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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
oh god anji nd peehu...i was crying like hell reading this ch😭😭i want to throttle abhay😡how cn he blame a mother for killing its own child😲😡😡and those ******* they got the money na then y did they kill sneha😭

Abhay didnt deal with his grief well. He should have let their love heal them but his guilt was killing him. But now he realizes his mistake and abhiya will now help each other heal😊

Originally posted by: -Sonia-
this update was so touching .. i felt so sad and a few tears got away ..lol!
you and peehu are incredible writers
i hope, abhiya gets their happiness back !
please please post another chapter soon!

Thanks😊. Dont worry, abhiya will be together soon😊

Originally posted by: flora212
ANJI THIS WAS SOO AWSOME...I LOVED IT!! U DESCRIVED EVERYTHING VERY NICELY...
I CANT BLAME ABHAY FR THIS SITUATION...YES I KNOW HE DID VERY MUCH WRONG BUT HE WAS IN SHOCK AND ABSORVED IN SOO MUCH DARKNESS THAT IT IS IMPOOSIBE TO COME OUT!! BUT STILL HE DID BAD TO PIA...WELL I FELT CRYING FR PIA!!! SHE REALLY WENT THROUGH HELL...I HOPE EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE AND SOMEHOW I FEEL THAT THE KIDNAPERS WERE FROM THE MAN WHAT NAME I FORGOT!! WHO HAD CRUSH ON PIA...YES YES GOT IT..ITS ADITIYA!!! I GUESS ADITIYA IS BEHIND ALL THESE...MAY BE I AM WRONG!!
NOW I WISH THAT U WILL GIVE US ANOTHER ABHIYA BABY...😆
AND HATS OFF TO BOTH OF U AND PEEHU FR SUCH A GREAT UPDATE...
UPDATE SOON!!🤣

Nafi, another baby

, itne jaldi. Besharam at least give abhiya some time to fulfil your wish😛. Ab I cant tell you the kinapper's mystery warna you'll spoil the surprise😛. And btw janu, kiss dene ke baad rofl kyu kar rahe ho??😆

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: flora212
ANJI THIS WAS SOO AWSOME...I LOVED IT!! U DESCRIVED EVERYTHING VERY NICELY...
I CANT BLAME ABHAY FR THIS SITUATION...YES I KNOW HE DID VERY MUCH WRONG BUT HE WAS IN SHOCK AND ABSORVED IN SOO MUCH DARKNESS THAT IT IS IMPOOSIBE TO COME OUT!! BUT STILL HE DID BAD TO PIA...WELL I FELT CRYING FR PIA!!! SHE REALLY WENT THROUGH HELL...I HOPE EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE AND SOMEHOW I FEEL THAT THE KIDNAPERS WERE FROM THE MAN WHAT NAME I FORGOT!! WHO HAD CRUSH ON PIA...YES YES GOT IT..ITS ADITIYA!!! I GUESS ADITIYA IS BEHIND ALL THESE...MAY BE I AM WRONG!!
NOW I WISH THAT U WILL GIVE US ANOTHER ABHIYA BABY...😆
AND HATS OFF TO BOTH OF U AND PEEHU FR SUCH A GREAT UPDATE...
UPDATE SOON!!🤣

Nafi, another baby😲, itne jaldi. Besharam at least give abhiya some time to fulfil your wish😛. Ab I cant tell you the kinapper's mystery warna you'll spoil the surprise😛. And btw janu, kiss dene ke baad rofl kyu kar rahe ho??😆

cause mujhe sharam arhi thi 🤣but now ...😉

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: mandy1024
U guys literally made me cry today 😭 Poor Pia, she went through hell n she was all alone 😭 Abhay was surely a jerk 😡 But he was human as well n its natural for him to have reacted this way for a while but he let it on a for a long time n now he stands to lose everything in his life. I dont really get y those monsters killed that lil child even though they got their ransom 😡 They are such 🤬 I am glad Pia poured it all out. Hopefully now Abhiya can try to rebuild their life together 😊 Wondeful job girls, I am loving this FF more n more with each passing update 🤗 Brilliant ⭐️

Thanks Mandy😊. Your appreciation means a lot to us. After all, you are a terrific writer😊. Now dont ask any more questions coz I already gave you a major spoiler. Stupid me! But I will still try my best to confuse you so that you cant guess the mystery😃

