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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: lost_in_love



hey anji Lovely concept dear..🤗 loved the prologue! 😊 plz continue asap and do pm me when you update! 😳
and hw was ur xm dear? Havnt seen u 4 a long time!

hey Indu🤗, so happy you liked it yaar😊. I was busy with exams na so thats why I was gayab. We'll update soon😊

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome prologue

luvd it
cont soon
n please add me to ur pm list

will PM you Pari😊. Glad you liked the story😊

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

awesum prolouge👏

do continue it & pm me

hey sunita😊, we'll update soon and PM you

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awesome prologue, loved it yaar. pls continue it and add me in ur pm list

we will update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing prologue!👏
Do continue soon and plz add me 2 ur pm list

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey awesome prologue.Plz cont & do PM me😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awsm prologue...
waiting 4 fst chapter ...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i really love your ff prologue! please continue soon and ha add me in your ff please👏
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awesome prologue dear..continue soon and pm me...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

awesum prolouge👏

do continue it & pm me

hey sunita😊, we'll update soon and PM you



HEY DEAR MY NAME IS STUTI NOT SUNITA ITS OKAY FOR NOW BECOZ YU DONT KNOW MY REAL NAME THATS WHY YU CALLED ME BY MY MOTHERS NAME

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry I wont be able to reply to all the messages. Super busy with work! And sorry for posting the first update so late. Hope you guys enjoy the first update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1: Crossroads

(written by Peehu and me)
Abhay left office early that day for the first time in years. He was rushing to get home and jumped all the red lights on the way. He had to reach home to stop Piya from leaving the house. He couldn't let her go. She was his life, the only thing that had kept him sane through all the suffering that he had endured these past 2 years. He had already lost a lot, he couldn't stand to lose Piya as well. He swerved the car hard into the driveway and ran to the front door. He hesitantly put his hand on the door knob. He was afraid to face what may be waiting for him inside. He closed his eyes and prayed with all his life that Piya still hadn't left. He opened the door and ran inside shouting for Piya. The house was empty, she had left. Abhay sat down on the bed and held his head in his hands. The pain that now took over him was unbearable. He had messed up his life pretty bad. It was all his fault. He kept Piya away from him. He had abandoned her and used his work as an excuse to shun her away from his life. And now he was paying the price for that. All he wanted right now was to turn the clock back, to have Piya in his arms and never to let her go. He yearned to see her or at least her voice. He took out his mobile from his pocket and dialed Piya's cell. Her phone kept ringing and no one picked up. He called her 4 times more but no one picked up. He was really worried now. Where was she? Was she ok? Abhay then called her parent's house. Piya's mom picked up the phone.

Abhay- Hi mom, is Piya there? I need to speak to her.

Mrs. Dobriyal- So you finally found time out of your busy schedule to call Piya. Why did you even bother Abhay! You didnt seem to be bothered about her before!

Abhay closed his eyes- Mom, I am sorry. I know I have been unfair to Piya and have treated her badly but I never wanted her to leave. I love her!

Mrs. Dobriyal- Stop calling me mom Abhay. I don't want to have anything to do with you. You made my daughter miserable. There hasn't been one night when she didn't call me and cry on the phone. Remember what you said at the time you asked for her hand in marriage, you said you'll always keep her happy. You're a liar and the worst kind of husband any parent can expect for their daughter. Piya isn't here Abhay and even if she was, I wouldn't let her go through the pain of talking to you. At least let her live in peace now.

She then slammed down the phone in anger. Abhay face crumbled in pain. Piya's mom was right. Abhay couldn't be a good husband to Piya. But life cant be so cruel to him. He deserves a second chance with Piya. He had to find Piya and bring her back. And this time, he wouldn't let a single tear drop from her eyes. He closed his eyes and spoke with a voice deep with yearning,' Piya, where are you?'. Just then it occured to him; he knew where Piya might be.

