Abhiya ff:Fading Darkness.NEW THREAD LINK PG 1 - Page 88

This update must have been emotionally draining Tora.
The scene you said came out correct dear.
Well balanced.
Piya and Haseena have much in common.
Separated from family, finding solace in strangers.
But family is family.
Piya is being taken back to Dehradhoon.
Where is she being taken?
Good job Tora.

Hey Tora...I know u must be thinking me yaha kaise...😆..Bt u know na my laziness...to commment...Sorry...Now I will be regular...Abt the update ...Abhiya scenes kyu nahi hai yaar...😆...Want to read their face off...Bt nice update n wonderful way of expressing emotions...👏...Do update soon...😛...n haa mujhe bhi pm send karna...😛

hey tora please update soon dear😊 waiting for update😊

tora kaha gayi tum update kab dogi😭

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Hey Tora hows your hostel life going on? Sad to hear you don't have the laptop now. Miss you.

Coming to the update, it was tremendously emotional but yet so beautiful and the pain of all the characters showed had so much depth. How do you manage to write so beautifully? Hats of to you. I so loved it and I can literally feel the pain of the characters and what they were going through.

Poor pia. She has become extremely lonely and helpless in the situation. Thanks to Misha for being there. And also Abhay. Madhu how could she? Even though I understand her POV as Arjuns mother and her part but even as a woman and being a mother, the woman who raised Pia till now doesn't she has any humanity left or her maternal instincts are really that weak that she can call Pia a MESS? Really? She younger than even her own son and how could she do this to a person. I don't think I can ever forgive Madhu in this ff. Im just so glad Abhay came and he choose to let go of the hate for his love. I can literally see the pain of abhay and pia through your magical words. Abhay at one side in pain seeing Pia in such a wreck but also guilty, regretful knowing he is a part of her mess right now and seeing a part of pia still hates him. But just a PART. Im glad he choose to take a stand and protected her and the way Pia feels about him, she will melt soon but Abhay's redemption was shown really well here. Superb writing.

Hope you come back soon and get your laptop.

Awesome tora
abhay wants to help arjun,he cant see piya like this
that means he has choose love over hate
fantastic i loved it

really beautiful update tora. all the emotions have been described so well.

wow great story plz update soon
i feel really sorry for pia and her brother
thanks for the pm

That was a brilliant update Tora. I mean, simply wonderful *claps*
I felt awful for Pia. She's been through too much.
And the ending. I wonder if Pia will know that Abhay donated his blood, and when she does, then what?
Hoping your laptop gets all right soon :D