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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Oh dear, i read it thrice but still it seems not enough. My heart feels very heavy now . I feel like slapping Abhay He was so cold and merciless. i can understand he was broken and it made him numb but he should have been support for Pia which would help heal both of their wounds because the loss is equal for both. But to some extent Pia should have informed Abhay about the kidnap and not taken the risk alone. Sometimes situations are out of control and we cannot do anything about them and those b****** they took the money and killed the baby is there a motive behind dong that I mean was it on purpose or it was simply because of money?
Im happy Pia opened up and kind of accepted Abhay's support. Abhay should work hard and heal Pia and his own wounds now. 😳
Love this FF girls.. keep the up the great job 👏

Thanks Tanzie😊. I always look for your comment coz it gives me a lot of encouragment😊. Abhay made very wrong choices and it brought nothing but pain for both him and piya. Piya is also drowning in her pain and she isnt able to defend herself coz she also feels guilty in her heart.

Regarding the kidnappers, they killed Sneha coz she had seen their faces. They didnt want her revealing their identity to anyone

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: flora212

Nafi, another baby😲, itne jaldi. Besharam at least give abhiya some time to fulfil your wish😛. Ab I cant tell you the kinapper's mystery warna you'll spoil the surprise😛. And btw janu, kiss dene ke baad rofl kyu kar rahe ho??😆

cause mujhe sharam arhi thi 🤣but now ...😉

😳

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
😭😭😭Omg this is really sad 😭 😭
Peehu and Anjali you girls did a outstanding job by portraying their feeling and pain
Poor piya she bearer a lot
Abhay has beared the pain but he should not have pushed her away like this.
Those kidnappers😡😡 How could they kill the little girl after they got money.
Piya should have told abhay maybe he could have came there an perhaps sneak could have been alive.
Seeing sneha die front of her eyes is worst than a nightmare for piya
Is Tanya or that Aditya involved in the kidnapping because who else knew abhay had this amount of fortune.
Abhay will need to heal himself and piya.
Thanks for the pm

Thanks😊. The kidnappers were pros dear and that means they are rutheless. They dont think twice before killing even if its an innocent child. Sneha had seen their faces and to hide their identity they killed Sneha.

Abhiya will find their way back and they'll be together once again😊

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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lovely update.👏 Yes it was painful but beautiful. ⭐️ The feelings,unbearable pain,each n every single emotion was wonderfully depicted. 👍🏼
Poor pia had to undergo so much pain n she didnt even get abhay's support. what abhay did was nt right,Bt i wudnt blame abhay,as the pain was unbearable n he is a father aftral and sumtimes loss of dear one's make ppl too numb to react or undrstand anythng. Bt hopefully abhay is at pia's side nw,so am sure he would heal pia's wounds wth hs love. Bt y did thoz b*** kill sneha,wen thy gt the money already,tht i failed to undrstand. Was it due to sum revenge??!!
Must say the update ws awesome.👍🏼 It truly touchd my heart.loved it. 😊Wonderful job peehu n anji.🤗
Plz cntinue soon n thanks for the pm..😊
p.s. Sorry i ws unwell so cudnt cment on d previous updates.

Hey Indu😊. I hope your health if fine now. I so missed reading your ff updates! Thanks yaar, We are so happy you are liking the story😊. The kidnappers were heartless from the start. They had their reasons to kill Sneha. Abhay and Piya will now open up to each other, something they should have done long ago but better late than never😊

Originally posted by: 411996
hey yr awsm+emotinal update :'( !!!! thax fr pm!!! i was actually cring while reading! :'( poor pia!!!! kitna kuch sehna pda use!!!!! feeling bad fr sneha!!! tht bloody dogs, b*****d, kidnappers money to mil gya tha na then sneha ko kyu mara?!! bt nw finally abhay pia ke saath he!!! m happy fr them!!! next 1 update soon!!!

Thanks😊. The painful part of the story is over now and abhiya will now progress their broken relationship and they'll help each other heal from the past

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm
Wow wht an update aftr reading ths update i can feel the pain of pia how much she suffer from the loss of their daughter and cold behaviour of abhay
how much of the past is left to come now ???????
The update is to hreat braekinh and so emotional dear
yu have made me cry :-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(

The flashbacks are over now. Piya has let out all her pain and Abhay will help her heal now. We'll update soon😊

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
Amazing updt👏bth Pia & Abhay hav suffered so much

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
both are au equal loss_________ its jst dat abhay need to understand and hope now slowly every thing is fine...

Everything will slowly get better for abhiya😊

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
awsm update ...
so emotional ...

