ff .loved ur last update alot and waiting 4r the next part. plz update soon ... i m very sorry if my comment is irritating 2 u that is one of the reasons that i dont comment bcoz most of time i m very irritating and i also dont hav very good social skills as i m very unsocial . so never mind

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Note:

Hey guys Im so sorry I didn update in a month. I even started writing last week but I had high fever and all and still im ill so I couldn't complete. I was about to write OS for AbhIya OS celebration thread and I couldn't even update that. I promise I will update this weekend. please give me some time and sincere apologies. before weekend I will also write an OS but surely this weekend I will update this FF ok? 😳
thanks so much for being patient with me... i know I make you guys wait so much and Im really sorry and like I always said i wont leave my FFs in the middle NEVER.. 🤗