New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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fabliha

@fabliha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

really,shocking update,😲 but loved the way of describing pia's pain😭😲don't know what to say...😕.😲plz,update the next part so on😭

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Piyali

@love.piyali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Omg..!!!! U made me cry romi...it was so so so painful...what had piya done to suffer so much pain..? And why is abhay being a jerk..? Wt ws gotten into him..? Is he mad or sumthin..? Stupid idiot jerk moron etc etc etc...newaz d update ws heart wrenching n written beautifully...loved it...update soon..

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670134

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Oh Goddd !!! what u both have done ???? first Abhay missing...then misscarriage !! poor Piya...she had to suffer so much 😭 u 2 made me cry for her !! & the man entered at last...it was Abhay na ??? then why did he behave like that ??? now what happened to him yaar !!! gr8 job ! nxt part update soon 😊
don worry...we will wait...I understand...even in my ff I faced the demand of Abhiya scenes , Abhiya proper meeting etc...while I plotted the storyline different . don worry it was an amazing update ! loved it to the core

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

hey angel very emotinal update!!! 😭 thax fr pm!!! next 1 update soon!!

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Poor pia...she had a miscarraige.But what is gng on with Abhay?

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Awesome update dear.I lke it.It was sad part.Where Abhay went?Oh I felt bad 4 Pia she lost her baby.I m damm sure tht Man was Abhay but y he is rude wid Pia?Why he instead of hugging her went 2 his bed room?Plz cont

By the way I changed my name frm Cuteshrishti 2 SheDevil

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Fabulous bt sad update!
Feeling so so bad 4 Piya 😭
u described her longing n wait 4 Abhay perfectly,she lost her baby n is broken mentally n emotionally 😭 only abhay cud pacify her bt wat's wid abhay now?
Has he lost his memory or what?
Such an attitude frm abhay broke Piya completely! If i m nt wrong then this was d scene in d prologue right?
Cntinue soon!