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: TeDylove
why i feel like sheena's death planning by someone close to abhiya?😕 but its really so painful for mother to see death of her daughter like this..😭 abhay did wrong but i know now he will make it 😛..so much pain pia store in her heart.. its really good now her heart free from some burden...😳

Not Sheena, Sneha. It was certainly painful for Piya and thats why she hasnt been able to heal coz she caged all her misery and didnt let it out. But everything will be fone for abhiya soon😊

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Very emotional update.I cldnt hold back my tears while reading.Those ********,they got the money.Then why did they kill Sneha?Poor pia...she had lockd up so much pain inside of her.How cld abhay blame...he behavd like a class A jerk.I hope he can mend pia's heart and get her back in his life again

He'll win back her heart now that Piya will give him a second chance😊

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
God i am crying now :'(
i was suspecting something happened to sneha but still... Oh god. How awful. And then abhay blamed pia...oh gods no wonder it went so bad. Still crying :(

Abhiya will get better after this😊. The painful part of the story is over😊

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
fab update.

it was too emotional.u really portrayed d pain so well. no words r enuf to say what kind f jerk abhay was & no matter hw mch he apologises he can't undone d pain he has given her.he actually doubled it.

Feel bad 4 sneha those ppl gt d money dan why did they kill her and why did pia didn't tell abhay about the kidnap?i do feel that the killing of sneha was deliberate and there's more to it.i do hope that they find out who were responsible for this?

Nw since abhay has realised his mistake ,he would rectify it bt dnt make pia 4give him easily.

Thanx 4 pm

Glad you liked it😊. All your questions will be answered gradually in the updates😊

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

When will you update the next part dear? 😳

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: smdosi
It was really heart wrenching dear..how much have Piya suffered...how could Abhay do this to her??? How could he blame her for killing her own child...I mean Get up smell the coffee...SHE HAS GIVEN BIRTH TO THAT BABY!!!!!!!!!!!! Bloody helll...while reading this i felt like to get up and break ABhay's head into million pieces...stupid moron!!
Newaz...awsum update...thnx 4d pm...update soon..

Abhay will repent his wrongs now and he'll make amends and help Piya heal from the pain of sneha's death and also the pain he gave her

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu
Brilli update!!u made me senti..
Dis kidnappers r such b******ds..how dey can kill an innocent child..
i could feel pia's pain while reading dis.poor her...she suffered like hell n abhay..i wish to kick him for blaming her..but sigh..he understood every aspect of her pain now..
Update soon..

Dont worry, Abhay will help Piya heal now😊. He'll make up for all the hurt he gave her

Originally posted by: ilove99
the kidnappers were such a 🤬
But i guess abhiya is at 1 and 2 in mistake,pia's 1 as she left a lil kid alone and didn't tell the father of that child that his child is kidnapped,maybe if she did sneha could have been saved.And abhay's mistake was his cold attitude,a month 2 months, 3months its ok...but a year is a big time!
i still don't want to kill abhay :) coz he's a father whose daughter died in an instant for him even before he can do this n that to save her!!!!in just a spur of the moment he would have came to know ,tht the lil smiling face he saw in the morning before going to office he'll never b able to see.
But on the other hand pia too couldn't b blamed as a mother would do anythng possible to save her child even if it means lying to the whole world or her husband itself!

But the last part reignited the hopes,and to me it seems like in a corner of her heart while pia tries to show herself rude and strong to cajole herself to new life ; pia still fears that abhay hates her for sneha's death and most importantly it matters to her,isn't it?!

The painful part is over thats the good news. Abhay and Piya both made mistakes but Abhay more than Piya. Piya's fault was circumstantial but Abhay's fault was almost unforgivable. But abhiya will find their way out of this😊. They'll go back to being the old abhay and Piya

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: shria
it was so emotional😭 how culd abhay blame piya😡😡
poor piya she suffered so much😭 abhay even left her for 4 months😡 while she needed him the most last part was good😳 just the the way u both have written it😉
continu soon...

Thanks😊. We'll update soon!

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
It is so pain full dear piya past ,ahbay was a jerk in her past ,but i must say it is well written this for pm

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
😭 anji and peehu, this was really a very touching update. and u made me cry.
but i m happy that finally abhay understood what Pia has gone through all this time. Now I hope that he takes good care of her and they both heal each other up and start their life afresh

They bot will be the old abhay and piya once again😊. It will just take a little more time