New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Romita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: sukugeny
nice update/...

i think i miss smthing...ye sadu abhay agan sadu ho gya/...hume ye sab seril main kyon nhi mila dekhne ko..abhiya after marrige..tsk.
last scene is same as sid pia ko hstl chodne aaya n abhay ordering pia to go inside...it is fun vikrm i.e KWB i.e viraj dobriyal..nw its intrsting to read nxt evil vikrm abhiya...nxt updte soon..chshmish n vrun.mjht..

Thanks geny dear!!!!
Lol ha serial mein dikhata toh mazza aa jaata yaar. Ha abhay back to his sadu mode again lol.
Aree ha yaad aaya last scene match with that scene i noticed now only lol. Yup KWB is here now.
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yea hopefully it will be interesting now, yup we will update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
awesome update..
poor piya..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm.

Thanks dear!!!!
yea we will update soon.
U are welcome dear!!!

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
wonderful update
hope pia is able to figure out the reason for abhays rude behaviour
thanks for pm

Thanks soo much 😛 she will find but will take time 😳

Welcome 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: fabliha
wow!!! lovely update,romi...😉

From romi : thank you soo much 😃😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: fabliha
wow!!! owesome & interesting update...👏yea vikram ek vampire hai na???really felling sad for abhay...😭

Thank you soo much 😃 hmmm vikram keh baare u will know few coming upds , till then enjoy reading 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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awesuum update girls!!! 👏 enjoyed reading it. 😊 hm..so abhay is acting weirdly all of a sudden! bt i'm sure there is sum big reason for abhay's strange behavior. bt I wonder wat! 🤔 oh..felt bad for poor pia and varun! these two r suffering becoz of dis! whatevr the reasn is I hope that gets solvd and abhay comes back to normal again! 😊 hm..i feel this new guy is grey in charactr. its quite clear tht abhay dislikes him! now am waiting to see wats d reasn n y has ths guy arrivd!

and ya I so loved the little thngs of nature. it was describd so nycly! specially I loved the way u used the night ,darkness as symbol n ur way of xplaining was marvellous too!! ⭐️ great job Romi! 👍🏼 keep it up! N ya I likd tara. She is sweet. Varun too is nyc. [$]
plz carry soon. waiting for the next. 😊
and ya thanks for the pm and superb job roshni n romi. 👏 p.s. Xtrmly sorry for unresing so late. Bt am damn busy these days. So PLz dnt mind.

Thanku soo much Indu , me and romi loved your comment 😃 glad u enjoyed reading it , oh yeah there really I a big reason which u will know in coming 2 upds , till then keep wondering 😆 yeah especially , all of sudden abhay behaving like this is probably giving shock and pain to her 😳 well prob being solved and abhay back to normal would be way to far 😆 your feeling are correct , he is a grey guy ! I know romi did a fab job in that , even myne fav part was tat 😃 we will carry on very soon

Thanks again 😃 no worries for late commenting , we are glad u gave such lovely comment 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: smdosi
Oh that was all sad sad update...wt exactly has happened that abhay had to mask this devil ka roop?? I hope in all this piya doesn't break totally coz broken hearts can never be mended...

Yeah it was , u will know the reason behind the devil ka roop mask of abhay in coming 2 upds 😃 if the broken heart is handled with care and filled again with love and affection it can be mended , wat it needs is time and love 😳 don't worry , piya will be alright 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
amazing updt👏

Thanks primu 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: nfprincess5
amazing update thnx 4 pm😊

Thank you 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
Amazing update! WELCOME BACK GUYS!! Lovely CS n Pics too.
Arey yaar ye Abhay ko ho kya gaya hai? What has happened dat things cant be like as they were earlier? At least he behaved good with Piya 4 sometime bt again returned 2 his sadu mode.
So varun is developing some feelings 4 Tara!
Who d hell is this new trouble? Reveal d mysteries soon.
Continue asap.

Thank you soo much dear , glad u liked it 😃

Abhay kuch Bahut bada hua hai and well u will know the reason soon in coming 2 upds . Yeah tat normal was for sometime only now most of times he will be in a sadu mode

Well it isn't one sided , things are developing both the sides 😉

We will reveal soon 😃