New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it
wow abhiya r married
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Posted: 13 years ago
comment updated on pg 15
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update .wow abhiya r married.continue next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

Me first🥳
Aww i love Tara and Pia😳 they are cute sissiy's😆
Abhiya ki shaddi hogayi😆

Nice update girls! looking forward to the next chappy😉😆
Thanks for the pm🤗and continue soon😳



Thanks a lot dear.
Glad u liked it so much.
Yup abhiya married.
we will try to update soon.
U are always welcome dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

rosh and romi u both did a fab update
i just loved it yar
the way rosh u describe the situation of abhiya marriage
the way piya msgng with abhay
piya tara conv was too gud
than in next part liked it the way romi u described the whole mandap scene yar
marriage is totally tradition
and the way abhay tease piya and even varun tease abhay
their bid scene and than the last scene of abhiya where he carried piya
yar i loved it
glad that in 1 part abhiya marry
great work u both did
take ur time and cont it

Awww, thanks a lot benni, for ur lovely comment. It means a lot us. glad u liked both our each and every part so much, rosh did a fab job, and I also tried to match her, thank u for liking it so much dear. We will try to update really soon. Once more thanks dear.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abc123chiti

prologue mein i guess...24 years ka man is abhay...
22 years ka boy is varun...
21 years ki girl is tara...well i guess...

i wonder aisa kya hua...tara ne kuch kia kya pia ke saath jo abhay use gussa tha...
hehehe...mera mind zyada hi chal raha hai...due to your mysterious prologue...nice...

btw amazing update rosh and romi...wow shuru mein hi abhiya ki marriage...awsome...
continue soon...afteroll next chapter is goin to be so hawt...can't wait...☺️😆
thnx for da pm...😊

lolzzz, dear tum kavi hadh tak kareeb ho. U will know our mystery soon. ur mind runs really fast 🤣Thanks a lot dear. Yup, shruyat mei hi subh kaam kar di.Glad u liked it. we will try to update soon, ha romance milega ok. U are welcome dear.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: koli97

<font color="#990033" size="6">awsomeee update romi...😊wahooo Abhiya sooo romantic & cute couple...just love it😊⭐️😳</font>

Thanks a lot mishti di, but it is a combine job of both I and rosh, ok. Glad u liked it so much di, it means a lot to us.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

lolzzz, dear tum kavi hadh tak kareeb ho. U will know our mystery soon. ur mind runs really fast 🤣Thanks a lot dear. Yup, shruyat mei hi subh kaam kar di.Glad u liked it. we will try to update soon, ha romance milega ok. U are welcome dear.


well i love solving mysteries...but not like pia huh...question bank...😆🤣
vooo romance...😆 eagerly waiting...u knw i luv abhiya romance...🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

👏awsom writtn... i enjoyd reading...👏 kip it up n plz snd me pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
plzz dont pm me guys from now on whenever you will update i will going to check out myself ok !!!😃from now on !!!dont take tension!!!!!i will always comment in your topic !!!as koi aapni sisters ko nahi bhulta btw coming to the ff the ff is really nice the story line is going on really well !!!but i am confused by the prolugue !!!i mean its irritating me !!!!!!plzz dont make it a very sad ff i really mean it !!!😭i hope you dont mind actually pkyk mein itne dukh dard ki aab dukh dard sehne ki taqat nahi bachi mere andar !!!haha animal animals laugh laughing monkey monkeys hey maa maata ji bhagwan ke naam par esa maat karna 🤣just one word *AWESOME *YOU BOTH ROCKED TOGETHER hope to read some more ff from you i mean together !!!!a hug from my side 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 oposs many hugs from my side 🤗
update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!update soon !!!update soon update soon !!! update soon !!update soon !!!


!!!cant wait to read more !!!!

ahmm i am really sorry laagta hai meine pura update hi kar daala kisi ff ka 😆😆
dont forget to add romance !!!you know how much i love abhiya romance !!!precap looks interesting aur update jaldi warnaa
shaddi toh hogayi aab next ...i mean
Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago

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