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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ahh...tht was a fantastic update dear..👏
So abhay pia met atlast! Bt there meeting was quite diffrnt !!! 😳 oops abhay was so rude! Bt that's his signature style!!! Poor pia! Dosnt knws dat is wud b prince is dark!!!
hm..abhay hates nt nly arjun bt pia as well and pia cn sense it too!! Hm..wat will abhay do next? Will he directly ask for pia's hand? 😉 o..i knw i am gettng impatient lol bt i want to see their relatinshp moving fast! 😉 as i love dis arrogant abhay and his hate missions, which always end up into love missions actually!! 😆 😉 jombe bhalo!!! M too xcited!!!
bt donno y i hav a feeling arjun is nt bad at heart nd may b he hasnt dne anythng! Mayb its all a big misunderstandng!! And so am already feeling bad for hm,cz if pia gets hurt arjun too will feel the blow!!! Though i myt b wrong!
Damn tora ur updat made me emotinl! And i so dnt lik gettng emotional!!
Bt y is madhu so mad at pia? Wats the reasn? Is it coz of chand's wife?so am i on the ryt path? 😕
A/w.. Update soon awaitng the nxt chappy! And ya y is the updat so small? Mak it two pages next time! 😉 😛

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Nice update. I liked Abhiya's meeting. At first I thought Piya might think Abhay's angry because she called him bhai but she realised he doesn't like her. I feel bad for Piya she has been crying so much on her birthday because of Madhu and then Abhay hurt her too. Cont soon n thx for pm:)

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

whoa nice abhiya meeting.. abhay is cold very much cold but his behavior someware passionate. and intense.. awesome update tora..

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Well tora, that was a beautiful bit of writing. I really liked how you portrayed abhay and piya's emotions here. But i wonder ... Was Arjun really the bad guy that Abhay thinks he is?

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

That was an amazing update Tora 👏 Poor Pia she is already suffering so much 😭 n now Abhay will add to her misery I guess he's gonna play with her heart, use her n dump her Not sure but he might do something like tat tp avenge his sis 😭 I wish he rather teaches Arjun a lesson than go after her but I suppose then Abhiya will not come together then 😉 Waiting to see how Abhiya's relation will progress 😃 Continue soon...

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm😊

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

I dont know why i was singing the song pehle pehle payar hai pehli pehli baar hai...rofl!
Awsome update!
Hoping to fall abhiya in love...
Update soon.

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

nice update and Pia ne Abhay ko bhaiya bulaya gussa hona toh banta hai boss 😆 and Abhay called Arjun murderer of his sis I think there must be some misunderstanding hai na ?

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

very nice update tora. and pia's pain really touched me. poor girl has gone thru so much and is probably going to go thru so much more for no fault of hers 😭