Piya was back in her old apartment where she used to live before she got married to Abhay. She had spent her whole college life in this apartment. She was really proud of herself being the star student in her college and managing her little household here. She was carefree, independent; basically a free spirit till she met Abhay Raichand. All her life, she had only been responsible for herself but after she fell for Abhay, she made herself responsible for him too. She learned to adjust to his needs and put his happiness before hers. This is the reason she stayed with him even after he hurt her so much. Piya put down her suitcase on the sofa. Opening the suitcase, she took out an album. A picture is worth a thousand words; she came to appreciate this line now more than ever. The pictures in the album made her relive her all the happy memories of her marriage that she shared with Abhay. Everyday she would look through this album and remind herself of the old Abhay she had fallen in love with; the Abhay who could never see her cry, the Abhay who would take care of her little needs and always love her more and more each day. She would convince herself that Abhay would one day once again go back to being the old Abhay and stop hurting her. But she kept waiting for him to change but Abhay kept being cold to her and pushed her away. The hurt was too much to bear and even her love for him couldn't make up for that. She had to leave him; it was the only way she could stop reliving the nightmare their marriage had become every single day. She kept sifting through the album when she came across a picture of her...

The picture was taken on their first date. She kept looking at the picture and a tear rolled down her eyes. She could still remember their first meeting. It feels as if she met him just yesterday and got into their first fight'.

Piya came out of the shopping mall with lots of bags in her hand. She was talking on the phone with someone when suddenly she heard screaming and shouting of a girl nearby. People were gathered around the scene. She immediately cut the call and made the way towards the source to see what was happening.

Piya cut the crowd and saw a young girl in early 20s was shouting at top of her voice

"how dare you? How dare you do that? How can you even think of leaving me?"

" will you shut up tanya"

That was the first time when she noticed someone else with the girl. The voice was husky and the mere sound was sending shivers down her spine. She went forward to get the clear view of the source and thats when she saw him. He was clad in blue jeans and white shirt. He had rolled up his sleaves a little. Few top buttons were open from hia shirt giving her a clear view of well toned chest. He looked utterly handsome. She just froze looking at him.

" don't you dare tanya"

His voice broke her trance. What was happening here. Why was he shouting? Tanya! The girl's name was tanya.

" abhay raichand! You dare not leave me or I will make sure you regret this decision."

Abhay was furious. No one ever dared to talk to him like that- tanya oberoi! Do not talk to me that way and stop creating a scene. (turning to the crowd) don't you people have any other work? Leave us alone.

Everyone dispersed except piya. she didn't knew why but she wanted to know what was happening here. And this guy..abhay, whoever he was, why was he yelling like that.

"didn't you hear what I told? Leave us alone"

Piya realised she was still looking at him- what? Excuse me. This is a public place and every citizan has a right to freedom. I hope you know what that means?

Abhay narrowed his eyes- miss right to freedom! I absolutely know what that means but you have no right to eavesdrop someones private conversation.

Piya- are you mad? What was so private here? You both are fighting in the middle of the road and accusing me of eavesdropping

Tanya interrupted- hey miss know it all! Its between me and my boyfriend. You dare not interfere in it.

Abhay rolled his eyes," tanya for the last time, I am not your boyfriend. We have broken up a month ago so stop stalking me. (to piya) and you miss right to freedom, no one talks to abhay raichand that way. "

"and no one dares to talk to piya dobriyal that way!"

Abhay and piya both glared at each other. Piya first time noticed that the guy was not only handsome but also had world's best looking blue eyes. He definitely was a greek god. The eyes were mesmerizing.

Abhay too for the first time noticed her. She was beautiful clad in simple jeans and top with minimal makeup unlike others. Her hair was long and silky with little curls falling on her slender waist. Her eyes were brownish in shade. She looked so innocent but was also feisty at the same time. A smile crept on his lips.

Piya for the first time saw a slight smile on his face. he definitely looked more handsome while smiling- why are you smiling now?

" oh was i? I didn't knew it. I am just admiring the beauty in front of my eyes. (to Tanya) will you leave or do you want me to call the police now for the case of stalking?"

Tanya gritted her teeth and left saying," don't think this is over. You will regret leaving me"

"whatever, girls!", abhay rolled his eyes.

Abhay continued battling his eye lashes- so, where was i? yes, you are really beautiful!

"are you mad?"

"yes, for you"

"jerk". piya muttered in low voice while leaving

"I heard that", abhay yelled smiling

" good for you", piya struck her tongue out

Piya came out of her thoughts. More tears fell from her eyes. She loved him and still do. She kissed his picture which was in her hand and kept it aside.

"I never knew things will change so much for us abhay!" , she sighed

Hope you guys like the first update. Those who want PMs, please add the ID APPMLIST to your buddy list😊
Edited by anjali.K - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ah janu...really wonderful! Just wow...what actualy happened btw abhiya? I hope abhay reaches to pia soon!
Update soon.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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